3. 【2019·全国卷III】
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除:把多余的词用斜线(\\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意:
1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I've had many dreams since I was a child. Now my dream is to opens a cafe. Though it may appear simple, it required a lot of ideas and efforts. What I want is not just an ordinarily cafe but a very special one. I want my cafe have a special theme such as like \customers will enjoy yourselves in the historical environment what is created for them. If I succeed in manage one, I will open more. I wish to have a chain of cafes in many different city. Each of my cafes will have a different theme and an unique style. 【答案】
.做决定时的原因。故将is改为was。
opensI’ve had many dreams since I was a child. Now my dream is to open a cafe. Though it may apperequiredordinarilyar simple, it requires a lot of ideas and efforts. What I want is not just an ordinary cafe but
?like \
a very special one. I want my cafetohave a special theme such as yourselvesafe, customers will enjoy themselves in the historical environment
is created for
manage them. If I succeed in managing one, I will open more. I wish to have a chain of cafes in many dif
cityanferent cities. Each of my cafes will have a different theme and a unique style.
【详解】
to后用动词原形。 第一处:【解析】考查不定式的用法。不定式做表语,故把 opens改为 open。 第二处:【解析】考查动词的时态。短文的主体时态都是现代时。故把 required改为 requires。第三处:【解析】考查形容词的用法。修饰名词cafe,应用形容词。ordinarily 是副词。故把
ordinarily改为 ordinary。
第四处:【解析】考查动词的固定搭配。want sb to do sth“ 想要某人做某事”。故在have前加to。
第五处:【解析】考查介词的用法。such as和like都是用来举例子,重复了。故把like删除。customers是句子的主语, 第六处:【解析】考查代词的用法。故把 yourselves改为 themselves。第七处:【解析】考查定语从句。先行词environment 在从句中做主语,指物,关系代词用
that/which。故 把what改为that/which。
第八处:【解析】考查动词的固定搭配。succeed in doing something“成功的做了某事”。故把
manage 改为managing。
第九处:【解析】考查名词的用法。many different后跟可数名词的复数形式。故把city改为cities。
第十处:【解析】考查冠词的用法。an用在元音音素前,a用在辅音因素前。unique是以辅
音音素开头的单词,前用a。故把an改为a。
二、2019届模拟题
1.山东省淄博市2019届高三部分学校5月阶段性诊断(二模)考试
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It can be seen from the picture Mr. Liu,who wears a mask. was walking his dog.
Interestingly,his dog which also wears a mask.
In recent year,air pollution has become more and more serious in some areas,which have led to severe consequences. To solve this problem,firstly of all,we should raise the public awareness of protecting the environment. Secondly,the government ought to punish the illegal acts as polluting the environment severe. Thirdly,we must do our best to protecting the environment in our daily life. Only in this way can human beings and animals share a pleasant planet or live a happy life. 【答案】
It can be seen from the picture
?wasMr. Liu,who wears a mask. walking his dog. thatisInterestingly,his dog which also wears a mask.
In recent
year,air pollution has become more and more serious in some areas,which yearshavefirstlyled to severe consequences. To solve this problem, of all,we should raise the hasfirstpublic awareness of protecting the environment. Secondly,the government ought to punish the illegal acts
severeaspolluting the environment . Thirdly,we must do our best to
severelyofprotecting the environment in our daily life. Only in this way can human beings and animals
protectshare a pleasant planet
or live a happy life. and 【文章大意】本文是一篇记叙文。文章介绍了目前空气污染的严重以及所要采取的措施。第一处:考查主语从句。句意:从图中可以看到,刘先生,戴着面具,正在溜他的狗。此处it是
形式主语,that从句是真正的主语。故在picture 后加that。
第二处:考查时态。句意:从图中可以看到,刘先生,戴着面具,正在溜他的狗。结合句意可知
句子用现在进行时态,故把was→is。
第三处:考查谓语动词。句意:有趣的是,他的狗也戴着一个面具。该句中就一个谓语动词
wear,所以就更不存在从句,故把which去掉。
第四处:考查名词复数。句意:在最近这些年里。此处名词用复数形式,故把year→years。第五处:考查主谓一致。句意:在最近一年,在一些地区空气污染越来越严重,这导致严重后
果。此处是前面整个句子作先行词,所以后面非限制性定语从句中的谓语动词是单数第三人称形式,故把have →has。
第六处:考查固定搭配。first of all“首先,最重要的是”。故把firstly→first。
第七处:考查介词。句意:政府应该惩罚污染环境严重的违法行为。此处表示“所有”,故把as→of。
第八处:考查词形转换。句意:政府应该惩罚污染环境严重的违法行为。此处polluting是
动词,由副词来修饰,故把severe→severely。
第九处:考查固定搭配。句意:在我们的日常生活中我们必须尽力保护环境。固定搭配:do
one’s best to do sth.“尽某人最大努力做某事”。故把protecting→protect。
第十处:考查并列连词。句意:只有这样,人类和动物共享一个愉快的星球并过着幸福的生
活。此处表示并列的递进关系,故把or→and。
2.安徽师范大学附属中学2019届高三5月考前适应性检测
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My mom and dad are great cooks, but I always enjoy staying at home and having delicious food. I remembered when I was about six, all the kids in my neighborhood wanted hamburgers and chips, but some didn't have money to buy it. So my father tried to make some on the weekend and asked them eat at my home for the free. The kids were very happier. It helped me make lots of friend. Now I often cooking for my parents, and they like my dishes, either. It's really relaxing to sit around a table for my parents, eating and talking together. 【答案】
My mom and dad are great cooks,
but I always enjoy staying at home and having
and/so
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