后展开思维,考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以,考生不能遗漏要点,要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式,尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
13.(·山西中考模拟)书面表达请将作文写在答题卡相应的位置上。
在家庭生活中,我们会做很多关于我们青少年的决定,比如该买什么新年衣服,该怎样庆祝生日,该上哪所学校等。你认为在我们自己的事情上应该自己做决定,还是听从家长的意见?针对这一话题,九年级七班的同学们展开了辩论。
假设你是正方或反方的一员,请围绕你的观点,结合自身的亲身经历,说出2至3条理由.......来支持你的观点。(只能选择一方观点表达。)
要求:1. 词数不少于80词; 2. 文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
【答案】One possible version:
At home, I think teenagers should make their own choices. Learning to make our own choices can help us to be more independent.
After I entered junior high school, I made every choice on my study, from which reference books to buy to how to plan time for study. Unlike other students, I didn’t need my parents to be with me when I was studying. With the development of this learning habit, I soon realized that I could do better in study than other classmates who often depended on teachers and parents. Before making every choice, I carefully considered the advantages and disadvantages of my actions and in that way, I grew up independently.
There is no wonder that we will grow up some day and live on our own. Although parents undoubtedly care about us, we still need to make our own decisions when it comes to our personal things. Everyone needs to learn to grow up to get prepared for future life.
【解析】这篇作文要求我们写一篇议论文,论点是:在我们自己的事情上,我们应该自己做决定,还是由家长来做决定。关于这个话题每个人都会有自己的看法,题目要求我们任选一个观点来讲述,并结合自己的亲身经历,给出2到3个理由。写作之前,我们应先从正方和反方中选择一个,作为自己的观点,然后围绕这一观点阐述自己的理由。这是一篇话题作文,题目中并没有给我们规定具体的写作内容,我们应发挥自己的想象力,结合自己的日常生活来组织语言,丰富文章的内容。写作时还应注意的是语言的表达,英语的表达习惯和汉语是不同的,我们不能按照汉语思维,逐词翻译,而是从句子的整体考虑,使用恰当的词汇和句型,多用简单句,如主谓宾、主系表的结构,点缀几个复合句或并列句,调整文章节奏,让文章的句子富于变化,有新鲜感。高级句型或词汇的使用也可以提升文章的档次,在语句之间使用恰当的连接成分,使文意表达连贯、流畅。
点睛:这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整,观点明确,结构合理。短文作者选择了正方的观点,第一句话先点明自己的观点是什么,接下来围绕这一观点进行阐述,并从自己的经历出发,阐述了自己持有这一观点的理由,充分、合理,有说服力。最后一段作者重申自己的观点,并进行了总结。其次短文中使用了正确的时态、人称,文章以一般现在时态和一般过去时态为主,谓语动词形式准确,语法规范。句式表达符合英语的表达习惯,简单句为主,也使用了较多的复合句和高级句型,如状语从句、宾语从句、定语从句、非谓语动词等。有些句子较长,是由于使用高级句型所致,一味使用较长的句子也会导致文章的冗长,让读者感觉比较累,因此要注意调整文章的节奏。短文中较好的句型和短语有Learning to make our own choices can help us to be more independent.、After I entered junior high school, I made every choice on my study, from which reference books to buy to how to plan time for study.、Before making every choice, I carefully considered the advantages and disadvantages of my actions and in that way, I grew up independently.、There is no wonder that we will grow up some day and live on our own. 、Although parents undoubtedly care about us, we still need to make our own decisions when it comes to our personal things.等。
14.(·北京中考模拟)(题文)假如你是中学生李华,你的美国笔友 Jim 一周前给你发了电子邮件,询问你暑假里的旅游计划及其他安排, 但由于某种原因你没有及时回复。请根据以下要点给他回封邮件: 没有及时回复的原因, 你打算去哪儿旅游,以及你暑假的其他安排。
提示词语: exams, go on a trip, volunteer, visit some museums 提示问题: ? Why didn’t you reply to Jim’s email in time? ? Where do you plan to travel?
? What are your other plans for the summer holiday?
To: Jim From: Li Hua Subject: A plan Dear Jim,
I'm terribly sorry I couldn't reply to your email in time because __________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim
I'm terribly sorry I couldn't reply to your email in time because I was busy preparing for the exams.
I will go on a trip to Sichuan, where there are a great number of places of interest. I promise to send you some wonderful photos then.
I’m going to do something meaningful during the coming summer holiday. First, I plan to do some volunteer work in my community. Second, I’ll visit some museums to learn more knowledge.
Yours sincerely, Li Hua
【解析】这篇作文要求我们以李华的身份给自己的美国笔友Jim写信,内容包括:你没有及时回复他的邮件的原因;你暑假打算去哪里旅行以及暑假里的其他安排。写作时,我们应根据题目给出的这些内容要点,组织语言,表达清楚。首先应注意内容的完整,要包含题目中要求的所有要点,题目只是列出了一个提纲,没有规定要学生写什么,因此具体的写作内容需要学生们自己来发挥,理由要充分、合理,暑假安排要符合日常生活和学生的身份。其次注意使用正确的英语句式来表达。通过分析可知,这篇短文讲的是暑假的计划,应主要使用一般将来时态,be going to结构或者will+动词原形都可以。保证句式准确,注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同,不能逐词翻译。使用简单句结构,点缀并列句和复合句,长短句结合,使文章富有节奏感。语句之间使用恰当的连接成分,使上下文意连贯。
点睛:这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整,包含了题目要求的所有要点。短文共分三段,第一段介绍了自己没有及时回复邮件的原因,用了一句话简洁、明了。第二段介绍的是自己的旅行计划;第三段是暑假的其他安排。整篇文章结构安排合理,层次清晰,内容充实。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称,语法规范、准确,句式表达符合英语的习惯。文章中简单句和复合句交叉使用,长短句结合,句式不单调,有节奏感。如I'm terribly sorry I couldn't reply to your email in time because I was busy preparing for the exams.这个长句,使用了宾语从句和原因状语从句;再如I will go on a trip to Sichuan, where there are a great number of places of interest.中使用了定语从句。还有一些较好的句型和短语,如be busy doing sth, promise to do sth., do something meaningful, plan to do sth.以及to learn more knowledge等等。整篇文章表达流畅,意思连贯。
15.(·江苏中考模拟)书面表达
假如你的笔友 John 将作为交换生在中国家庭生活一周,他写了一封 e-mail 注意:
1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称; 2.语言通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;
3.词数 80 左右,邮件的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
Dear John,
向你求助。请根据邮件内容写封回信。 Dear Li Hua,
I will come to Nanjing in July and stay with a Chinese family for a week as an exchange student. To get along well with my host family, should I prepare any gifts? How can I help with the housework? What else should I do? Please write back soon. Yours, John Dear John,
I’m glad you will come to China. ▲ ▲ ▲ ▲ ▲
I hope you will enjoy your stay in China. Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear John,
I'm glad you will come to China. We Chinese people are kind and friendly. You don't need to worry about it.
If possible, you can prepare a small gift, like a key ring or a hat with the symbols of your country. It's not necessary to buy anything expensive. Also, you can help with some housework, such as washing the dishes, making the bed . The family members will be very grateful for that. In addition, I suggest you learn a little Chinese that means \so on, which may play a useful role during your stay. What's more, read some books about Chinese customs before coming here. Try not to make any misunderstandings. I hope you will enjoy your stay in China. Yours, Li Hua
【解析】这是一篇给材料作文,回信给约翰,建议他在中国家庭生活应注意的事项。结合所给材料,可知本文主要考查一般现在时态,人称为第一,二人称,注意主谓一致问题,句子结构主要为系表结构,注意一些常见句式的应用,比如:I'm glad……,We Chinese people are……,you can…….,It's not necessary to do sth, I suggest……,I hope……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系。
点睛:本文结构紧凑,语言简练。开头告诉他不必担心,接下来回答他的问题以及建议他如何做,最后希望他在中国玩得高兴。此处need to do sth, worry about, the symbol of, help with, such as, be grateful for, in addition, play a role, what’s more等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
16.(·黑龙江中考模拟)话题作文:根据汉语提示和要求写一篇短文。(A和B两篇,可任选一篇)
现在有许多新的购物方式,网上购物就是其中的一种。越来越多的人熟悉和喜欢网购,但是网购有利有弊,请根据下面提供的信息用英语以“Online shopping”为题写一篇短文,描述网购的优点和缺点,并谈谈自己的看法。
优点:1、可以在任何时候购物;2、只需要一台电脑和鼠标;3、方便比较同类产品的价格,可以省钱;
4、无论何时何地都可以收到所购物品。
缺点:1、网上付款有时不安全;2、看不到实物,也不能试穿衣服。
注意:1、语意连贯,表达准确;2、词数80-100。字迹工整,语法正确,意思连贯,合乎逻辑,可适当发挥。 【答案】Online shopping
There are many new ways of shopping, and online shopping is one of them.
Online shopping has several advantages. First, you can shop at any time. Second, to shop on the Internet you only need a computer and mouse. Third, you can compare the prices of the same product and save money. You can also receive it anywhere in the world at any time!
But shopping on the Internet also has some disadvantages. Paying over the Internet isn’t always safe. You can’t see the product or try the clothes on.
I think our life is changing because of online shopping. One day no one will go to the shops any more, because you’ll be able to buy almost anything on the Internet.
【解析】本文属于材料作文,要表达网络购物的利与弊。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑,可适当增加内容。
【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的作文,很好的完成了试题规定的任务,语言表达符合英语习惯,准确运用时态、主谓一致,特别适用一些亮点词句,如advantage, at any time, the price of, disadvantage, try on, not...any more等。增强逻辑关系,增加上下文意思连贯,用词准确,句子通顺,行文连贯。
17.(·江苏中考模拟)书面表达
流感季通常在每年的10月份到3月份爆发,据报道114个美国孩子在今年2月死于流感。流感季节我们应该如何保持健康呢? 易患病人群 老人和孩子 1. 免疫系统弱; 原因 2. 流感知识缺乏:流感病毒引起流感;口、鼻、手传播; 公共场所人与人近距离传播; 3. …… (至少1点) 1. 多锻炼; 预防措施 2. 注意保暖; 3. …… (至少1点) 要求:1. 所写内容必须包括提供的所有信息,并适当发挥; 2. 文章不少于90词,开头已给出,不计入总词数; 3. 语意通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范; 4. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。
参考词汇:weaker immune systems (较弱的免疫系统);influenza virus (流感病毒) The flu (流感)season runs from October to March every year. This year it has been especially bad. It is reported that 114 children in the US died in February.
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