In a word， following these safety rules above can make us live in peace． （总结升华文章主题．）
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十一、书面表达分A、B两部分，A部分10分，B部分20分．文中不能出现本人及所在学校、乡（镇]、县（区）的相关信息，凡抄袭试卷上原句不给分．请把答案写在答题卡相应位置．
76．（30分）下面是一篇未写完的短文，请认真阅读，为短文写一个30﹣40词的结尾，使短文连贯完整．
One day，a boy went home happily．He sang and looked everywhere．On the way home，he had to walk past a forest．And he knew it was dangerous for him to walk past it by himself． B．知恩，感恩是人类的美德，在我们的学习生活中，我们要感谢的人很多很多．请你以A Person I Want to Thank 为题写一篇英语短文． （一）写作要点提示
1．感谢对象（父母、老师、朋友或同学等）． 2．他（她）或者他们对你的帮助． 3．如何感动你的． 4．表达感激之情． （二）写作要求
短文应紧扣要点，但不要逐字翻译，可适当发挥，以使短文衔接、连贯，词数控制在80﹣100词．
【分析】【高分句型一】
①When I am in trouble，she always ②encourages me to face my difficulties and gives me good
advice．当我处在困境中时，她总是鼓励我面对困难并给我好的建议． ①when引导的时间状语从句，in trouble 处于困境 ②encourage sb to do sth 鼓励某人做某事 【高分句型二】
I still remember①that once I failed in an important English exam and was upset she ②cheered me up and told me some good ways ③to improve my English．我仍然记得一次重要的英语考试，我没考及格，非常沮丧，她让我振奋起来并告诉我一些提高英语的好方法． ①that引导的宾语从句，作为remember的宾语． ②cheer up 使振奋
③动词不定式作为目的状语． 【解答】A Person I Want to Thank
In my junior school life，a lot of people have helped me．I thank them very much．But the person I want to thank most is my English teacher﹣﹣Ms Lee．（感谢的人是谁）
My English teacher Ms Lee is very kind and easygoing．She helps me a lot．She takes good care of us．She often helps me with my English．When I am in trouble，she always encourages me to face my difficulties and gives me good advice．【高分句型一】I still remember that once I failed in an important English exam and was upset she cheered me up and told me some good ways to improve my English．【高分句型二】With her help，I made great progress in English and became increasingly interested in it．（如何帮助和感动的）
I'm very thankful for all that she has done for me．I'll try my best to live up to her expectations．（感激之情）
【点评】写自己最想感谢的人，学生比较有话说，但是要注意提示要点一定写全．同时还要
注意遣词造句的灵活性和语法规则的正确性．写作时，要注意谓语动词形式的变化．另外，还需要使用一些句型和短语，使整篇短文意思连贯，表达流畅．
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