2020届浙江省新高考高三英语作文“内容概要”
模拟练习(七)写作指导
一、概写原文
二、概写步骤
第一步:通读理解全文,了解文章结构,明确各段落之间的逻辑关系,提取全文中心
词(尤其是名词与动词)。
第二步:细读原文,划出各段的主题句与关键词,关键词以动词与名词为主,涵盖段落全部要点与次要点。
第三步:根据所划内容,结合理解,重新组织语言。可用中文概括出段落大意,然后用一句话翻译出来。
第四步:通读修改。修改是一个重要的环节,要考虑连接词的使用;高级词汇的替换;句式的多样;语法是否正确以及字数的多少。
第五步:用自信衡水体抄到试卷上,力求清楚美观。
三、分段概括
关键词句已在原文标出,结合理解,用中文概括出一句话并译成英文。
?无人驾驶汽车似乎带来了我们想要的好处,但是它们可能有负众望。
Driverless cars seem to bring desired benefits, but they may not be as good as expected.
?首先,并不存在真正的自动汽车。如果出现意外,它们仍然要(对意外)负责。
Firstly, truly automated cars don't exist and if an emergency arises, they are still to blame.
?其次,太多的应用到汽车的代码增加了代码错误风险,这些(代码错误)转而引起了
事故。
Secondly, too many codes applied to cars increase the risk of errors, which in turn cause accidents.
?此外,由于心理原因,人们总是对这项技术持怀疑态度。
Additionally, for psychological reasons, people tend to have doubts about the technology.
?总之,无论多先进,它们不能替代人类驾驶员。
Anyway, they are no substitute for human drivers, however advanced.
四、组句成文
Driverless cars seem to bring desired benefits, but they may not be as good as expected.(要点1)Firstly, truly automated cars don't exist and if an emergency arises, they are still to blame.(要点2)Secondly, too many codes applied to cars increase the risk of errors, which in turn cause accidents.(要点3)Additionally, for psychological reasons, people tend to have doubts about the technology.(要点4)Anyway, they are no substitute for human drivers, however advanced.(要点5)【70字】
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