专题09 短文改错
1、【2019全国 I 卷】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（\\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I became interesting in playing football thanks to a small accident. One afternoon where I was in primary school, I was walking by the school playground. Suddenly football feel just in front of me but almost hit me. I stopped the ball and kicked it hardly back to the playground. To everyone`s surprising, the ball went into the net. All the football player on the playground cheered loudly, say that I had a talent for football. From now on, I started to play my football with classmates after school. I am a good player now.
2、【2019全国 II 卷】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（\\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Since I was a kid, I`ve considered different job I would like to do. First, I wanted to be a fireman, whose uniform looked so coolly. Then, when I was in the five grade, I wanted to be a teacher because I liked my English teacher too much. When I studied chemistry high school, I reconsidered mg goal or decided to be a doctor. They were two reasons for the decision. One was that I was amazing at the fact that
a sick person could feel much more better after seeing a doctor. And the other is that I wanted to help people in need.
3、【2019全国 III 卷】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（\\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I've had many dreams since I was a child. Now my dream is to opens a cafe. Though it may appear simple, it required a lot of ideas and efforts. What I want is not just an ordinarily cafe but a very special one. I want my cafe have a special theme such as like \historical environment what is created for them. If I succeed in manage one, I will open more. I wish to have a chain of cafes in many different city. Each of my cafes will have a different theme and an unique style.
二、2019届全国各名校模拟试题
4、【 四川省凉山州2019届高中毕业班第一次诊断性检测】下面短文中有 10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(夷),并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除:把多余的词用斜线(\\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。 Mr. Johnson
always spends too much time on
his
work. With
little sleep and hardly no break, so he works from morning
till night. Hard work have made him seriously ill. “He has ruined
his
healthy,
and
we
are
worried about him.” This is which other teachers say. Yesterday I paid visit to him. I was eager to see him, but outside her room, I stopped to calm myself down. Quietly I step into the room. I saw him lie in bed, looking at some of the picture we had
taken together. I
understood that he missed us just as many as we missed him.
5、【 山西省太原市2019年高三二轮复习英语模拟考试】下面短文中有 10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(夷),并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除:把多余的词用斜线(\\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。
Dream is a common word in our daily life. As we all know, people like to use it to express the strong desires they have for our future. Some young people dreamed of becoming scientists when others wish to become astronauts.
In my opinion, what matter most is that we should be responsible our society and its citizens. I want to be independent and have a strongly sense of responsibility. And also I want to be helpful to those in the trouble. Beside, I will learn modestly from those devoted themselves to our society. I do hope all of us can make every efforts to live our dreams.
6、【河北省保定市2019届高三10月摸底考试】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除:把多余的词用斜线(\\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Friday, our class invited a old craftsman to teach us how make dough figurines (面人). First, he show us the basic steps and making techniques. We stood around him but watched attentively. Then he started to have a try. He walked around and helped us patient when necessary. Finally, all of us had our own work and we took pictures for our hand-made figurines excitedly. Looked at these lifelike figurines, we were all felt happy.
7、【广东省深圳实验，珠海一中等六校2019届高三第二次联考英语】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。作文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除:把多余的词用斜线(\\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I always have a dream to be a fluency speaker. Therefore, I am too shy to say a word in public. What is beyond my wildest imagination is fortune should bless me with a chance to realize my dream. One day, my English teacher asked me to go to her office and told us that I was given an opportunity to participate in an English speaking competition. Hear this, I could hardly hide my excitement. When making preparation for the competition, I write my speech carefully. I discussed it with my teacher and got many advice on how to improve it after I finished the composition. Under the help of my English teacher, I made a great progress.
8、【2019届江西省吉安市高三上学期五校联考】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除:把多余的词用斜线(\\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词:
2.只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。
I’m a senior student and I’m now in the need of your help although I can’t stand the great pressure. Every day I have to have lesson at school for nine hours and spend at least three to four hours doing my homework at home. Our teenagers are eager to play and enjoy ourselves, but we hardly have any time to do that we want. Beside, we don’t even have enough sleepy. There seem to have three cases about the overload: the pressure of examinations, too many homework and high expectations from the parents. We often warned that if we don’t do our best we won’t have the chance to go to university. The pressure often makes me awake at night.
9、【 安徽省江淮十校2019届高三第二次联考】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在下面写出该加的词。 删除:把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last summer my dream of visiting Chicago came true. I took trip there on my own, what got me thinking about the advantages of travelling alone. Something that I noticed immediately was the fact that I had the free to do what I wanted. After all, I don’t have to consider another person’s interest. While in Chicago, I got involving in a couple of workshops. During these workshops, we got the chance to talk with the local people. Days late, I went to the theatre alone and found myself having a conversation about travel with the lady sit beside me. To be honest, these conversations wouldn’t have been happened if I had travelled without a friend.
10、【 安徽省江淮十校2019届高三第二次联考】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除:把多余的词用斜线(\\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Miss Zhang is one of my most favorite teachers. She has a slim build and always ties his hair in a ponytail. She is 35, but she looks quite young at her age. Which impresses me most is Miss Zhang's way of teaching. She devotes herself to teach and prepares well for every class. Not only did she help us to understand ¨what\she explores \She encourages us to think independent and have discussions among ourselves when we faced with problems. She is such a inspiring person with a strong sense of responsibilities, and we all respect and admire her.
11、【 广东省2019届高三六校第一次联考】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。作文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除:把多余的词用斜线(\\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
When I was young, I was terribly poor in Chinese. Be afraid of expressing myself was one of the reasons that I rarely did well in school. I once failed in a mid-term exam. When I got the papers, I realized things could have been better if I listened to the teacher much more attentive. So I turned to my teacher for helps
and he told me, “Where there is a will, there is a way. If we are devoted to learning Chinese, you’ll make it.” I couldn’t agree much. From then on, I began to work harder. Out of my expect, I made a great progress soon. Today, Chinese is where my strength lies. And I’m grateful for my Chinese teacher.
12、【河南省名校联盟2018-2019学年上学期高2019届高三年级尖子生11月调研考试】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除:把多余的词用斜线(\\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。 The charity shop around the corner has a few volunteers. They’re some locals who can’t find jobs or have learning or other difficulty. As I know how important it is of them to feel respected and appreciated, I took the time to talk to them.
Yesterday, it came to his notice that one of them had the sadness in his eyes. Approached him I thanked him for his work here. In spite of his condition he was respectfully. I stayed for a while and we talked a lot. They were clearly happy be noticed. I have no idea that their stories are and what they may be going through, yet I hope this little bit of kindness helped them.
答案以及解析
1、答案及解析： 答案：I became
interesting in playing football thanks to a small accident.
interested
One afternoon
where I was in primary school, I was walking by the school playground. whenSuddenly
?but football fell just in front of me almost hit me. aandhardly back to the playground. To everyone’s hardI stopped the ball and kicked it
surprisingplayer, the ball went into the net. All the football on the playground
surpriseplayerscheered loudly,
nowsay that I had a talent for football. From on, I started
sayingthento play my football with classmates after school. I am a good player now. 解析：1. 考查形容词用法。“interest（使感兴趣；使关注）”的形容词有interesting（使人感兴趣的）常修饰物；与interested（表现出兴趣的）常修饰人。本句的意思为：多亏一个偶然的事件，我对踢足球产生了兴趣。主语是I，故将interesting改为interested。 2. 考查定语从句。先行词one afternoon表示时间在定语从句中作状语，所以关系词使用when。故将where改为when。
3. 考查冠词。名词football为可数名词，前边需要有限定词。这里football第一次出现，故在football前加a。
4. 考查连词。句意：突然一个足球落在我前边并且差点打到我。“足球落下来”与“打到我”两个动作是顺承关系，不是转折关系。故将but改为and。
5. 考查副词。“hard（努力地；费力地）”与“hardly（几乎不；几乎没有）”都为副词，但是词义不同。本句意思为：我挡住足球，并使劲地将它踢回操场。故将hardly改为hard。 6. 考查固定搭配。“to one’s + 名词”在句中表示结果，“to one’s surprise”意思为“使某人惊讶的是…”。故将surprising改为surprise。
7. 考查名词的数。“player（运动员）”为可数名词，所以all（所有的）后需要用player的复数形式。故将player改为players。
8. 考查现在分词。本句句意：操场上所有的足球运动员大声欢呼，说我有足球天赋。句中谓语动词为cheered，say在这里作伴随状语。与主语players是主动关系，故将say改为saying。
9. 考查固定搭配。句意：从那时开始，我放学后跟同学一起踢足球。且“from now on（从现在开始）”后边句子应该表示从现在开始所发生的动作或存在的情况，不能用一般过去时。此处后面是一般过去时，表示“从那时起”是from then on，故将now改为then。 10. 考查固定搭配。“踢足球”的英语表达为“play football”，中间不能加冠词或者代词。故将my去掉。
2、答案及解析： 答案：
Since I was a kid, I’ve considered different
job I would like to do. First, jobscoolly. Then, when I was in the coolI wanted to be a fireman, whose uniform looked so
toofive grade, I wanted to be a teacher because I liked my English teacher much.
very/sofifthor decided to andTheyamazingbe a doctor. were two reasons for the decision. One was that I was
ThereamazedWhen I studied chemistry in/athigh school, I reconsidered mg goal
at the fact that a sick person could feel much more better after seeing a doctor. And the other 解析：
这是一篇记叙文。作者讲述了从小到大自己的职业梦想随着求学经历不断改变的过程。 1. 考查名词的数。“job(工作;职业)”为可数名词,用different(不同的)修饰时意思为不同种类的工作,应该用名词的复数形式。故将job改为jobs。
2. 考查形容词的用法。句中的“looked(看起来…样)”为系动词,系动词后需用形容词作表语。故将coolly改为cool。
3. 考查序数词。年级、班级是按数字顺序排列的,所以“在几年级”中的数词需要用序数词。故将five改为fifth。
4. 考查副词。句意:在五年级的时候,因为我非常喜欢我的英语老师,所以我想变成一名老师。“so much”在句中一般表达肯定意思,可与that连用表示“如此…以至于”。而“too
is that I wanted to help people in need. was
much”表太多,一般与to搭配,表达否定意思“太…以至于不能…”。本句话表达肯定意思,非常so much 或very much,故将too改为very/so。
5. 考查介词。“在高中”需要用介词in或者at,故在high school前加in/at。
6. 考查连词。句意:在高中学化学的时候,我重新考虑了自己的目标并决定变成一名医生。 “重新考虑”与“决定变成一名医生”之间是顺承关系,不是选择关系。故将or改为and。 7. 考查there be句型。句意:有两个原因可以解释这个决定。句中的they在前边句中找不到指代关系,且后边句子中的one与the other是对这两个原因的解释。故将they改为there。
8. 考查形容词用法。“amaze(使惊奇;使惊愕)”形容词形式有amazed(大为惊奇)与amazing(令人大为惊奇的)。本句话中主语为I,句意:病人看完医生就会感觉好很多,对此我感到惊奇,而不是我令别人惊奇。故将amazing改为amazed。
9. 考查形容词比较级。句中better为well(健康;身体好)的比较级形式,多音节的形容词或副词构成比较级用more 加形容词或副词,即more不能与berrer连用。故将more去掉。 10. 考查一般过去时。本篇文章使用的全是一般过去时,且与最后一句并列的“one was that…”用的也是一般过去时,所以最后一句话时态应为一般过去时。讲述当时做决定时的原因。故将is改为was。
3、答案及解析： 答案：
I’ve had many dreams since I was a child. Now my dream is to
opens a cafe. openThough it may appear simple, it s. What I want is not just an
required a lot of ideas and effort
requires?ordinarily cafe but a very special one. I want my cafe
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yourselveswhat in the historical environment is created for
themselvesthat/whichthem. If I succeed in
manage one, I will open more. I wish to have a chain of ca
managingfes in many different
city. Each of my cafes will have a differencitiest theme and
an unique style. a解析：1. 本句考查不定式的用法。不定式做表语，to后用动词原形。故把 opens改为 open。2. 本句考查动词的时态。短文的主体时态都是现代时。故把 required改为 requires。3. 本句考查形容词的用法。修饰名词cafe，应用形容词。ordinarily 是副词。故把 ordinarily改为 ordinary。
4. 本句考查动词的固定搭配。want sb to do sth“ 想要某人做某事”。故在have前加to。5. 本句考查介词的用法。such as和like都是用来举例子，重复了。故把like删除。6. 本句考查代词的用法。customers是句子的主语，故把 yourselves改为 themselves。7. 本句考查定语从句。先行词environment 在从句中做主语，指物，关系代词用
that/which。故 把what改为that/which。8. 本句考查动词的固定搭配。succeed in doing something“成功的做了某事”。故把manage 改为managing。
9. 本句考查名词的用法。many different后跟可数名词的复数形式。故把city改为cities。 10. 本句考查冠词的用法。an用在元音音素前，a用在辅音因素前。unique是以辅音音素开头的单词，前用a。故把an改为a。
4、答案及解析： 答案：
Mr. Johnson always spends too much time on his work. With little sleep and hardly no break, so he works from morning till night. Hard work
have made him seriously ill. “He has has
healthy , and we are
healthwhichworried about him.” This is other teachers say. Yesterday
whatruined his
? visit to him. I was eager to see him, but outside I paid astep her room, I stopped to calm myself down. Quietly I
steppedhisinto the room. I saw him
lie in bed, looking at some of the lyingpicture we had taken together. I
picturesunderstood that he missed us just as 解析：略
5、答案及解析：
答案： Dream is a common word in our daily life. As we all know, people like to use it to express the strong desires they have for
many as we missed him. muchour future. Some young people theirdreamedwhenof becoming scientists others wish to become astronauts.
dreamwhilematter In my opinion, what most is that we should be responsible for
mattersour society and its citizens. I want to be independent and have a
stronglysense
strongof responsibility. And also I want to be helpful to those in the trouble.
devotedBeside, I will learn modestly from those themselves to our
devotingBesideseffortsto live our dreams.
effortsociety. I do hope all of us can make every 解析：略
6、答案及解析： 答案：
Last Friday, our class invited figurines (面人). First, he
a old craftsman to teach us how to make dough anshowus the basic steps and making techniques. We
showedbut hestood around himwatched attentively. Then started to have a try. He walked
andwearound and helped us
patient when necessary. Finally, all of us had our own
patientlyforLookedwork and we took pictures our hand-made figurines excitedly. at
Lookingofworksthese lifelike figurines, we were all felt happy. 解析：略
7、答案及解析： 答案：
I always have a dream to be a to say a word in public. What is
speaker. , I am too shy
beyond my wildest imagination is fortune
should bless me with a chance to realize my dream. One day, my English teacher asked me to go to her office and told
that I was given an opportunity to participate
in an English speaking competition. this, I could hardly hide my
excitement. When making for the competition, I my speech
carefully. I discussed it with my teacher and got advice on how to improve
it after I finished the composition. a great progress. 解析：略
8、答案及解析：
the help of my English teacher, I made
答案：
I’m a senior student and I’m now in the need of your help stand the great pressure. Every day I have to have
although I can’t
becauselesson at school for nine hours
lessonsOurand spend at least three to four hours doing my homework at home. teenagers
Wethatare eager to play and enjoy ourselves, but we hardly have any time to do we
whatwant.
sleepyBeside have, we don’t even have enough . There seem to three cases
sleepBesidesbemany homework and high
muchabout the overload: the pressure of examinations, too
expectations from the parents. We are often warned that if we don’t do our best we won’t have the chance to go to university. The pressure often makes me awake at night. 解析：略
9、答案及解析： 答案：
? there on Last summer my dream of visiting Chicago came true. I took trip amy own,
what got me thinking about the advantages of travelling alone. Something
whichthat I noticed immediately was the fact that I had the
free to do what I wanted.
freedomdon’t have to consider another person’s interest. While in Chicago,
didn'tinvolvingweI got in a couple of workshops. During these workshops, got the
involvedIlatechance to talk with the local people. Days , I went to the theatre alone and
laterAfter all, I
found myself having a conversation about travel with the lady
sit beside me.
sittingTo be honest, these conversations wouldn’t have been happened if I had travelled without a friend. with
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10、答案及解析： 答案：
Miss Zhang is one of my most favorite teachers. She has a slim build and always ties
athis hair in a ponytail. She is 35, but she looks quite young her age.
forherWhich impresses me most is Miss Zhang's way of teaching. She devotes herself to Whatteach did and prepares well for every class. Not only she help us to
teaching doesunderstand ¨what\
independent and have discussions among ourselves when we are faced with
independentlyproblems. She is such
responsibilitiesa inspiring person with a strong sense of ,
responsibilityanand we all respect and admire her. 解析：略
11、答案及解析： 答案：
When I was young, I was terribly poor in Chinese. expressing myself was one of the reasons
Be
afraid of Being
that I rarely did well in school. I once whyfailed in a mid-term exam. When I got the papers, I realized things could have been better if I hadlistened to the teacher much more teacher for
attentive. So I turned to my
attentivelyhelpswe and he told me, “Where there is a will, there is a way. If helpyoumuch
. From more
are devoted to learning Chinese, you’ll make it.” I couldn’t agree
then on, I began to work harder. Out of my
expect, I made a great progress soon.
expectationfor my Chinese teacher. toToday, Chinese is where my strength lies. And I’m grateful 解析：略
12、答案及解析： 答案：
The charity shop around the corner has a few volunteers. They’re some locals who can’t find jobs or have learning or other
difficulty. As I know how important
difficuliesit is
oftook them to feel respected and appreciated, I the time to talk to them. fortakehis notice that one of them had the sadness in his eyes. myYesterday, it came to
Approachedhere him I thanked him for his work . In spite of his condition he
Approachingtherewas
respectfully. I stayed for a while and we talked a lot. They were clearly
respectfulthat their stories are and what they may whathappy to be noticed. I have no idea
be going through, yet I hope this little bit of kindness helped them. 解析：略
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