I’m glad to receive your letter. Since you are interested in civilization（文明） of China, I would like to share something with you.
Chinese civilization is one of the oldest and longest civilizations in the world. China is a country of 56 nationalities. Different nations have difficult cultures. In my country, we have many traditional festivals, such as, the Spring Festival, Mid-Autumn Festival and the Dragon Boat Festival . They are also called “three major Chinese holidays” in China. Here are the customs of eating Zongzi and racing dragon-boat on the Dragon Boat Festival.
China is a nation of etiquette （礼仪）. Chinese people can respect, trust and help each other. We all learn and grow together. Everyone in my school should protect the whole public environment. Climbing the trees, picking the flowers and throwing garbage at random are not allowed there.
I hope you can come to China someday to experience the ancient culture of China. Look forward to hearing from you soon. All the best.
Li Hua
【解析】 【分析】
本文要求给你的印度朋友Danny写一篇关于华夏文明的回信。 【详解】
文章需要介绍下中国的文化。表格中列举了三个要点，写作时注意不要漏写。平时注意多多积累句型、短语。细心检查避免疏漏。以图表展示的作文要以“读”为主，首先要认真读懂图表中的要求，对所给信息加以分析、推断、筛选、概括，去粗取精；在写作时目的要明确，要注意内容的准确性和严肃性。 【点睛】
写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系，上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。如but, so, then等。可以适当使用高分句子。本篇文章写的好的句子有：Chinese civilization is one of the oldest and longest civilizations in the world．中华文明是世界上最古老、最悠久的文明之一。China is a nation of etiquette（礼仪），中国是一个礼仪之邦。
9．（·广州市天河中学中考模拟）书面表达
请根据提示内容，以My low-carbon life为题写一篇英语短文，谈谈你的“低碳生活”，以及你对“低碳生活”的认识。 提示：1. 出行方式 2. 不浪费纸、水、电等
3. 其他低碳生活的方式（补充一点） 4. 低碳生活的作用
注意：1．词数80左右，开头已经写好，不计入总词数； 2．回复须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使全文连贯、通顺； 3．文中不得提及真实的人名等相关信息。 My low-carbon life
Low-carbon life is a kind of lifestyle. It’s a habit to save all the sources of energy around us. It’s important to protect our environment. _______________________ _________________________________________________________________ 【答案】My low-carbon life
Low-carbon life is a kind of lifestyle. It’s a habit to save all the sources of energy around us. It’s important to protect our environment. First, I always go to school on foot and tell my parents to walk to work instead of driving the car. Second, I save water and electricity by turning off the taps , fans; TV sets and lights in time when I don't need them. What's more, water is reused by us in my family all the time. Third, I use the both sides of the paper. I think it is good to make full use of paper. By doing this, we can save many trees. At last, I would go shopping with basket rather than plastic bags.
I believe our life will become better and better if we can do these things. Lower carbon, happier life. Let's take actions. 【解析】 【详解】
这是一篇话题作文。请根据提示内容，以My low-carbon life为题写一篇英语短文，谈谈你的“低碳生活”，以及你对“低碳生活”的认识。本文时态主要为一般现在时。人称主要为第一人称。认真阅读所给提示要点，确定主题，根据要点列出提纲，所写内容必须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无单词拼写、标点、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。本文提纲：
我的低碳生活
低碳生活是一种生活方式。节约我们周围所有的能源是一种习惯。保护我们的环境很重要。首先，我总是步行去上学，告诉父母步行去上班，而不要开车。其次，当我不需要的时候，我会及时关掉水龙头、风扇、电视机和电灯，以节约用水和用电。更重要的是，我们家里的水一直都在重复利用。第三，我使用纸张的两面。我认为充分利用纸张是件好事。通过这样做，我们可以拯救许多树木。最后，我会带着篮子购物而不使用塑料袋。 我相信如果我们能做这些事情，我们的生活会越来越好。 低碳，快乐生活。我们采取行动吧。 【点睛】
书面表达要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。语言要规范，时态运用要正确，叙述清楚条里，学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用。注意书写的规范：大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。注意检查：单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。写作六步法：1.审题：文体，时态，人称。2.抓住要点：要点是否齐全，适当补充。3.扩充句子：通过增加状语，定语，连词，使句子意思饱满充实。4.连句成文，合理使用连词。5.改正错误：拼写是否错误，语法时态是否正确，连词是否恰当等。6.誊写作文：注意书写工整美观整洁。
10．（·广西中考模拟）近几年来，一些学校开设了一些兴趣班（interest classes）或特色课（special classes）, 诸如烹饪课、手工制作课以及传统戏曲课等。你校校园网就你们学校开设此类课程的必要性广泛征求同学们的意见。以下是你们班同学的观点和理由。请就此并
结合你自己的想法用英语写一篇短文，发表在校园网的英语论坛上。
一些学生 另一些学生 你 观点 有必要 没有必要 … 理由 1. 培养兴趣, 并获得更多的知识；2. 提高生活技能 1. 浪费时间，对学习没有帮助； 2. 给学生带来很多压力 … 提示语：develop one’s interests; get more knowledge; improve one’s life skills; a waste of time; cause a lot of stress
要求：1. 短文应包括表格中的信息，并适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；
3. 词数80左右。开头已给出，但不计入总词数。
Recently some schools offer their students some interest classes or special classes such as cooking classes, handcraft classes, traditional opera classes and so on.
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Thank you!
【答案】Recently some schools offer their students some interest classes or special classes such as cooking classes, handcraft classes, traditional opera classes and so on.
Is it necessary to offer these classes? We had a discussion in our class. Some students think it’s really necessary to do it. First, it’s good for students to develop their interests. And interests can make them get more knowledge. Second, these classes are helpful for them to improve their life skills. These skills are useful for young students.
However, others have different opinions. They don’t think it’s so necessary. They think it’s a waste of time and it’s not helpful for their study. And these activities can cause a lot of stress for children.
In my opinion, it’s a good idea to offer these classes. They are not only good for our study but also for our growing.
Thank you!
【解析】 【详解】
这是一篇话题作文，并且已给出了内容提示，所以我们在写作时要围绕所给内容提示展开。
根据作文要求，可以确定文章的时态是一般现在时; 在表达观点时通常会用到例如：I think, in one’s opinion 等引出观点的词语。另外，可以用到first, second, third, finally 等一一列出观点，使文章更有条理，次序。 【点睛】
这是一篇比较优秀的作文。首先内容完整，第一段摆出事实，第二段说明别人的的观点，最后说出自己的观点，在表达观点时有条理有次序。 短文中使用了一些很好的词及短语，例如such as，and so on，However等使句子更有连贯性，及好的句型表达，例如：Second, these classes are helpful for them to improve their life skills. They think it’s a waste of time and it’s not helpful for their study等。
11．（·福建中考模拟）书面表达
随着电子时代的到来，西方文化如潮水般涌来，中国传统文化的传承面临着巨大的挑战。有人认为学校应当开设传统文化课（set up traditional culture classes），但也有人认为没有必要。假如你是Mike,请你用英语写一封邮件，给你校英文报投稿写一篇短文，词数80左右，谈谈你对开设传统文化课的看法。 Your opinion Your reasons Your suggestion necessary or unnecessary the root （根） of Chinese culture, know more about, spread, develop … Dear editor,
As we all know, Chinese traditional culture is facing a great challenge because of the rapid development if international technology nowadays. _____________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Mike
【答案】Dear editor,
As we know, Chinese traditional culture is facing a great challenge because of the rapid development of international technology nowadays. In my opinion, it’s necessary for schools to set up traditional culture classes.
First, traditional culture is the root of Chinese. As Chinese, we shouldn’t give up our traditional culture and run after Western culture. Second, traditional culture classes can give students chances to know more about our nation. They can raise their sense of national pride. Last but not least, setting up traditional culture classes can spread and develop our Chinese culture. All in all, it is of great importance to set up traditional culture classes in schools. Let’s call on more schools to set up traditional culture classes! Yours, Mike
【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，谈谈我对开设传统文化课的看法。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：Chinese traditional culture is
facing……，it’s necessary for schools to……，we shouldn’t……，They can raise……，it is of great importance to……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了中国传统文化面对的问题，接下来介绍我认为开设传统文化课的必要性的原因，最后号召更多的学校开设传统文化课。此处because of， in one’s opinion, give up, know about, last but not least, set up, all in all, call on等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
12．（·合肥市第四十二中学中考模拟）每个人的生命只有一次。请你以“How to Protect Our Lives”为题，从安全和健康的角度入手，写一篇如何珍惜和保护我们生命的短文，要点如下：
1. 交通安全，校园安全 2. 健康的饮食和生活 3. ... ...
参考词汇：treasure（v.）珍惜 注意： 1. 词数80~100；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。 【答案】How to Protect Our Lives
It is very important for us to know how to treasure and protect our lives. First of all, we should obey the traffic rules and pay attention to traffic safety.
Secondly, we should not chase and fight in school. Don't climb trees, don't play dangerous games. Thirdly, we should eat some healthy foods, such as vegetables, fruits, and so on. They are able to help us maintain a healthy body.
Finally, a good sleep can also assure us a healthy body. We should sleep seven to eight hours a day to maintain adequate sleep.
If we can learn to treasure and protect ourselves, I believe we can have a healthy body and a better life. 【解析】 【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如how to do，first of all，obey the traffic rules，pay attention to，such as，and so on，be able to，learn to do等。而固定句型It is very important for us to know how to treasure and protect our lives.和复杂从句结构If we can learn to treasure and protect ourselves, I believe we can have a healthy body and a better life.的运用，丰富了短文内容；同时First of all,/ Secondly,/ Thirdly,和Finally,等词使表达条理，层次清晰，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。 【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理
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