广东省教育研究院2014年科研课题《初中英语写作教学的创新体验研究》最终成果
八年级下册Unit 5 What were you doing when the rainstorm came?写作教学案
（教师使用）
【话题】难忘的事件(Unforgettable events)
【写作目标】能运用本单元所学的语法（过去进行时）及语言材料，完成写作叙述过去发生的事情。
【课前任务】
一、写出下列短语。
1、昨晚 2、在那时 3、昨天这个时候 4、大雨 5、乌云 6、离开
参考答案：1.last night 2. at that time 3. this time yesterday 4. heavy rain 5.dark clouds 6.go away
二、根据汉语意思完成下列句子。
1、昨天晚上迈克来的时候我正在写作业。
I my homework when Mike last night.. 2、安正在看电视时，她父亲回来了。
While Ann TV, her father home. 3、我敲门的时候你在干什么？
What you when I ________ at the door? 4、我去看她的时候她不是在打扫房间。
She the room when I to see her. 5、我昨天晚上回来时，妈妈正在厨房做饭。
_______ I came back yesterday evening，my mother in the kitchen . 参考答案：1. was doing ,came 2. was watching, came 3. were , doing ,knocked 4. wasn’t cleaning ,went 5.When ,was cooking
三、写出与本话题有关的词汇和句型。
常用词汇：
on the way to… , go up to , leave for , fall asleep, die down , be late for,…
经典句型：
1.What were you doing at eight last night? I was taking a shower. 2. He was reading in the library when the rainstorm came.
3. While Linda was sleeping, Jenny was helping Mary with her homework. 4.The boy was still sleeping when his mother got home yesterday morning. 5. Amy was reading a book when I came in.
【课中任务】读写结合 一、A. 信息归纳
阅读下面短文，然后按照项目要求填写所缺信息。
My name is Zhu Hui. I have a great grandmother. She is a good doctor. She is very healthy although she is seventy years old. Last Saturday night, at about 7:30, I was having dinner with her when the telephone rang. The phone call was from a mother. The mother said her seven-year-old son had a high fever. She needed help. When my grandmother heard it, she stopped having dinner and drove to the mother’s home. Next what happened? While
人教版初中英语
1 单元话题写作指导
广东省教育研究院2014年科研课题《初中英语写作教学的创新体验研究》最终成果
I was sleeping, I seemed to hear my grandmother come back. It was 11:30 p.m. Oh, what a great and kind grandmother!
Information Card Who is a good doctor? Zhu Hui ’s (1)________ __ . What was I doing last Saturday night? What’s wrong with the son? What did my grandmother do when she heard it? I was(2) ______ ____ with my grandmother. He (3)______ ____ . She (4)____ _____ the mother’s home. What was I doing when my grandmother come I (5)______ ___ . back? 参考答案：1. grandmother 2. having dinner 3. had a high fever 4. drove to 5. was sleeping
B．赏析
找出上面材料中的好词好句。
Useful words: great, good ,although ,kind
Useful phrases: Last Saturday night, having dinner, had a high fever ,drove to ,come back Useful sentences: I was having dinner with her when the telephone rang.
When my grandmother heard it, she stopped having dinner and drove to the mother’s home While I was sleeping, I seemed to hear my grandmother come back
二、书面表达
请你根据下面提供的信息写一篇记叙文。
假设上周六你和你的朋友Maria约好去看电影。你去她家找她时，她正在到处找电影票。于是你帮她一块儿找。最后在她的课本中找到了。当你们急匆匆赶到电影院时，电影刚好开演。她和你都非常高兴没有错过这场精彩的电影。
1、写作引导：
A. 重点短语 写出下列短语。
1、看电影 2、寻找 3、票 4、最后 5、幸运的是 6、错过
参考答案：1.see a film 2. look for 3. ticket 4.at last 5.luckily 6.miss
B. 重点句型 根据汉语意思完成下列句子。 1、我到她家。 I ____________ ____________ her home.
2、我帮助她寻找票。 I ____________ her ____________ ____________ the ticket.
3、我们急匆匆赶到电影院。。 We ____________ ____________ the cinema. 4、当我们赶到电影院时，电影刚好开演。
When we ____________ ____________ ,the movie____________ just ____________ . 5、我们都非常高兴没有错过这场精彩的电影。
We____________ ____________ because we didn’t ____________ the wonderful film.
参考答案：1.got to 2.helped, look for 3.hurried to 4.got there, was ,on 5.were happy, miss
C. 写作技能指导
本单元写作涉及的话题是“叙述过去发生的事情”，写记叙文时应该把人物的经历、行为或事情的经过叙述出来，一般情况下多采用过去进行时，要合理安排好写作顺序。
人教版初中英语
2 单元话题写作指导
广东省教育研究院2014年科研课题《初中英语写作教学的创新体验研究》最终成果
D. 写作思路点拨
Ⅰ、介绍时间、人物和事件→ Last Saturday, Maria and I were going to……
Ⅱ、具体介绍事情发生的经过→ When I got to her home, she was looking for… I helped her to … At last ,we found…we hurried to…When we got there, the movie…
Ⅲ、事情结果→ We were happy because we didn’t miss…
2、实践写作（含小组讨论、改评修正、赏析作品） 【我的草稿】
【我的作品】
【我的订正】
3、参考范文
Last Saturday, my friend and I were going to see a film together. I got to her home at 6 p.m. When I entered her room, she was looking for the ticket. She looked very worried, so I helped her look for it. At last, we found it between the pages of her textbook. The movie was to start in ten minutes. We hurried to the cinema. Luckily, when we got there, the movie was just on. We were happy because we didn’t miss the wonderful film.
点评：作者能紧扣主题，叙述一件过去发生的事情，将文章写得条理清晰。So, at last, luckily等词 语的运用，使文章条理更清晰，给文章增添了几分文采。
【课后任务】读写结合 一、A. 信息归纳
阅读下面短文，然后按照项目要求填写所缺信息。
人教版初中英语 3 单元话题写作指导
广东省教育研究院2014年科研课题《初中英语写作教学的创新体验研究》最终成果
A little girl walked to and from school every day. Though it was not fine and clouds speared in the sky that morning, the little girl made her daily trip to school as usual. When school was over, winds became stronger and it began to rain.
The mother of the little girl felt worried that her daughter would be afraid when she walked home from school and that lightning （闪电）might frighten her child . Following the bright light of lightning, the mother quickly got into her car and drove to her child's school.
As the mother drove along the road, she saw her little girl walking alone in the rain. To her great surprise, she found that when a lightning came, her daughter stopped, looked up and smiled. Another lightning came and then another followed. With each lightning, the little girl stopped, looked up and smiled.
Inside the car, the mother asked her daughter, \the lightning came?\felt a little afraid walking in the rain, god would take a picture of me. I knew he was playing a game with me.\
Information Card 1.The little girl goes to school every day. 2. The weather was that day. 3. The mother felt worried that her daughter would when she walked home from school. 4. The little girl and smile when the lightning came. 5. According to the article, we can know that the little girl was . 参考答案：1.on foot 2. rainy 3. be afraid 4.looked up 5. brave B．书面表达 请你根据下列内容要点，写一篇80词左右的短文。 1、Zhang Ming是一个13岁的小男孩，乐于助人； 2、一天他正在街上行走时，突然乌云密布，下起了雨，他很高兴带了伞； 3、看见一个小女孩在前面慢慢走，没伞，全身湿透了； 4、走上前去为小女孩撑伞，并送她回家； 5、小女孩非常感谢她，但他笑着离开了。 参考范文：
Zhang Ming is a 13-year-old boy. He is very kind. He is always ready to help others. One day, he was walking in the street, suddenly dark clouds were gathering（聚集） in the sky. Soon it began to rain heavily. He was happy because he had an umbrella with him. Then he saw a little girl walking slowly in front of him. The girl didn’t have an umbrella, and she was wet all over .Zhang Ming went up to her and held the umbrella for her. Soon they got to the girl’s house. The girl was very thankful .But with a smile, Zhang Ming went away.
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人教版初中英语
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