(英语)九年级上册英语书面表达解析版汇编及解析

（英语）九年级上册英语书面表达解析版汇编及解析

一、英语书面表达 1．书面表达

假定你是李华，最近你们班就低碳生活方式进行了讨论，你的英国朋友Peppa向你来信 询问讨论情况。请你用英语写封回信，简单介绍以下讨论结果： 1．节水节电． 2．垃圾分类 3．少用纸巾，重拾手帕 4．步行、骑自行车或公交出行、 参考词汇：low carbon低碳；tissue纸巾

词数：100词左右。开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。 Dear Peppa,

Thank you for your last letter asking about our discussion on low-carbon lifestyle. Here is something about it．

_______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes, Yours, Li Hua

【答案】Dear Peppa,

Thank you for your last letter asking about our discussion on low-carbon lifestyle. Here is something about it．

We can do a lot in our daily life to achieve the goal of low carbon life. First, we’d better turn off lights if possible and spend less time watching TV or surfing the Internet. Saving water also matters much. Besides, we should sort out the rubbish, hoping that we might recycle some, which will surely benefit us a great deal. In addition, we suggest using handkerchiefs instead of tissues so that we can prevent more trees from being cut down. More importantly, when we go out, walking, riding bikes or taking buses should be our first choice, which contributes to a cleaner world. Best wishes, Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 【分析】

这是一篇给材料作文，向我的英国朋友Peppa写信，介绍我们班就低碳生活方式进行的讨论情况。 【详解】

结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：We can do……，we’d better……，we suggest……，which contributes to……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

【点睛】

本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头我要介绍我们班就低碳生活方式进行了讨论，接下来介绍我们为低碳生活可以做的事。此处ask about, turn off, sort out, in addition, instead of, contribute to等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

2．随着社会的发展，通讯的方式从远古时代的书信到当今的互联网，经历着巨大的变化。请你写一篇短文，谈谈你对现代通讯工具的使用及看法。内容包括： 1. 你喜欢使用的通讯方式有哪些？ 2. 它们的优点和缺点是什么？

3. 你认为使用现代通讯工具要注意什么？

要求：1. 不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出现真实的学校名称和姓名；2. 语意连贯，词数80左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。

As time goes by, there are many different kinds of communication methods now. As for me, 【答案】As time goes by, there are many different kinds of communication methods now. As for me, I prefer to chat with others by mobile phone, but sometimes I chat by communication software, such as WeChat and QQ.

Mobile phones bring great convenience to people, but people can only hear the sound by phones. By using net software, we can easily see the people we talk to on the Internet. However, sometimes we concern more about mobile phones instead of the people around.

In my opinion, we should pay more attention to the face to face communication and try not to waste too much time on mobile phones. 【解析】 【分析】

这是一篇给材料作文，谈谈我对现代通讯工具的使用及看法。 【详解】

结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：there are……，I prefer to……，Mobile phones bring……，we can……，we should……，So let’s……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。 【点睛】

本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我喜欢使用的通讯方式有哪些；接下来介绍它们的优点和缺点是什么，以及使用现代通讯工具要注意什么；最后呼吁号召大家合理使用现代通讯工具。此处prefer to do sth, by phones, on the Internet, concern about, in one’s opinion, try one’ s best等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

3．书面表达

初三的学习生活繁忙中有困惑、泪水，也有进步、喜悦。请根据表格提示，写一篇题为“Our school life in Grade Nine”的短文，介绍九年级的学校生活，并提出希望和建议。

老师 在校 学生 作业 周末 其它活动 愿望 …… （发挥一到两点） 工作认真负责，充满爱心 …… （至少发挥两点） 作业多．舍弃爱好 锻炼，电视 要求：

1．所写内容必须包括以上表格提供的所有信息，并适当发挥： 2．文章不少于90词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3．语意通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范； 4．文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息。 Our school life in Grade Nine

It is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student. Here is what our school life is like now.

【答案】Our school life in Grade Nine

It is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student. Here is what our school life is like now.

At school, all of our teachers work very hard. Most of them are patient enough to help us with all kinds of problems, whether in our study or in our life. As a result, they won high respect from us. As for students, in class we listen to the teacher carefully and think actively. After class, we are busy doing our homework. Every student is making efforts to try to achieve our dreams. At weekends, we usually spend a lot of time doing our homework, too. So we can't afford time for our hobbies any more. I feel a bit stressed actually, so I try to spare some time to play basketball or turn on my favorite TV program to get relaxed.

No pains, no gains. But the more carefully we plan our day, the more colorful our school life will be.

【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如at school，work hard，most of，patient enough，help sb. with sth.，all kinds of problems，in our life，as a result，as for students，listen to，be busy doing，try to do，spend a lot of time doing，not any more，play basketball等。而It is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student./ But the more carefully we plan our day, the more colorful our school life will be.等多种特殊比较级句式结构的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。

点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容

经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

4．人们对于学生网上交友持不同意见。请你用英语写一篇关于学生网上交友的短文，介绍人们不同的观点，并表达自己的看法。 赞成的理由 1. 广交朋友 2. 可自由表达思想 3. 有利于外语学习 反对的理由 1. 浪费时间 2. 影响学习 3. 可能上当受骗（be cheated） 你的看法 1. ... 2. ... 注意：1. 所写内容必须包括表中各方观点并进行合理拓展。 2. 词数80词左右，短文的开头已给出（不计入总词数）。

Nowadays many teenagers show great interest in making friends online. Some people

think___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【答案】Nowadays many teenagers show great interest in making friends online. Some people think students should make friends on line? Some people say yes. The internet helps make many friends. Chatting on line, students can more freely express their feelings and opinions, and even get help with their foreign language studies. But others think students should not. They say making friends on line is a waste of time, which should be spent more meaningfully on study. Besides, some students get cheated on line.

It is my opinion that students should place their study, health and safety before other things. As for friendship, we can readily find it in our classmates and other people around us. 【解析】 【分析】

整体分析：这是一篇提纲话题作文。是一篇议论文，第一段要写赞同学生网上交友的人的观点，第二段要写反对学生网上交友的观点，第三段要表述作者自己的观点。 【详解】

本篇作文要求作者就上网交友发表意见，写作之前要认真阅读所给提示，确定文章中心。注意文体、人称和时态。文章要有层次、流畅。可以适当发挥，写作中适当使用连词，注

意上下文的紧密联系，要符合逻辑关系。 【点睛】

这类作文的写作方法要注意认真审题，可以分三段写：赞成；反对；你的看法。注意过渡性语言的使用。做到：要点要全，表达要清晰明确，使用短语，句型要准确，注意避免拼写和语法错误。

5．书面表达

某英文报举办“家乡的变化”主题征文活动。请根据下表提示，以“The Changes in My Hometown”为题，用英语写一篇100词左右的短文，不必逐字逐句翻译。

生活条件差，道路狭窄，房屋破旧。 过去 污染严重，垃圾遍地。 ......（适当发挥一至两点） 环境：政府采取措施来改善污染，城市变得越来越整洁。 生活：住房宽敞明亮；许多人搬进了新公寓。越来越多的人现在 有自己的汽车；生活舒适。 交通：新的飞机场已投入使用多年。be in use（投入使用）； 旅游：每年有成千上万来自各地的游客。 将来 希望……（两点） 要求：1. 短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；

2. 短文必须包括所有内容要点，并适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺； 3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。 Changes my hometown

My hometown has changed a lot over the years.

In the past, _______________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________

__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【答案】My hometown has changed a lot over the years.

In the past, my hometown was very poor and the streets were very narrow. Houses were small and old. Rubbish was everywhere. Few people would like to come to my hometown. Now the government takes measures to improve the pollution and the city becomes cleaner and cleaner. The houses are big and bright. Many people have moved into new apartments. More and more people have their own cars and live a comfortable life. The new airport has been in use for two years. There are thousands of tourists from all over the country every year.I hope my hometown