看图类作文
第一段：简单描述漫画，揭示漫画实质
第二段：分析造成该现象的原因或影响（主体部分） 第三段：从个人角度提出建议
1.描述漫画：
As is vividly depicted in the cartoon given above, we can observe that… 或As is vividly shown in the picture, we can see that…… 或As we can see from the picture,…
2. 描述漫画本质/内涵
Apparently, the picture reflects/reveals that ……
或The cartoon informs us of the phenomenon that……
3. 出现的问题或现象的原因（或者导致的影响）：
原因（1.We believe that three reasons can account for this phenomenon. First,____. Second, ____. Third, _____.
（2.Reasons for …… are in abundance.或The reasons for this phenomenon are as follows. Firstly,____. Secondly, ____. Thirdly, _____.
（3..There are at least two good reasons accounting for ______. On the one hand, ________. On the other hand, _______ is due to the fact that ________.
影响：
（1..What contributed to these changes? I think the reasons are as follows. To start with, ④______. Secondly, ⑤______ . What’s more, ⑥ _______. Last but not least, ⑦________.
（2.So far as I’m concerned, I believe that such phenomenon will give rise to a series of consequences. First and foremost, it will exert a far-reaching / negative impact on 、、、 ;
Besides, it may bring about a considerable change/damage to_、、、 . One more point that can’t be ignored is that 、、、 .
4. 个人观点(提出措施/建议)：
Therefore, immediate measures should be taken to …. To begin with,…….. What’s more,……. Last but not least,……
或It is high time that strict measures were taken to stop ... 或It is necessary that steps should be taken to ...
或To solve the above-mentioned problem, we must ...
From what has been discussed above, we can draw the conclusion that ... 或In conclusion, it is imperative that ...
或In summary, if we continue to ignore the above-mentioned issue, more problems will crop up.
或With the efforts of all parts concerned, the problem will be solved thoroughly.
或We might do more than identify the cause ;it is important to take actions to ...
或Taking all these into account, we ...
或Whether it is good or not /positive or negative, one thing is certain/clear...
或Given all the above factors, it is safe to reach the conclusion that …
或Taking into account all the above factors, it is reasonable to reach the conclusion that …
模板：
It seems to me that the cartoon / drawing is sending a message about ____________（图画内容），which reveals ____________（稍作评价）
There are at least two good reasons accounting for ______. For one thing, ____________（从社会角度论证）. For another thing, ____________（从个人角度说明）. For example, ____________（自己、朋友或他人，只要自己知道或听过的例子）.Last but not least, ____________（从反面角度谈论）.
As a result, the drawer of the illustration is urging us to _____________（建议或措施）.Only in this way can we ____________（展望结果）.In conclusion / To my understanding, ____________（再次表明观点或态度）. We should ____________（进一步说明个人的观点）.
基本要求
1.文章是否扣题，结构是否完整；（抓住实质） 2.内容是否充实，健康； 3.语言是否准确
1）句式的多样性：定语从句， 非谓语， 强调，倒装句。高级词汇。 2）不只看单句，要看前后句的连贯性和逻辑。 3）得体 （前后语言风格，词汇层次）
写作1：简要描述图片内容，结合生活实际，就图片的主题谈谈自己的感想。
写作1
This picture presents a ridiculous scene in a typical one-child family in China.
The parents are trying to persuade the little boy to cat，but the boy asks his father to act as a horse. He is riding on his father's shoulder and saying，“You run a circle and I'll have a mouthful of food.”The mother，holding a bowl of food，is running after them，ready to feed the little boy.
This picture shows that some children are terribly spoiled by their parents. Due to the one-child policy，most Chinese families have only one child. The parents try their best to satisfy every need of their child. As a result，the spoiled child becomes the“little emperor\．
Children are the future of our country. If they are so lazy and so selfish，there win be no hope for our country.Parentsshouldmake every effort to prevent their children from getting into bad habits. They must be strict with their children and refuse to satisfy their unreasonable demands. Only in this way can they expect their children to be good citizens when they grow up.
：简要描述漫画内容，结合生活实际，就漫画主题谈谈自己的感想。
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