Students feel pressured to study hard because the unemployment rate is increasing. 翻译 64：种族歧视仍然很严重
错误的句子：People find it hard to overcome the racial discrimination against some social groups.
错误这个句子比较大的问题就是主语是 Ppeple就是被歧视的人，最后又跑到句末做against 的宾语。
正确的句子：Racial discrimination remains a serious problem.
句子的结构：主语+ 系动词(remain)+ 表语，可以用状语从句扩充
Racial discrimination remains a serious problem, although governments promote equality.
中文翻译：虽然政府促进平等，但是种族歧视仍然是一个严重问题。 翻译 65:死记乘法表并不是提高算术能力的最好方式。
错误的句子： Learning time tables by rote are not the best way that improves arithmetic ability.
错误 1：动名词做主语，谓语动词应该是“is” 错误 2：“way that?”定语从句，太过繁琐
正确的句子：Learning the times table by rote is not the best way to improve numeracy.
句子结构: 主语(Learning the times table by rote)+系动词(is)+表语（the best way）；而“to improve numeracy”是后置定语修饰 way。
翻译 66:贫穷国家的首要问题是满足人们基本生存需求
错误的句子：Deprived countries concern how to satisfy citizens' requirements of survive.
错误 1 concern 类似于 worry 或者 involve,在这里都不对 错误 2 requirements 语意理解错误
错误 3 Of 后面要加名词，而 survive 是动词 正确的句子：The top priority for deprived countries is to satisfy citizens' basic needs. 句子的结构: 主语(priority)+系动词 (is)+表语 (to satisfy citizens’ basic needs) 拓展的句子： The top priority for deprived countries is to satisfy citizens' basic needs, which is an effective method to sustain social stability 错误：定语从句的先行词不清楚 正确的句子：The top priority for deprived countries is to satisfy citizens' basic needs, and by doing this, governments can sustain social stability. 中文翻译：贫穷国家的首要问题是满足人们基本生存需求，这是维持国家稳定一个有效方法。
翻译 67:基因食物对健康的影响仍然未知。错误的句子
The impact that genetic food has on our health still remains unknown.
错误 1 其实定语从句中，最好要规避这种先行词充当从句宾语的情况，读起来比较别扭。
错误 2 remains 已经包含 still。
错误 3 genetic food 这个表达也不是很好。
正确的句子：The health effect of GE food remains unclear/yet to be known.
句子结构：主语（health effect）+系动词（remains）+表语（unclear）也可以用状语从句拓展
The health effect of GE food remains unclear, so clear food labeling is strongly advocated.
注：clear food labeling 就是商场食品上清晰的标签（说清楚食物的特点）中文翻译：基因食物对健康的影响仍然未知，所以清楚的食物标签被强烈提倡。 翻译 68：网络购物对于很多人已经成为生活中的很普通的一部分。
错误的：It has become an important part for most people to shop online in daily life. 错误“part of daily life ”是固定的说法
正确的句子：Online shopping has become a normal part of people’s everyday life. 句子结构：主语+系动词+表语
翻译 69：在一个消费社会里，人们不再满足生活必需品（bare necessities）。 错误的句子：in a throw-away society, people are not satisfied with bare necessities any more.
错误 1：throw-away society 这个词伙不对。 错误 2：not ? any more 一般是形容量的东西，而 no longer 强调动作的持续。 正确句子：In the consumer society, bare necessities are not able to satisfy people’s needs.
翻译 70：人们不健康的生活方式是他们倾向于依赖科技的结果。
错误的句子：Unhealthy lifestyle is the result of trend to rely on science and technology.
错误 1：Unhealthy lifestyle 是可数名词，需要加冠词 错误 2：“trend toward doing something”还有“tendency to do something”
正确的句子：People’s unhealthy lifestyle is the result of their tendency to rely heavily on technology.
主语（unhealthy lifestyle）+系动词（is）+表语（the result）;“of?”全是定语 拓展的句子：People’s unhealthy lifestyle is the result of their tendency to rely heavily on technology, because this makes their lives more convenience. 错误 1：convenience 是名词
错误 2：because 引导的原因状语从句不清晰，到底是解释 unhealthy lifestyle，还是解释 rely heavily on technology？
正确的句子：People’s unhealthy lifestyle is the result of their tendency to rely heavily on technology, despite the fact that technology has made their lives convenient and improved their lives significantly. 中文翻译：人们不健康的生活方式是他们倾向于依赖科技的结果，尽管事实上科技让他们的生活更加方便，给他们的生活带来很大提高。 翻译 71：贫穷是社区犯罪上升的原因。
错误的句子：The reason which cause increasingly number of community crimes in society is poverty.
错误 1：reason which cause，从句的主谓不一致，而且搭配不好 错误 2：increasingly number 副词不能修饰名词
错误 3：这个学生硬是把简单的事情罗嗦地说出来，很别扭。雅思考试考的是语言的通顺和地道，而不是考你的句子是否够复杂。
正确的句子： Poverty is responsible for the crime wave in many communities. 句子结构：主语（poverty）+系动词（is）+表语(responsible) 拓展的句子： Because of low-cost carriers, the aviation industry has developed at an
astounding pace over the past decades, that means people's traveling will become more convenience and safety.
错误 1：一般来说是 this means that
错误 2：become 是系动词，后面加形容词去修饰主语。错误 3：safety 和前面 low –cost carriers 没什么联系。
正确的句子：Because of low-cost carriers, the aviation industry has developed at an astounding pace over the past decades, and this means that people are tempted to travel more frequently than before.
中文翻译：因为费用的下降，航空最近几十年发展得很快，这意味着人们会比以前更多旅游。
翻译 72：电子汽车的发明是我们维护环境所做努力的其中一部分。
错误的句子：The invention of electric vehicles is a part of our efforts aiming at preserving the environment. 错误 1：一般是“part of” 错误 2：“effort to do something”更为通顺，在这里
正确的句子：The invention of electric vehicles is part of our effort to sustain the environment.
主语（The invention of electric vehicles）+系动词（is）+表语（part ）; “of?”全是定语
拓展的句子：The invention of electric vehicles is part of our effort to sustain the environment, because electric vehicles do not conduct exhaust emission, compared with fossil fuel motors
错误 1：electric vehicles 重复
错误 2：conduct exhaust emission 搭配问题
错误 3：fossil fuel motors 用词不好，MOTOR 是马达的意思。
正确的句子：The invention of electric vehicles is part of our effort to sustain the environment because these vehicles create less exhaust fumes than conventional cars.
中文翻译：电子汽车的发明是我们维护环境所做努力的其中一部分，因为这些汽车比传统汽车产生较少的废气
翻译 73：送贵重的礼物（lavish gifts）是中国的习惯
错误的句子：It is very common for Chinese to send lavish gifts to other.
错误的原因：other 是形容词，充当定语，这里需要一个名词性的代词，充当介词 to 的宾语
正确的句子：It is very common for Chinese people to exchange lavish gifts. 句子结构：主语+系动词+表语；it 是形式主语，“to exchange lavish gifts”不定式是真正的主语。
其他选择：Exchanging lavish gifts is a tradition in China 句子结构：主语+系动词+表语也可以用并列句+状语从句来扩充
Exchanging lavish gifts is a tradition in China and many people feel they lose face when giving or receiving inexpensive gifts. 中文翻译：送贵重礼物是一种中国传统，当收到或者送便宜礼物的时候许多人觉得没面子。
翻译 74：未来几十年我们很难保护植物多样性
错误的句子：We will find it difficult for us to protect the biodiversity of vegetation in the coming decades.
错误 1 we... for us 重复错误 2 vegetation 略显重复
正确的句子：We will find it difficult to preserve biodiversity in the coming decades. 句子结构: 主语+ 谓语+宾语（it，形式宾语） + 宾语补足语（difficult），而不定式是真正的宾语,还可以扩充为状语从句
Unless local authorities reduce the impact of city expansion on vegetation, we will find it difficult to preserve biodiversity in the coming decades. 中文翻译：除非当地政府减少城市扩张对植物的影响，否则在未来几十年里我们会发现保护物种多样性很困难。
翻译 75：随着年龄增长，很难和朋友和家人保持联系
错误的句子：As the growing age, people is hard to connect with their families and friends frequently.
错误 1 As the growing age 没有这个表达错误 2 people is 主谓不一致 错误 3 人无难易之分错误 4 connect frequently 不搭配
正确的：With age, people find it difficult to maintain contact with family and friends. 句子结构：主语(people)+ 谓语(find)+宾语（it，形式宾语） + 宾语补足语（difficult），而不定式是真正的宾语
注：contact 动词的时候是及物动词，不能加介词，people find it easy to contact their friends today.
学生的句子：With age, people find it difficult to maintain contact with family and friends, due to fact that they are occupied with career development and advance education.
错误= advance education 没有这个表达错误 4 connect frequently 不搭配
正确的句子：With age, people find it difficult to maintain contact with family and friends, as they are occupied with work and other commitments.
中文翻译：随着年龄的增加，人们发现保持与亲人和朋友的联系变得困难，因为他们被工作和其他任务占据。
翻译 76：免费上大学使得家景不好的学生有同等的上学机会
错误的句子：Free tuition fees makes it possible for students from less well-off background have equal access to tertiary education.
错误 1 make it possible for somebody to do something. 错误 3 background 用复数
正确的句子：Free university education makes it possible for students from less well-off backgrounds to have equal access to tertiary education.
注：access 是不可数名词，access to something 习惯搭配；access 也可以是及物动词，但是一般没有“access education”这个说法。 注：tertiary education=university education 句子结构：句子结构：主语+ 谓语+宾语（it，形式宾语） + 宾语补足语（difficult），而不定式（to have equal access to tertiary education）是真正的宾语 还可以用名词性从句(believe that )和定语从句(who agree with)扩充
People who agree with free university education believe that this practice makes it possible for students from less well-off backgrounds to have equal access to tertiary education.
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