I am busy preparing for the Senior High School Entrance Examination these days. I’m working harder than ever before so that I can enter my ideal senior high school. All of my teachers are willing to devote themselves to helping us. Of all the subjects, Engligh is always my favourite. In class we practise listening and speaking . My English teacher is patient enough to explain English grammar to us.When I have some trouble, I often go to my Engligh teacher, she can always help me with my trouble, and cheer me up.
How about your school life? I’m look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely LiLei
【解析】这是一篇回复书信类的提纲作文。内容为根据邮件的内容及自己的实际情况回复邮件。时态主要为一般现在时，人称为第一人称。写作要点包括：1、你一切都好吗？2、你觉得你的英语课怎么样？3、当你遇到麻烦时，你会找谁去帮忙？在动笔前，要认真审题，根据写作要点列出每个要点中可能要用到的表达，然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。在写作时，需要注意书信体裁的格式，要符合英语的表达习惯；注意表达的条理性、连贯性，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡符合逻辑关系；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。
13．（·北京中考模拟）自信赋予人力量，带给人快乐。拥有自信，人生处处是舞台，生活越来越精彩。
假如你是李华，请你为校刊英语园地“自信助我成长”专栏写一篇短文，谈谈自信的重要性，分享一次使你更加自信的经历，并说说我们如何更加自信。 提示词语：powerful，happy，believe in，keep doing 提示问题：
Why is it important to be confident? What experience made you more confident? How can we become more confident? It's very important to be confident
【答案】It’s very important to be confident. Self-confidence can bring us courage to stick to what we do. So it’s valuable to us.
When I was in Grade 7, once my teacher asked me to make a speech in class. Although I practiced it for many times at home, I still felt nervous and forgot thewords at the beginning of it. Then I breathed deeply and relaxed myself. You can’t believe how happy I was when I recalled the speech and finished it successfully.My teacher thought highly of my performance and I got much encouragement from my classmates. From then on, I have become more and more confident. To build confidence, firstly we need to clearly know about our own advantages and try to develop them. It is the most important that we should put in enough effort to what we do. Then we can finally make it and gain more confidence.
【解析】本文内容应包含表格中所提供的所有信息。灵活运用各种句式，采用不同的表达方式将各个要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确，简洁。最后必须认真查验是否有漏写，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
点睛：这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如at the beginning of； know about；make a speech等；When ；Although ；Then ；From then on,等的运用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理；同时语言流畅，内容完整，是一篇不错的范文。
14．（·天津中考模拟）根据联合国教科文组织的统计显示，北欧国家国民每年读书24本左右,美国人年均阅读7 本书，.韩国人11本书，日本、法国国民每年读书数量为8.4本左右，而中国国民人均读书数量低于5本。你的阅读量是多少？作为一名中学生，你应该怎么做？请根据下列表格中所给要点，写一篇英语短文。 读书好 好（hào）读书 读好书 要 点 1.书籍是良师益友； 2.获取知识,带来快乐； 3.让读书成为日常活动； 4.选择适合自己并有益于身心健康的书； 5.—本好书改变人的一生。 要求:1.文中必须包含表格中的所有要点,可适当发挥； 2.条理淸晰,字迹工整，词数不少于80； 3.文中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息： 4.开头和结尾部已给出,不计入总词数。 参考词汇:身心健康：mental and physical health
Nowadays,reading is becoming more and more popular among us._____________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Let’s be active readers and enjoy reading.
【答案】Nowadays，reading is becoming more and more popular among us． People often say that gold and silver are the most valuable things in the world．But I don't think so．In my opinion，to read books is more valuable than anything else．The old saying\always helpful\．Books are our friends．They introduce us different kinds of knowledge．They lead us down the road to success．Books are our teachers．They teach us troth，science，literature，and philosophy of life．Besides，they increase our knowledge，enlarge our experience，strengthen our character and do many other things which we can not do without them．Books tell us what is good and what is evil．And only books can tell the good from the bad．Therefore to read more books is the best policy for our young students．
As a middle school student．I think we should read more books．Reading is good for our physical and mental health．
Let's be active readers and enjoy reading．
【解析】这是一篇材料作文，行文之前，把表格里的要点内容通读一遍，做出框架，开始写作时，把表格里所列内容全部表述到文章中，并且自己适当增加内容，注意人称、时态、单复数，词形的变化。适当增加衔接词，使文章更出彩。如对长句不好把握，就尽量使用短句。
15．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达
假定你叫John，最近从报纸上得知英国某公司将在你的家乡建一座工厂，请给该公司写封电子邮件。要点如下： 表示欢迎：有利于家乡发展等； 感到担忧：造成环境污染等； 希望了解有关环保措施及更多信息。 适当提出一点你的建议。 注意：1．词数80—100；
2．请不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥以使行文连贯； 3．邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。 Dear Sir or Madam,
_____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ Yours faithfully, John
【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a middle school student. I have recently learned from the newspaper that you are going to build a factory here in my hometown. There is no doubt that it is good for the development of my hometown and it will provide us with more jobs. Most of us stand by the program. However, some of us are worried that the factory will make much noise and pollute the environment of the area. I would like to know whether you have any plans for the environment protection. Would you please offer us more information about it? I'm looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, John 【解析】
这是一篇提纲作文。内容是针对英国某公司将在你的家乡建一座工厂这件事，写一封电子邮件，表达欢迎和你的担忧。注意电子邮件的格式，时态主要为一般现在时，人称主要为第一人称。考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文。要注意遣词造句的灵活性和语法规则的正确性；文章必须涵盖所提供的各个提纲要点，不要遗漏。行文间要注意简化描述，用简短的语句代替冗长的语句。作文完成后，应该检查、修改，以免遗漏需要表达的
要点和细节。 本文的写作要点：
1．表示欢迎：有利于家乡发展等； 2．感到担忧：造成环境污染等； 3．希望了解有关环保措施及更多信息； 最后，适当提出一点你的建议。
16．（·湖北中考模拟）书面表达
同学们，三年的初中生活就要结束了，在我们的成长过程中，既有快乐，也有烦恼。请用英文写一篇短文，内容包括：
1．你在学校或家里曾经遇到的最大问题或烦恼； 2．你解决问题或烦恼的过程； 3．你的感想。 要求：
1．词数80～100，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2．文中不得出现真实的校名与人名。
My middle school life is coming to an end .During the three years，
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【答案】My middle school life is coming to an end. During the three years，not only did I have happy time, but I had kinds of problems. My biggest problem was too much homework. Homework seemed endless for me. It made me stay up late and feel very tired every day，but I knew the teachers were expecting us to do better，even the best in my lessons.
How can I deal with the problem？On the one hand，I concentrated more on my study in class. On the other hand，I did the homework as quickly as possible instead of being slow or absent minded. As a result，I spent less time on homework，and I wasn't frustrated any more. As we all know，practice makes perfect. Complaining or waiting can't help. Instead we should be active to face our problems.
【解析】本文是一篇材料作文。围绕三年的初中生活展开叙述，写作前首先要确定三年中遇到的最大问题或烦恼是什么，一件事情即可，然后围绕这件事情展开叙述，三个写作要点要面面俱到，可适当发挥。在写作时，人称为第一人称，因为文章涉及的内容是曾经发生过的事情，所以时态应该用一般过去时来描述发，写感想可以用一般现在时态。 【高分句型一】
I did the homework①as quickly as possible ②instead of being slow or absent minded.我尽可能快地完成作业，而不是迟钝或心不在焉。
①as…as possible尽可能…
②instead of 代替 而不是，后跟动名词。 【高分句型二】
As we know，practice makes perfect我们都知道，熟能生巧。 practice makes perfect熟能生巧，谚语的运用，为文章增添了色彩。
17．（·重庆中考模拟）书面表达
假设格林（Green） 先生是你班的一位外籍教师，在他回国前夕，学校将为他举行欢送会。请用英文写一篇欢送辞，内容要点如下： 1. 格林先生是澳大利亚人，三年前来到我校教英语； 2. 他与我们相处融洽，但对我们要求严格； 3. 这些年来，…… 我们深表感激； 4. 下星期他将离校回国，祝他一路顺风。 【答案】Ladies and Gentlemen,
First of all, allow me to thank you for giving me a chance to speak here. Mr. Green is from Australia. He came to teach English in our school three years ago. He is easy to get along with, but he's strict with us. All these years he's worked hard. He's tried his best to make his class lively and interesting. He's helped us a lot in our Englishi studies. We've improved our spoken English with his help. All of us feel grateful to him. Next week Mr. Green will leave for Australia. Let's wish him a pleasant journey.
【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如Ladies and Gentlemen，first of all，thank you for doing，give me a chance，be from，three years ago，get along with，be strict with，try his best to do，leave for等。而He came to teach English in our school three years ago./He is easy to get along with, but he's strict with us./ We've improved our spoken English with his help./ Next week Mr. Green will leave for Australia.等多种时态句式的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样，是本文的最大亮点。 点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
18．（·浙江中考模拟） 书面表达
假如你叫Tom。你们学校正在开设国际课程，下个月将有新的外教来学校上课。以下是外教Rhian的微信，请根据该内容回复一条90词左右的短信，可适当发挥。
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