【英语】九年级下册英语书面表达解析版汇编含解析

【英语】九年级下册英语书面表达解析版汇编含解析

一、英语书面表达

1． 如今，很多城市出现了一种绿色出行方式――共享单车（bike-sharing），它因环保、便捷而备受青睐，但同时也引发了一些问题。请你根据提示以＂Bike-sharing＂为题写一篇英语短文，表达自己的看法和建议。 要点提示：

Be convenient, less pollution, reduce the traffic pressure（减缓交通压力） Take exercise… Advantages Problems Advice Throw away, damage（毁损）, be stolen… Civilized（文明的）, follow the rules, take good care of… 注意：

1. 短文应包括以上要点，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名及地名；

3. 词数：80-100（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。

Bike-sharing

Today, as a greener means of transportation, bike-sharing is becoming more and more popular in many cities.

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Today,as a greener means of transportation, bike-sharing is becoming more and more popular in many cities. It's known that it has many advantages. So it's enjoyed by lots of people. First of all, it's very convenient for people to go somewhere.【高分句型一】Also, it helps to reduce the traffic pressure. There will be less pollution because of bike-sharing. Besides, bike-sharing helps people take more exercise.In this way, it's helpful to people's health.（优势） However, it also brings some problems. For example, some people throw them away after using bikes. Even some people damage them, and some bikes are stolen.（难题）

In my opinion, everyone should try to be civilized and follow the rules of using bikes. As long as we take good care of bikes, it will make our life better and better,and our environment will be more beautiful.【高分句型二】（建议） 【解析】

【详解】

这篇短文内容丰富，表达了所有要点，语言表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。在短文中使用了大量的复合句、固定句式、连词及固定短语，为文章增色不少，.如: It's known that it has many advantages.，First of all, it's very convenient for people to go somewhere.，Also, Besides, In this way, However, it also brings some problems. For example, In my opinion,等。 【点睛】

本文要求以“Bike-sharing”为题，根据表格的内容提示，写一篇短文，表达自己对共享单车的看法和建议。写作时，考生要紧密贴合表格中的三个要点：首先，阐述共享单车的优点；其次，列举共享单车带来的问题；最后，根据问题给出个人建议。

2．书面表达 我的英语学习

初中即将毕业，你在英语学习方面积累了较多的经验与方法，请你向你的表弟介绍你的做法，根据下面表格中的内容，按要求用英语写一篇短文， 多听 多说 多读书 语法规则 写作 其他 听收音机，听音乐等，可以放松...... 运用英语，增强能力与信心...... 开阔视野，了解英语文化...... 更好地理解与运用...... 写写日常生活...... ...... 要求：1．语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范； 2．必须包含表格中所有内容，并作适当发挥 3．行文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名； 4．词数80－100。

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】My English Study

How time flies! My three-year middle school life will be over soon. Looking back, I have many memories of my English study.

First, listen more. Listening to the radio is a good way to learn English. We can relax ourselves by listening to English songs. Second, say more. Use spoken English when communicating with classmates. Speaking English can enhance the ability and confidence to learn English well. Third, read more English books. Reading can broaden our horizon and help us understand English culture. In addition, learn some grammar rules to better understand and use English. Finally, we

can write about our daily life.

In a word, only when we develop interest in studying English can we learn it well. 【解析】 【详解】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如look back，listen to the radio，a good way to learn English，relax ourselves，communicate with，help sb. do，do more reading，in addition，in a word等。而感叹句How time flies!，倒装句only when we develop interest in studying English can we learn it well.和复杂从句结构Use spoken English when communicating with classmates.的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。 【点睛】

书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

3． 世界卫生组织的一项研究报告显示，我国青少年近视率居世界第一。2019年全国两会当中“小眼镜”成关注重点，防控青少年近视迫在眉睫。以下表格是学校针对本校学生近视问题做的调查表，假如你是校报编辑Jack，请根据所提供的信息，用英语写一篇调查报告，陈述学校调查结果，并表明你自己的观点和理由。 我校学生的近视问题调查 情况 60%的本校学生戴眼镜。 1. 不良的看书习惯，如在床上或阳光下看书…… 原因 2. 长时间玩手机、看电视、玩电脑…… 3. 学习时间长，作业多…… 1. 认真做眼保健操 建议 2. 多吃胡萝卜等对眼睛有益的食物 3. …… 参考词汇： 近视 nearsighted

注意： 1. 内容须包括所提示的信息，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和学校名称； 3. 词数：80-100，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。

According to a survey carried out by WHO, the number of teenagers who are nearsighted is the largest in

China._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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【答案】According to a survey carried out by WHO, the number of teenagers who are

nearsighted is the largest in China. As we all know that the eyes are very important for us. So it is important for everyone to keep good eyesight. But do you know how to protect your eyesight？First, don't keep your eyes work for a long time. Don't spend too much time on mobile phones, TV and computers. Secondly, pay attention to the following: Don't read in the sun; don't read in bed or in a moving bus. And when you read you should keep the book away from your eyes for about a foot. And thirdly, do eye-exercises every day. You should eat more carrots and other eye-friendly foods. It will also help you keep good eyesight. I think, you may prevent your eyesight from becoming nearsighted. 【解析】 【详解】

这是一篇材料作文，根据表格中的相关信息介绍一下如何保护视力。所提供的表格中列举了近视的原因和建议。主要从原因和建议两个方面去介绍。时态为一般现在时。注意作文中必须包含表格上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中要注意使用祈使句，使上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。 【高分句型一】

So it is important for everyone to keep good eyesight. 所以保持良好的视力对每个人都很重要。

本题运用句型：It is +形容词+for sb. to so sth. 【高分句型二】

And when you read you should keep the book away from your eyes for about a foot. 当你读这本书的时候，你应该把它从你的眼睛里移开一英尺。 when you read是由when引导的时间状语从句。

4． 最近一份学生体质健康调查结果显示，学生近视率仍维持在高位水平，且越来越低龄化。请根据下表所提示的内容，用英语写一篇短文，并发表自己的观点。 现 状 主要原因 大约70%学生眼睛近视 1. 睡眠不足 2. 长时间看书、做作业、用电脑等 预防方法 你的观点 1. 做眼睛保健操，多进行体育活动 2. 养成正确的用眼习惯 … ….（至少一条） 参考词汇：近视的 shortsighted 要求：

（1）词数：80～100个。 （2）开头已给出，不计入总词数。 （3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。

The survey shows that many students have become shortsighted at a very young age. At present, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【答案】The survey shows that many students have become shortsighted at a very young age. At present, about 70% of the students are shortsighted. Here are some main causes. Some students may not have enough sleep. Some students spend too much time reading or doing their homework without a rest. Some students even like to watch TV or use computers for a long time.

In order to have good eyesight, we should do eye exercises every day. We can also try to do more sports in our spare time. We should have the good habit of using our eyes.

I think all of us should understand the importance of protecting eyes and try our best to protect them. 【解析】 【详解】

这是一篇图表作文。根据题干要求可知，本篇文章主要使用一般现在时写作，人称用第三人称复数和第一人称。内容包括：学生近视原因：1.睡眠不足（not enough）2.长时间看书、做作业、用电脑等（for a long time）防止近视的方法：1.做眼睛保健操，多进行体育活动（eye exercises）2.养成正确的用眼习惯（have the good habit of）个人观点：如：我认为，我们应该了解保护眼睛的重要性，尽最大努力保护我们的眼睛。（I think ???；try one's best to do sth.）。

常用的重点句型和短语有：sb. spend some time doing sth.，in order to do sth.，try to do sth.，the importance of…等。

5．书面表达

你即将升入高中，面临寄宿（a boarding school）和走读（a day school）两类学校的选择。请你以“A boarding school or a day school”为题。写一篇短文，内容须包括：读寄宿学校的利和弊；读走读学校的利和弊；你的选择和理由（不得与上述两点内容重复）。