A 一个词： ●Great! / Nice! / Perfect! / Good! / Very good! / Wonderful! / Correct! / Excellent! / Careless! / Unclear! / Untidy!
B. 短语 ： ●Well done! / Neat and tidy!
/ Very nice! /Quite correct! /Quite OK (Okay)! /Well-written! /Just so- so. /Far from correct. /So careless!
C. . 语气 ： ● Your English is excellent. ●
I wish you would work harder. ● How I wish you would be more careful. ● Pay attention to your spelling
E. 句型 ： ●That's OK! / That’s all right!
/ That's wrong. What a good job you have done! /What a good boy you are! / ●How carefully you've worked! /How nice your work is! ●Now you can do better than before. ●Your handwriting is excellent! ●Your English will become better if you work harder. ● It is clever of you to do so. /It's nice of you to say so. /It's careless of you to write this way. ●You've done so nicely. /You've made such a careless mistake! ●Try to do better next time! /See what you've done! / Correct your mistakes. /Don't do that again! ● I find you've made a lot of progress! I think you
can work more carefully next time. I' m sorry you've made so many mistakes in your work. ● Your handwriting is not so nice as Maggie's. You've done better than last time. You can do best of all if you try harder. F . 段落 ： ●Although you have not been successful, you have done better than ever Success belongs to the diligent learners. I am sure you will make more and more progress if you keep on practicing your spoken English. G. “What a beautiful handwriting! If only be more careful!” （多漂亮的书法呀！要是作业再仔细一点就好了！） “Well done! But would you please improve your handwriting?” （做得很好！再设法改善一下你的书 法怎么样？） “I'm so glad to see your great progress in your exercises.” （你的作业进步这么大，我真高兴！ ） “I'm pleased that you have made so great progress now. Thank you! （很高兴看见你现在取得 这么大的进步。谢谢你！） “Try again; I'm sure you will do better next time!” （再努一把力！相信你下次会做得更好！） “Well done! Try to be better next time, will you?” （真棒！争取下次更好，行吗？） “If only your handwriting were better! ” （要是你的字能写工整点该多好啊！ ） “How I wish you did your homework all by yourself! I
think you can!” （我多希望你能自己 完成作业啊！我相信你能做到。 ） “Would you please pay attention to???” （请你注意??好吗？） “I'm afraid you used Chinglish here, do you think so?” （恐怕你在这儿用的是中国式英语， 你说呢？） （ “Chinglish ”是 “Chinese English” 的幽默说法） “I’ve found your handwriting is better than before. Thank you!” （我已发现你的字比以前 好了，谢谢你！） “Wonderful in spite of a few mistakes! You have made progress now!” “ I believe you can do it better next time! ” “ You must believe in yourself! ” “ You have made much progress ， work harder and you will realize your dream. ” “ Excellent! ” “ Perfect! ”
Well done! It’s excellent you haven't made any mistakes, but it’s much better to be creative. 而对那些中等程度的学生，就要抓住优点，用略为夸张的感叹句进行肯定和赞扬，顺带提出希望，这样效果较好。例如，对字迹工整、认真但作业却有错，或是作业基本正确但书写不够工整、认真的学生，笔者的批语是What a beautiful handwriting! If only be more careful! Well done! But would you please improve your handwriting?
这类评语富有感情，能打动学生的心，而
且他们认为老师已看到且承认了他们的努力进步，为获得更多表扬，通常会努力做得更好。 2.真诚的鼓励性的评语
心理学认为，每个人都有被赏识的欲望。通过赏识、鼓励，一旦潜在的积极向上的心理动机被激发出来，他们具有的潜能将如火山喷发一样，淋漓尽致地发挥出他们的本色。学生更是如此，他们更需要受到不断地鼓励，以展开奋飞的翅膀，增加前进的信心。笔者经常会在学生的作业本上写这样的评语：
You have made great progress! Good job! Congratulations! I wish you success in the coming examination. 等等。
尤其是学习后进生，经常得到老师真诚的关爱，学生会产生一种积极向上的情感动力，促其奋进。因此写评语时，要客观、公正地对待每个学生，更应该注意他们的点滴进步，及时给予鼓励，并保持一定的连续性。例如： I have found your handwriting is better than before. Thank you!
Don't lose heart! Failure is the mother of success.
Where there is a will, there is a way.
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