Alipay, bicycle-sharing, and online shopping, which have added great convenience to daily life. As for me, I choose to talk about online shopping because I believe it has made traditional stores nearly obsolete.
With easier access to the Internet and wider use of mobile payment, online shopping has gained much popularity. This has caused the public to form different consumption habits, me included, of course. I seldom shop at brick-and-mortar shops now. What I often purchase online is clothing and stationery. There are various items for me to choose from. The easy access to consumer reviews helps me make informed purchases. Also, shopping online helps me save time and money.
Online shopping is a phenomenon that almost everyone has experienced in his or her life; and the reality is that it will only become more popular in the future. Although there’s nothing quite like the convenience of shopping online, we should make sure our privacy and security are never at risk. 【解析】 【分析】
按照题目要求，写一篇议论文。选择一项中国“新四大发明”并做简单介绍。 【详解】第一步：整理题目要点
①交代“中国新四大发明”的背景（整体的介绍）；②提出自己想要说明的对象（本文作者介绍的是网络购物）③说明网络购物对生活的影响；④并简述你对这件事的看法。 第二步：准备关键词
根据关键要点，确定关键词，Chinese technological innovations中国技术改革；earn a reputation as作为……赢得赞誉；make traditional stores nearly obsolete让传统商店几乎过时；brick-and-mortar shops实体店；the easy access to容易获得；privacy and security隐私和安全等。
第三步：确定文章使用的时态，说明事实，应用一般现在时或现在完成时。 第四步：根据提示及关键词进行遣词造句，注意语法和词法的使用。
第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过度，使之自然通畅。根据文章要点可以将文章分为三段。
【点睛】范文结构清晰，内容完整，过渡衔接谨慎自然，符合书信的要求，不乏亮点的表达。 主语从句：What I often purchase online is clothing and stationery.
定语从句：Online shopping is a phenomenon that almost everyone has experienced in his or her life;…
表语从句：the reality is that it will only become more popular in the future 固定句型：there’s nothing quite like…
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