16．把every child改写成all children以和their呼应。 这是一篇尚好的作文。
有很多基本的结构错误，词汇贫乏，因此等级不高。但是，本文构思得当，疑问句的使用具有创造性，增添了文章的可读性和结构的变化性。 高分作文秘诀之十三：写出引人入胜的开头。 1．使用能激起读者好奇心的句子。例如：
When she got up that morning，she would never have thought she’d be spending the night in prison. 2．使用一些逸闻趣事。例如：
My father used to dress up as Santa Claus every Christmas.For years we had to pretend we didn’t know it was him!
3．使用一些令人惊讶、印象深刻或震惊的事实或数据。例如： Half of all marriages in the UK end in divorce. 4．使用疑问句。例如：
Have you ever had the feeling that someone was following you?
2020;2020年9月3日，武汉某高校新生开学报到。一位“富家女”来校时，父母陪同，豪华车接送，配备了两名专职导游，还携带了19箱行李，惊人的场面使同学们目瞪口呆。同学们对此看法不一，观点如下： 观点一：享受优越的家庭条件带来的便利不是错。 观点二：不利于培养独立生活的能力。
请你据此写一篇120词左右的英语短文，介绍大家的观点，并谈谈自己的看法。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考范文：
On September 3,2020;2020，a freshman came to a university in Wuhan in a luxurious car together with her parents，two professional guides and 19
suitcases of clothes and toys. This really surprised all her schoolmates present.
Different attitudes are held by the students towards the girl’s behavior. Some think that it is not wrong of her to enjoy the convenience of favorable family conditions，while others hold the view that it is against the development of independent living skills.
As far as I’m concerned，college students are no longer children and therefore should learn how to live on their own. They should experience challenges and hardships and get mentally prepared for their future life. Only in this way can they succeed in their future career and become useful to society. 高考考纲词汇记忆 重点单词
companion [k?m?p?n??n] n. 同伴；同事 company [?k?mp?n?] n. 公司
compare [k?m?pe?(r)] vt. 比较，对照 compass [?k?mp?s] n. 罗盘，指南针 compensate [?k?mpense?t] v. 补偿，弥补 compete [k?m?pi?t] vi. 比赛，竞赛
competence [?k?mp?t?ns] n.能力,胜任,管辖权 competition [k?mp??t??(?)n] n. 比赛，竞赛 competitor [k?m?pet?t?(r)] n. 竞赛者，比赛者 complete [k?m?pli?t] a. 完成vt. 完成，结束 complex [?k?mpleks]a. / n. 复杂的，建筑群 component [k?m?p??n?nt] n. 组成部分，部件 composition [k?mp??z??(?)n] n. 作文；作曲 comprehension [k?mpr??hen?(?)n] n. 理解
compromise [?k?mpr?ma?z] v. 妥协,折中,让步 compulsory [k?m?p?ls?r?] a. 强制的,必须做的 computer [k?m?pju?t?(r)] n. 电子计算机 computer game [k?m?pju?t?(r) ɡe?m] 电子游戏 comrade [?k?mr?d; (US) ?kɑmr?d] n. 同志 concentrate [?k?ns?ntre?t] v. 聚精会神 concept [?k?nsept] n. 概念
concern [k?n?s??n] v. / n. 涉及，关心 concert [?k?ns?t] n. 音乐会；演奏会 conclude [k?n?klu?d] v. 完成，结束 conclusion [k?n?klu??(?)n] n. 结论；结束 concrete [?k??kri?t] a. 混凝土制的 condition [k?n?d??(?)n] n. 条件，状况 condemn [k?n?dem] v. 谴责，指责，宣判 conduct [?k?nd?kt] vt. 引导，带领
conductor [k?n?d?kt?(r)] n. 管理人；指导者；（车上的）售票员，列车员；乐队指挥
confident [?k?nf?d?nt] a. 自信的 重点短语
be known to 为人所知
be located in位于…，坐落在… be lost in 集中精力与，沉湎于 be loyal to忠于
be married to sb. 和…结婚 be noted as 以…而闻名
be occupied in 忙于…，正从事… be on a diet 节食
be responsible to sb for sth 向…负责 be satisfied with 对…感到满意 be seated坐下，坐着；位于… be short of缺乏，不足；达不到 be skilled in熟练于 be supposed to 被期望；应该 be sure of oneself 有自信心 be to blame（for）对…应负责任 be typical of 是…的典型特点
be up to从事，忙于,胜任,符合，轮..由 be/get/become used to doing习惯于 be worth doing值得(做)
bear/keep in mind (of/that) 记住；牢记 before long不久以后
(to)begin with 首先，以…开始； believe in相信，信仰，主张 belong to属于；附属 to the point中肯,贴切 best of all 最(好)，首先 beyond control 无法控制 beyond dispute没有争论余地的 beyond question 毫无疑问， bit by bit一点一点地，渐渐 black and blue (被打得)遍体鳞伤
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