浙江专升本英语试卷答案及评分标准

【解析】得分点1：很多地区；得分点2：固定表达：依靠 69.森林的破坏首先会影响到那些曾经居住在那里的人。

【解析】得分点1：of介词短语的处理；得分点2：定语从句的翻译 70.然而，最后来说，森林的流失会对我们的地球气候造成影响。 【解析】得分点1：森林的流失；得分点2：对......造成影响。 PartⅣWriting (共30分)

2016年浙江专升本作文的话题是同学们很熟悉的环保类话题，具体的思路如下：

1.引出话题，概括要论述“以车代步”的社会现象。这一步想必大家都非常熟悉，因为

这一块的固定句式非常多。注意单词拼写和表达的完整性。

2.可适当拓宽讨论的范围，引出多方观点，并着重论述自己的观点。注意要紧扣主题，思路清晰，逻辑连贯。3.总结全文。可适当进行呼吁，呼吁政府或其他社会机构以及个人的正确做法。这一点

也是同学所擅长的，因为许多类似的现象我们都写过类似的总结。 评分标准：

1. 18分以上：内容切题，字数达标；包括提纲的全部要点；单词拼写和语法使用正确；

思维严谨，符合逻辑，句式有变化，含有一些地道的英语固定表达。 2.13—18分：内容切题，字数达标；包括提纲的全部要点；语法表达基本符合规范。

基本达到前后语言表达的逻辑性，句式通顺。

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3.8—12分：内容切题，文章长度基本符合要求；基本包括提纲的要点；语句可以理解，

但有较多的句子结构和用词错误。

4. 0—7分：文不切题，字数不达标；语句混乱，无法理解。

【参考例文】

There is a growing tendency that an increasing number of people are choosingto travel by

car instead of walking, which exerts great negative impacts on our

society.People’s views vary with individuals. Some people maintain they are still infavor of cars as a

means of transportation because of its convenience others, however, hold anopposite opinion,

arguingitsconvenienceisatthecostofenvironment.Asforme,Iaminclinedto the second view.

It should be noted that cars provide not only convenience in people’s dailylife but also a brand

new way of life as people are more likely to avoid walking, given the comfortof cars. On the

contrary, they tend to become inactive physically which may in turn lead tolaziness in mind. In

addition, most importantly, this new way of life increases a large amount ofcarbon emission in the

atmosphere, for which nature will eventually take revenge on human

beings.Faced with the condition of global warming, the governments are encouraged toenhance

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relativelawsandregulationsontheproductionandconsumptionofcarindustryas well as

people’sbehaviortoputthesituationundercontrol.Inshort,stoppingusingcars unreasonably is

undoubtedly a good choice everyone should make in the

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