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to their life．
译文：他们可以在任何地方购买商品，这给他们的生活带来了便利． 分析：这句话使用which引导非限制性定语从句．
高分句型二：Some people think that mobile payment brings convenience to people， while others think that there are security risks in this way．
译文：一些人认为移动支付给人们带来了便利，而另一些人则认为这种方式存在安全风险．
分析：think后面接that引导的宾语从句，while连接并列句．
【解答】At present， mobile payment is enjoying great popularity in China． More and more young people choose to use mobile payment． They can pay for goods everywhere， which brings convenience to their life． 【高分句型一】（简要描述你或你身边的人在日常生活中使用移动支付的现象）
Some people think that mobile payment brings convenience to people， while others think that there are security risks in this way． 【高分句型二】The biggest benefit of mobile payment is to solve the problem of time and space for payment． It improves the convenience of payment． Besides， connected with the life organization system ， it increases the richness of life， and adds functions including finance， social security， transportation and so on． The risk of the system itself is small， but because of the imbalance of information generation， people who do not recognize the illegal behavior are easilyto be cheated．（通过与传统方式的比较，谈谈移动支付给人们带来的利与弊）
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