写作提升练(四)读后续写
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(2018·浙江宁波5月模拟)
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
Jenny was the only child in her home.She had a quarrel with her mother that
afternoon and she ran out of the house angrily.She couldn’t help weeping sorrowfully when she thought of the scolding from her mother.Having wandered aimlessly in the street for hours,she felt a little hungry and wished for something to eat,but it was not even possible for her,since she had nothing with her.She stood beside a stand for a while,watching the middle-aged seller busy doing his business.However,with no money in hand,she sighed and had to leave.
The seller behind the stand noticed the young girl and asked,“Hey,girl,you want to have the noodles?”
“Oh,yes...but I don’t have money on me...” she replied.
“That’s nothing.I’ll treat you today,” said the man.“Come in.”
The seller brought her a bowl of noodles,whose smell was so attractive.As she was eating,Jenny cried silently.
“What is it?” asked the man kindly.
“Nothing,actually I was just touched by your kindness!” said Jenny as she wiped her tears.“Even a stranger on the street will give me a bowl of noodles,while my mother,drove me out of the house.She showed no care for me.She is so merciless compared to a stranger!”
Hearing the words,the seller smiled.“Girl,do you really think so?I only gave you a bowl of noodles and you thanked me a lot.But it is your mother who has raised you since you were a baby.Can you number the times she cooked for you?Have you expressed your gratitude to her?”
Jenny sat there,speechless and numb with shock;she remembered mother’s familiar face and weathered hands.“Why did I not think of that?A bowl of noodles from a
stranger made me feel indebted,but I have never thanked my mum for what she has done for me.”
On the way home,Jenny made up her mind to make an apology to her mother for her rudeness as soon as she arrived home.
注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语; 3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1:
Approaching the doorway,Jenny took a deep breath._______________________________________
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Paragraph 2:
A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back.
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阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
Jack,a clerk at the local bank,was wandering alone on the street.It was a cold,silent winter night.His mind was on his wife Linda,who had been in a car
accident two months ago and was now lying in a hospital bed,waiting for more money for her operation.Jack had sold everything he had,and he had tried his best to borrow money from all the people and banks he could.But the real world is cruel.A large amount of money was still needed.To Jack,it would mean a great deal of suffering to see his wife die without any help.“I have only one option left,”Jack said to
himself.Then he went to the bank,his workplace,again.For several days,he observed the bank and planned a theft.Then next day,he went to work as usual.Everything seemed normal:he joked with his workmates and helped his clients as he always did.But no one noticed that he had brought a bigger suitcase to work,instead of the small one he always carried.At 5:00 pm,the bank closed,and the clerks and the guards had all gone home.However,at that moment,Jack was in the bathroom,and the guards didn’t notice him,of course.When the noises coming from the street were replaced by silence and everything turned dark,Jack came out from the bathroom.He first cut the lines of the alarms and monitors with tools from his new suitcase.He was all too familiar with the equipment since he had been working there for 8 years and had been studying the
security system for the past 30 days.Using a special key and some other tools,he then easily opened the doors of the safes.The bank’s security system wasn’t very
good,which allowed Jack to take a lot of money.Several minutes later,Jack left the bank with a heavy bag filled with money.
注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语; 3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1:
After Jack had been gone from the bank for a while,the alarms began to ring. __________________
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Paragraph 2:
But the most unlucky man was the manager of the bank,an old man. ________________________
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写作提升练(四) 读后续写
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Paragraph 1:
Approaching the doorway,Jenny took a deep breath.When she knocked at the door,she found the door was locked and her mother was not in.Tired and sad,she sat down in front of the house.“Where could my mother be?” she wondered.“Was she still angry with me?” Again,the scene of the quarrel appeared in her mind.She remembered her rudeness to her mother.Realizing that all the scolding from her mother was due to the fact that her mother really cared a lot about her,she felt rather ashamed,and tears began to roll down her cheeks.
Paragraph 2:
A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back.She raised her head and saw the familiar face of her mother.“Here you come!I’ve been looking for you,” she said,tired and relieved.Jenny couldn’t help throwing herself into her mother’s
arms.“Mum,I’m so sorry and thank you for all you have done for me.” She expressed her sincere apology and great gratitude.Hearing this,her mother smiled,patting her back gently.
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Paragraph 1:
After Jack had been gone from the bank for a while,the alarms began to ring.The police arrived at the bank very quickly,only to find no one there.The next day was a really special day for the town,which was filled with newspapers and TV reporters covering the strange theft.The clerks at the bank were busy discussing the case,of course,including Jack.The police could only promise to catch the thieves as soon as possible,even though no clues had been found yet.
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But the most unlucky man was the manager of the bank,an old man.He seemed to be the only person to blame and was removed from his position.At last,with enough money for her operation,Jack’s wife was saved.However,Jack felt guilty about the manager of the bank.He could not forget what he had done to the old man.His guilt deepened as time went by.Finally,he turned himself into the police and accepted his punishment.
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