热点04 网购
网购无疑是今年的火爆热点之一，它为我们的生活带来了极大的便利。今天，选择的2020年中考英语写作预测话题是：网购。
【预测题目】
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你喜欢网上购物吗？你对“网购”这一现象有何看法？请写一篇短文，从购物的时效性、安全性、商品的品种、质量、价格等方面说说“网购”相对于传统购物方式的优势与劣势。
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____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】
With the development of the Internet and the popularization of computers, shopping on the Internet has become a commonplace in our life. Here consumers can buy almost everything they need.
Shopping on the Internet has a lot of advantages, of which the most important is perhaps its convenience. People don't have to waste a lot of their energy and precious time to go from one shop to another to choose the commodities they like. This is especially desirable to the old, the sick and the busy people who cannot go to the shops in person. The goods come in all shapes, sizes and colors on the Internet. All they need to do is to sit in front of their computers and click the mouses. The commodities they order will be delivered to them promptly.
However, shopping on the Internet also has its disadvantages. The first disadvantage is that the consumers can't see the goods or try them on personally. Sometimes, the real goods may not be the same as what they have seen on the computer. The second disadvantage is that some shops on the Internet are not registered. They will never deliver anything to you after they get the money from you. Once cheated, you will find that you have nowhere to go to complain. 【解析】
试题分析：本文属于陈述正反方观点的议论文作文，主题是网上购物的优缺点。要求中只给出了要点，需要自己发挥的地方较多。要求中已经给出了部分提示，动笔先应先认真阅读提示，确定写作内容。写作中注意表达观点时的常用句式，注意在表达不同观点时，连词的使用。内容上应注意描述的全面性；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。
考点：命题作文的写作
点评：本题给出的材料较为简略，可发挥的空间较大，所以自己可以选择自己比较熟悉的内容发挥，利用自己熟悉的单词句式等。
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“双11”电商销售旺季即将到来，伴随现如今已然成为时尚的“网购”热潮，越来起多的学生也进入到网购的群体当中，校学生会就网购这一热点问题作了问卷调查，观点如下: 优点 足不出户；节约时间，避免拥挤，劳累 价格通常更便宜 2
可供选择的范围广，品种多 缺点 注意：
词数80左右，文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数； 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称及其他相关信息 参考词汇：
只看到图片，看不到商品本身 容易购买大量不大需要的东西，造成浪费 网购 shopping online 避免做某事 avoid doing sth. 商品 goods
With the development of the Internet, many students are used to shopping online.
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With the development of the Internet, many students are used to shopping online. shopping on the Internet has become a commonplace in our life. Here consumers can buy almost everything they need.
Shopping on the Internet has a lot of advantages, of which the most important is perhaps its convenience. People don't have to waste a lot of their energy and precious time to go from one shop to another to choose the commodities they like. This is especially desirable to the old, the sick and the busy people who cannot go to the shops in person. The goods come in all shapes, sizes and colors on the Internet. All they need to do is to sit in front of their computers and click the mouses. The commodities they order will be delivered to them promptly.
However, shopping on the Internet also has its disadvantages. The first disadvantage is that the consumers
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can't see the goods or try them on personally. Sometimes, the real goods may not be the same as what they have seen on the computer. The second disadvantage is that some shops on the Internet are not registered. They will never deliver anything to you after they get the money from you. Once cheated, you will find that you have nowhere to go to complain. 【解析】
试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，主语是第三人称，注意时态与时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。 【亮点说明】
这篇短文使用了大量的复合句为文章增色不少.如: People don't have to waste a lot of their energy and precious time to go from one shop to another to choose the commodities they like.人们不必浪费了很多的精力和宝贵的时间去从一个商店到另一个选择他们喜欢的商品。Sometimes, the real goods may not be the same as what they have seen on the computer.有时候，真正的货物可能与他们在计算机上看到的不一样。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.
（一）
假如你们班将在本周举行一次关于网络购物利弊的辩论赛。请你根据以下提示信息写一篇90词左右的短文谈谈你对网购的看法。开头已给出，不计入总词数。 提示：
好处 网购能帮助我们节省时间，我们只要把我们的信息发送给卖方（seller）, 不久他们就会把东西送到我们的家，网购能帮助使我们的生活更加轻松。
害处 有些卖家会通过欺骗我们来获取钱财，另外长时间上网购物对眼睛有害. 建议 小心、安全地使用网络来购物
Now it is popular for young people to do shopping on the Internet. It can help ___________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________
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________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】
Now it is popular for young people to do shopping on the Internet. It can help make our life easier. If we want to buy something from the Internet, we can send our information to the seller and then the seller will send the things to us soon. It can help us save much time.
However, the Internet is not perfect because it may sometimes do harm to us. Some sellers may get money by cheating us. And it will be bad for our eyes if we spend much time doing shopping on the Internet. The Internet can change our lives for the better, but we had better use it carefully and safely. 【解析】
亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如do shopping，on the Internet，help make our life easier，want to do，send to help us save much time，do harm to，be bad for，spend much time doing shopping，the sea of clouds，a nice place to visit等。而If we want to buy something from the Internet, we can send our information to the seller and then the seller will send the things to us soon. / And it will be bad for our eyes if we spend much time doing shopping on the Internet.等复杂条件状语从句结构的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样，是本文的最大亮点。
（二）
假如你是英语俱乐部的Cathy,上周五你们收到了外教Angel为同学们网购的英文书籍。俱乐部的同学们很喜欢网购图书这种便捷的方式，并打算在本周五交流读书后的感受。请你根据以下信息, 给Angel写一封电子邮件，告诉她俱乐部的活动情况，并说说网购图书的好处。 写作要点：
1表达收到图书后的喜悦与感激之情。 2介绍活动的情况：
（l）上周五，俱乐部成员们一起读英文书。
（2）本周五的下午3点，大家将共同交流读书的体会。
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