2．评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言质量初步确定其档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，
确定或调整档次，最后给分。
3．评分时应考虑：文章是否扣题，结构是否完整，内容是否充实、健康，思维是否活跃，
逻辑是否清晰，语言是否规范，交际是否得体。
4．拼写、标点符号或书写影响内容表达时，应视其影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写词汇用
法均可接受。
5．词数少于50，从总分中减去1分。 二、One possible version:
As is shown in the picture, a half-empty bottle is going to stick a label of “full” on its body, feeling proud and confident.
The picture seems to be reflecting a kind of social phenomenon. We might often meet some people who look confident, trying to impress others with their “rich” knowledge. However, just like the bottle in the picture, what they really know is just a little. What they actually have in their head is far from enough. As an old saying goes, empty bottles make the loudest noise.
Therefore, it’s wise to enrich ourselves with knowledge and try to make our head full. 海淀一
四、One possible version:
Recently the student union conducted a survey on whether recycling dustbins should be set in classrooms.
As can be seen from the pie chart, different students hold different opinions on this program. Only a few students care little about it. Surprisingly, about one third of students are totally against the program. They don’t bother to change their old habits. However, over half the students are completely for the program, as it is not only beneficial to recycling of resources, but also it can help students develop their good habits of garbage classification. Besides, 12% of the students partly agree. They hold the opinion that educating people on how to classify the garbage goes first.
Personally, I’m in favor of this program. I believe it’s important to raise people’s awareness of garbage classification, from which we will get considerable benefits for the future.
三、One possible version:
In the picture, there is a cup, which is usually presented to the winners in sports competitions. The cup is definitely a symbol of great success. But what makes me puzzled is that a magnifying glass is used to see its light scratch on the cup, which is not at all obvious.
What I see in this picture reminds me of people who use a magnifying glass to see the faults in others. Those people are usually very demanding and picky. They only see the “scratches” instead of the whole cup. As we all know, everyone has both strengths and weaknesses. Therefore, we should be objective about others’ achievements rather than find faults with them on purpose. Only in this way can harmony be achieved and conflicts be avoided. 宣武一
第一节：情景作文（20分） One possible version: Today we went to climb Xinagshan Mountain. Early in the morning we met at the school gate and went there by bus. At nine o’clock we arrived at the foot of the mountain and started climbing. The mountain was very high and some
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of us got tired soon, but all of us were very excited. We cheered happily when we got to the top. The view was wonderful. We had our lunch there and enjoyed ourselves very much. Unfortunately when we began to walk down the mountain, we were caught in a storm. Faced with unexpected situation, our teacher remained calm, asking us to help each other down. So we shared our umbrellas and raincoats with each other and walked more cautiously. Finally we all reached the parking lot safely and got on the bus heading back home. Despite the unexpected rain and wind, we still had a good time. 第二节：开放作文（15分） One possible version: In the picture, we can see a man picking apples. But in order to pick the apples, he cuts down the tree. The picture wants to tell us that whatever we do, we shouldn’t only focus on what we are doing at present. If we neglect our future, we’ll end up in failure. Just like the man in the picture, although he can get apples this time, he will never get fruits from the tree again. The picture reminds me of the environmental problems. If we pay no attention to the environment just in order to earn more money now, how can we live a happy life in the dirty surroundings? So try to think about our future when doing things. 东城一
三、One possible version:
Community Service
During the winter vacation, the students in our class joined in a meaningful activity in which all of us did our bit for the community. Fist we went to visit an old lady who lived all alone. While we were in her home, one of us chatted with her and the rest helped do a thorough cleaning. We swept the floor and dusted the table. When the work was done, the house looked really neat and tidy then we went to the sports center, where different sports facilities needed polishing. We set out to work at once. In no time everything was dust-free. To make the environment clean, we also picked up the litter on the grass and along the paths. As the Spring Festival was around the corner, we put up New Year decorations on the billboard and a poster with the characters Happy Chinese New Year on it.
Having done all these, we saw a more pleasant community. Tired as we were, we felt happy as all of our work paid off. 第二节开放作文(15分) 二、One possible version：
In the picture we see a group of children playing hopscotch happily while a boy is sitting in front of his computer，fully absorbed in a game．
This picture intends to show how children today and in the past spend their free time．In the old days, there was no modem equipment such as TV sets or computers，so children killed time，playing games outdoors．With the development of science and technology，children are so attracted by computer games that they become addicted and stay in front of the screen all day long．Unlike the kids playing hopscotch，a team game，the boy who tends to spend more time alone easily develops psychological problems such as a 1ack of a sense of cooperation and communication skills．
So in my opinion，modern science may not benefit people．
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