higher taxation—more public services and facilities—higher life quality Watching televesion?—bad---sedentary lifestyle—bad
eyesight/obesity/lack of exerciese/lack of outdoor activities—solitary and isolated—loss of social skill 原因-结果-结果
原因1—sub reason1+ sub reason 2
Diction: collocation Perspective: content
构思（连贯性）+措辞（准确性） 中间部分细节语言的措辞要求：v
1 用action verbs instead of be verb.(vt. VS vi.) V+名词类（多指物）
提升improve (improve standards of living, improve skills, improve intellectual level…) 减少reduce/lower， 刺激stimulate/spur， 促进promote/enhance,
加强 strengthen (highlight moral education, highlight its aesthetic value, strengthen administrative management)等
Erode 逐渐危害…(erode personal confidence, erode sense of identity; The overuse of English as an international/global language will erode the sense of identity in different cultures.) V+to do类
decide to do, fail to do, attempt to do, endeavor to do, strive to do, tend to do, intend to do, incline to do, determine to do, hesitate to do,be willing to do, be reluctant to do, be likely to do, be unlikely to do…等 V+sb to do
help sb to do, allow sb to do, prompt sb to do, permit sb to do, motivate sb to do, encourage sb to do, inspire sb to do, enable sb to do, empower sb to do, force sb to do, compel sb to do等 此类动词常用被动语态
With the acceleration of technological innovation and the decreased cost of surfing online, students are enabled to get easy access to Internet and the outer world. V+that…表明，认为
Show, indicate, suggest, reveal； believe, hold, argue, maintain, contend, claim, deem that… 不及物动词
发生，出现，消失，存在，成长，等
Occur, happen, appear, disappear, vanish, exist, grow等 不及物动词不能使用被动语态 如 *what happened?????
2 ）如果用be adj, 最好加强句型变成 be so adj that …. Be good/desirable/popular that…
Miniblog is so popular these days that not only commoners but also stars are using this medium as a way of entertainment and an access to the world.
Be so bad/severe/undesirable that…
Environmental degradation has been so severe that the governments have to spend billions of dollars in disposing of the sewage, soil erosion and global warming.
Miniblog is very hot for many young people. Be so unimaginable that..
3 在合适的名词之后可以考虑加上which, that的定语从句
4考虑使用it做形式主语的句子，如it take sb some time to do等
It is obvious/noticeable/clear that…=Obviously, Clearly, Noticeably, ….
It is widely-acknowledged that…
It is unquestionable that…=Undoubtedly,…= Doubtless, ….
It is tempting/attractive that…
It is reasonable and in the public interest that…(It is reasonable and in the public interest to raise the environmentally-friendly awareness and lead a low-carbon life.)(It is reasonable and in the public interest that the government distributes more financial budget to the optimization of public services)
5 用一些修辞的固定搭配, 如 a shadow of doubt, a mountain of debts,
the tide of immigrants等。
Man proposes, God disposes. We aim to please, you aim too please.
思路如何解决
品质，教育类话题思路：(动词对象，以及段落内容和逻辑展开的领域）
1 mental/psychological/emotional 精神、心理，情感角度
(independence, tolerance, empathy; communication, interaction, cohesion; honesty, integrity, altruism)
2 intellectual 知识角度 ( improve skills, expand knowledge, advance career)
3 educational/social 教育、社交角度(improve social skills, be positive and active, strengthen emotional bonds) 4 self-actualization/recognition 2013/6
Firstly, to engage in/take up something of minor importance is helpful for people to grow confident because they can accomplish such tasks on their own. Plus, a person with a strong sense of confidence is more likely to lead a healthy, optimistic and promising life. 社会，科技, 环境类话题思路 1 economic 经济角度
2 academic/technological 学术、科技角度 3 cultural/media 文化、媒体角度 4 environmental 环境角度
5 informative 资讯角度 (information explosion, fragmentary
information (Firstly, the contemporary university students are subjected to the information explosion and popular social networks, and it takes them several hours to surf online for entertainment news or games. The acquisition of such fragmentary information does great harm to their academic studies because it fails to constitute a systematic structure of knowledge.) (Secondly, to acquire information or knowledge via smartphones is not so effective a method that students are able to apply/exercise their specific skills or to expand their knowledge. Culture: a pattern of people’s thinking and behaviors; ---lifestyle, tradition,
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