them. The theory is simple: trust is the lock — communication is the key.
[写作步骤]
第一步：归纳主旨大意
主旨大意：本文是议论文。作者通过讲述自己青少年时期的经历及自己做了母亲后与孩子的互动，论述了应该如何成为合格的父母。
短文结构分析：全文分为四个部分。
第一部分(第一段)：父母抱怨处于青春期的孩子不和自己交流； 第二部分(第二、三段)：父母不要被青春期孩子的表面做法所迷惑；
第三部分(第四、五、六段)：我青少年时期的家庭成长环境以及我为人母之后的做法； 第四部分(第七段)：如何成为好的父母。 第二步：提炼关键词
1.I often hear parents say, “My child does_not_tell_me_anything.” Part 1： 2．Children go through certain periods, particularly during their adolescent years. 3.Adolescence, the period of children's life when they are most vulnerable to outside_influences,_is a relatively scary_time for Part 2： parents. 4．Children of this age become the_target_of_many_negative_influences while at the same time they are experiencing hormones that are raging out of control. 5.I knew the importance of Part 3： establishing_open_communication_and_trust,_which resulted in my proper reactions and my children's trust. 6．My children can freely share with me what_happened in their lives. 7.Everyone hopes for good_relationships with their children, and Part 4： everyone can have them. 8．The theory is simple: trust is the lock — communication is the key. 第三步：合并和改写 1．要点1和2
合并：Many parents feel puzzled at their children's behavior when they go through certain periods, particularly during their adolescent years.
改写：Many parents feel puzzled about what_to_do_with their adolescent children.
2．要点3和4
合并：Adolescence is a relatively scary time for parents because it is likely that children of this age are influenced by hormones and something negative.
改写：Adolescence is scary for parents because their children are_likely_to be influenced by hormones and something negative.
3．要点5和6
合并：It is important to establish open communication and trust, and children can freely share with us what happened in their lives.
改写：To solve the problem, parents should know their children's true_thoughts and needs clearly.
4．要点7和8
合并：The two important factors in building good relationships with their children for parents are trust and communication.
改写：Trust_and_communication are two important factors in building good relationships with their children for parents.
第四步：核查成文
核查连贯性，优先考虑使用最短连接词；核查标点和语法；核查词数。最终成文如下： Many_parents_feel_puzzled_about_what_to_do_with_their_adolescent_children._(
要
点
1)Adolescence_is_scary_for_parents_because_their_children_are_likely_to_be_influenced_by_hormones_and_something_negative._(
要
点
2)_In_fact,_to_solve_the_problem,_parents_should_know_their_children's_true_thoughts_and_needs_clearly._(
要
点
3)_Trust_and_communication_are_two_important_factors_in_building_good_relationships_with_their_children_for_parents._(要点4)
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