(英语)初三英语书面表达(一)解题方法和技巧及练习题

（英语）初三英语书面表达(一)解题方法和技巧及练习题

一、英语书面表达

1．亲爱的同学们，初中生活即将结束，你们一定有很多的感触.假如你是Tony,名城中学九（1）班的学生。请以 My junior high school life为题,写一篇80词左右的短文。 提示：

1.个人基本情况介绍

2.校园（校园干净而美丽，活动非富多彩）；老师（传授知识，教会做人,经常鼓励）；同学（和睦相处，互相学习，共同进步）。 3.对学校、老师、同学表达感谢和祝福。 要求：

1. 文章包含以上提示内容，适当发挥。 2.文中不能出现真实的校名和人名。 【答案】My junior high school life

My name is Tony. I am studying in Grade 9.As time goes by, my colorful junior middle school life is coming to an end. I’m glad to tell you something about my school life.

Our campus is clean and beautiful, and there are all kinds of activities. Our teachers teach us rich knowledge and how to behave ourselves. They also encourage us to work hard. We all get on well with our classmates. Besides, we learn from each other and make progress together. I thanks for my school, my teachers and my classmates. Wish them better. 【解析】 【分析】

这是一篇给材料作文，介绍我的初中生活。 【详解】

结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：My name is……，I’m glad to……，Our campus is……，Our teachers teach us……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。 【点睛】

本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我的个人情况，接下来介绍我们的校园，老师和同学，最后对学校、老师、同学表达感谢和祝福。此处go by, come to an end, tell sb about sth, all kinds of, behave oneself, encourage sb to do sth, get on with, learn from, make progress等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

2．书面表达

在本周班会课上，同学们对“初中生什么时候放学比较合适？”这一问题进行了热烈的讨论。大部分同学认为初中生应该在5点左右放学，下表所列里大家的发言记录。请你写一篇短文介绍大家的想法并阐述你的观点。 Time to leave school Activities to do after school ·at 5 o’clock ·at 4:45 ·at 5 o’clock ·... ·exercise to keep healthy and read books ·do what we want, such as listening to music ·take a part-time job ·... 注意：（1）短文必须包括表格中所有要点，并适当发挥； （2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名； （3）词数：80-100；

（4）短文开头仅供参考，不计入总词数。

短文开头：“What time should junior high school students leave school?” This week we have held a class meeting to talk about it. Here is the result of the discussion.

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【答案】“What time should junior high school students leave school?”This week we have held a class meeting to talk about it. Here is the result of the discussion.

Most students think that students should leave school at about 5 o 'clock. They can exercise to keep healthy and read more interesting books after school.

Some think that students should leave school at 4:45, because they can have more time to do what they want to do, such as listening to music.

A few think 5 o 'clock is the best time to finish school. After school, they can do part-time jobs, such as collecting discarded plastic bottles to sell for money.

I am in favor of leaving school at five o'clock. Besides having time to play tennis, I can also draw some pictures I like. 【解析】 【详解】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如hold a class meeting，talk about，the result of，keep healthy，after school，have more time to do，want to do，such as，listen to music，in favor of，clean the room，play tennis等。而复杂并列结构They can exercise to keep healthy and read more interesting books after school.和Most students think that students should leave school at about 5 o 'clock./ Some think that students should leave school at 4:45, because they can have more time to do what they want to do, such as listening to music.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化；同时Most students think…/ Some think…/ A few think…使叙述条理，层次分明，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。 【点睛】

书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要

尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

3．书面表达

初三的学习生活繁忙中有困惑、泪水，也有进步、喜悦。请根据表格提示，写一篇题为“Our school life in Grade Nine”的短文，介绍九年级的学校生活，并提出希望和建议。

老师 在校 学生 作业 周末 其它活动 愿望 …… （发挥一到两点） 锻炼，电视 …… （至少发挥两点） 作业多．舍弃爱好 工作认真负责，充满爱心 要求：

1．所写内容必须包括以上表格提供的所有信息，并适当发挥： 2．文章不少于90词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3．语意通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范； 4．文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息。 Our school life in Grade Nine

It is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student. Here is what our school life is like now.

【答案】Our school life in Grade Nine

It is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student. Here is what our school life is like now.

At school, all of our teachers work very hard. Most of them are patient enough to help us with all kinds of problems, whether in our study or in our life. As a result, they won high respect from us. As for students, in class we listen to the teacher carefully and think actively. After class, we are busy doing our homework. Every student is making efforts to try to achieve our dreams. At weekends, we usually spend a lot of time doing our homework, too. So we can't afford time for our hobbies any more. I feel a bit stressed actually, so I try to spare some time to play basketball or turn on my favorite TV program to get relaxed.

No pains, no gains. But the more carefully we plan our day, the more colorful our school life will be.

【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如at school，work hard，most of，patient enough，help sb. with sth.，all kinds of

problems，in our life，as a result，as for students，listen to，be busy doing，try to do，spend a lot of time doing，not any more，play basketball等。而It is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student./ But the more carefully we plan our day, the more colorful our school life will be.等多种特殊比较级句式结构的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。

点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

4．书面表达

你即将升入高中，面临寄宿（a boarding school）和走读（a day school）两类学校的选择。请你以“A boarding school or a day school”为题。写一篇短文，内容须包括：读寄宿学校的利和弊；读走读学校的利和弊；你的选择和理由（不得与上述两点内容重复）。

注意：1. 词数;100词左右（文章开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息；

3. 文章必须包含提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥。 A hoarding school or a day school

We are going to graduate from our middle school, __________________________________ 【答案】

We are going to graduate from our middle schools, and we will make a choice to enter a boarding school or a day school. Both kinds of school have their advantages and disadvantages. If we choose a boarding school, we will save time to study. However, we may have less time to stay with our family. If we choose a day school, parents can know more about our studies. At the same time computer games and TV plays may make a bad influence on us.

As for me, I prefer a boarding school. We should pay attention to our studies to get good grades in the high school. 【解析】 【分析】

整体分析：这是一篇给材料作文。可以分三段写。第一段要写总体交代你即将升入高中，面临寄宿（a boarding school）和走读（a day school）两类学校的选择。第二段要写详细叙

述读寄宿学校的利弊；读走读学校的利弊。第三段要表述作者自己的选择和理由。 【详解】

写作之前要1.审清题目，看看有哪些要求？哪些时态？人称？2.确定文章类型，记叙文？说明文？议论文？看图？还是应用文？3.确定时态，单一还是混合。4.写下关键词、短语、句型。5.列出提纲和段落，并运用适当的句型和过渡词衔接。6.根据提纲和段落结构句型及关键词句完成文章。写完后反复阅读修改推敲润色，人称、时态、单复数一致等。运用自然过渡法和自然衔接法来是文章更为地道、通顺、纯正。用的短语、句型：both kinds of、If we choose a boarding school、At the same time、As for me, I prefer a boarding school、pay attention to、来增加了文章的亮点。 【点睛】

这类作文的写作方法要注意认真审题，注意过渡性语言的使用。做到：要点要全，表达要清晰明确，使用短语，句型要准确，注意避免拼写和语法错误。

5．书面表达

初中毕业在即, 回顾三年的学习生活, 你一定有成功的体验, 如一次考试, 一次比赛, 一次表演......

请你以Believe Myself, and I Will Win为题写一篇演讲稿。 提示：（1）What was the event? （2）How did you make it? （3）What’s your feeling?

要求：（1）发言稿中须包括所有提示内容, 可适当发挥。 （2）发言稿中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。 （3）词数80个左右（开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数）。 Believe Myself, and I Will Win Hello,

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Thank you for your listening. 【答案】Believe Myself, and I will win

Hello, everyone! As an old saying goes, where there is a will, there is a way. There always are difficulties in our life and we have to face them.

When I was in the seventh grade, I always had difficulty in learning English. I just couldn’t understand it. I even wanted to give it up. Then my parents told me that where there is a will, there is a way. They also told me that I should be confident. My English teacher encouraged me to continue to study and told me some good ways to study it. I had the confidence again. I found when I put my heart into it, English didn’t’ seem that difficult. I made great progress. My parents and teachers were happy for me. I felt pleased and proud for myself, too.

To be confident means I should believe myself. Believe myself, there are hopes in my life. In the future, I won't be afraid of the difficulties in my life and I'm sure that nothing can beat me and I will win! Believe myself, a beautiful future is waiting for me.