高二英语作文专题训练

高二英语作文专题训练

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2010年央视春晚的广告收入创新高，但节目中的植入广告引发了热议。最近，某网站举行了一次题为“对今年春晚植入广告的态度”的调查，请根据以下饼图（pie chart）所示信息用英语写一篇短文，并提出你自己的看法。

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1．对所给提示，不要简单翻译，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 2．词数150左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。 3．植入广告：product placement 满分文展示1： The 2010 Spring Festival Gala has set records for TV commercial rates, which accordingly has caused heated discussions due to product placement in the programmes.

The opinions on this topic vary from person to person. One in four think there is so much of product placement that lots of people feel unsatisfied when they watch the programmes. And 10% of the people think product placement in the programmes greatly ruins the image of CCTV, beause it will leave a bad impression on audience in and outside China. Besides, nearly one third of the people hold the opinion that it’s hard to relate the product placement to the programmes, making the audience feel uncomfortable.

However, there are 15% of the people who think it is helpful for the development of CCTV. And the rest think there is no need for us to be so strict with product placement. After all, it’s very natural.

Personally, the product placement is really disgusting and CCTV should try to avoid it.

本文总体结构非常清晰，作者通过整合拼图，谈论对待广告的两大观点，最后陈述自己的观点，除此之外，作者在选词造句上也下了一番工夫。在开头，中间以及最后的结尾处，优美、地道的句式层出不穷，一些高级词汇相互响应，熠熠生辉，值得其他学生借鉴。

满分文展示2：

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The 2010 Spring Festival Gala has set records for TV commercial rates, which accordingly has caused heated discussions due to product placement in the programmes.

According to the pie chart, we can see 15% of the surveyed people think it’s difficult to develop CCTV without the product placement, because it can provide enough money. At the same time, 20% of them think the product placement is presented in the progamme in a natural way.

On the other hand, the rest of the people are against the move and they have their own reasons. Nearly one third of them say the product placement has little to do with the programmes, which reduces their interests in the programmes. And 10% of the people hold the idea that the disadvantage that it ruins the image of CCTV outweighs its advantage. Besides, a quarter complain there are too much product placement in the programmes.

As far as I’m concerned, even if it’s common to see product placement, I don’t think it should appear in some programmes of art and culture.

本文反映出作者对英文写作极强的驾驭能力，首先作者能够很好地审题，通过图表找准信息，并且将文章结构安排地很合理，让读者一目了然，再次，作者在语言方面极具天赋，从开始的一个without的强调句，到非限制性定语从句，及后来的同位语从句，让读者目不暇接，一些高级词汇及过渡词的使用让文章更加完美。 标准范文： The 2010 Spring Festival Gala has set records for TV commercial rates, which accordingly has caused heated discussions due to product placement in the programmes.

As is shown in the pie chart, 20% of the people surveyed think it acceptable, for the product placement appears in the programmes naturally. And 15% of them consider it necessary for CCTV to make money from product placement, which is of great benefit to the development of CCTV itself.

However, among the people surveyed, more than one third of them complain that the product placement has nothing to do with the programmes. 25% of them even feel hurt seeing so much of it. Furthermore, the rest 10% hold the view that great harm has been done to the image of CCTV.

From the chart we can draw a conclusion that most of the people surveyed are against product placement in the programmes. In my opinion, product placement nowadays is almost unavoidable, but it should not damage the art of the show and should take the audience’s feelings into account.

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你班同学开展了一场“司机醉驾是否应该处罚乘客”的讨论。请你根据下表提供的信息，给报社写一封信，介绍讨论的情况，并发表你的看法。 少数同学赞成处罚乘客 大多数同学反对处罚乘客 1、减少交通事故，促进交通安全。 1、乘客难以判断司机是否醉酒。 2、不乘坐醉酒司机的车，不仅是对自己2、即使乘客知道司机饮酒，如果司机不听的负责，也是对司机和路人负责。 从乘客的劝诫，处罚乘客是不公平的。 2 你的看法： 满分文展示1： Dear Editor, I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we’ve had about whether passengers who ride in a car driven by a drunken driver should be punished.

A small part of the students approve of it for the reason that on one hand, this punishment can decrease the amount of the traffic accidents. On the other hand, it can improve the safety of passengers and drivers. Besides, avoiding riding in a car driven by a drunken driver is not only responsible for us, but also for the driver and pedestrians.

However, the majority of the students are strongly against this punishment in that they think it hard for passengers to judge whether the driver has drunk or not. What’s more, even the passengers know the driver has drunk, if the driver doesn’t accept their advice, it’s unfair to punish the passengers.

Personally, I think people who ride in a car driven by a drunken driver should be punished because the public’s safety is the most important.

作者分三个段落来完成此篇书面表达，先说明少数人赞成的观点，接着说明多数人反对的观点，最后给出作者自己的观点，并说明理由。结构紧凑，要点全面，作者观点鲜明，理由具有说服力。文章中作者使用了大量的高级词汇和高级结构，为文章增添了色彩。on one hand, on the other hand, besides, however, what’s more, personally等过渡词增强了文章的流畅性。 满分文展示2： I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we’ve had about whether passengers who ride in a car driven by a drunken driver should be punished.

The minority of the students who are for the idea think that it can reduce traffic accidents and promote the safety of traffic. They also think avoiding taking a car driven by a drunken driver is an activity responsible for passengers and the driver and other people on the road as well.

On the contrary, the majority of the students are opposed to it. The first reason they give lies in that passengers have difficulty finding whether a driver is drunken. Apart from that, even if passengers know that the driver is drunken, it is unfair to punish them when the driver doesn’t take their suggestion seriously.

In my view, it’s traffic security that greatly matters and we should punish those drunken drivers rather than the passengers.

该文的最大亮点是多处使用的复杂句式，体现作者娴熟的语言表达技巧。Be opposed to, take…seriously等高级短语的使用亦为文章增添了色彩。过渡词on the contrary, apart from, even if, in view, and等使用较为考究。综合全文的这些特点，该理应为一篇优秀作文。 标准范文： Dear Editor,

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I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we’ve had about whether passengers who ride in a car driven by a drunken driver should be punished.

The minority of the students hold the opinion that punishing the passengers helps reduce traffic accidents and increase traffic safety. Not to ride in a car driven by a drunken driver is not only a responsible behavior for passengers but also for the driver and other people on the road.

The majority of the students, however, disapprove of the idea, stating that it is difficult for common passengers to know whether the driver has been drinking or not. What’s more, even if the passenger knows the driver has drunk alcohol and has attempted to persuade the driver not to drive, it is unfair to punish the passenger when the driver does not follow the advice.

As far as I am concerned, punishing passengers as well as the drivers is not only unfair but also hard to carry out.

Yours sincerely, Li Hua

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北京大学2010年将试行由中学校长实名推荐的招生改革。被推荐的学生高考成绩可获得30分的加分。2009年11月16日北大公布了39所有推荐资格的中学名单。北大这一举措在全国引起了一场激烈的争论。请根据以下要点给《中国日报》写一篇有关这场争论的报导，并表达你对这场争论的看法（至少两点）。 支持方意见 反对方意见 1、是改革当前高考制度的大胆尝试。 1、可能导致作假。 2、能确保高素质学生和有特殊才华学生2、对全国那么多中学生不公平。 进入一流大学。 3、给被推荐的学生加分没意义。 3、促进中学重视学生的全面发展。 你的看法：1、?? 2、?? 满分文展示1 Peking University will enroll students recommended by high school principals this years. The recommended students will have an extra 30 points added to their national college entrance exam scores. Peking University’s move has set off a nationwide debate.

On the one hand, some people in favor of it think there is no doubt that Peking University’s move is a bold attempt of reforming the educational system. In addition, it is also a guarantee for outstanding students or those gifted in some aspects that they have a chance to be admitted into first-class universities. Besides, this move will encourage the middle schools to pay more attention to the all-round development of the students.

On the other hand, some think there are a lot of disadvantages of this move. First chances are that some students try to cheat because 30 points is a great lure for them. Also,

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