2020-2021年中考英语书面表达经典例题经典

2020-2021年中考英语书面表达经典例题经典

一、中考英语书面表达（含答案详细解析）

1．近日，某中学 “iPad进课堂”的消息引起了学生和家长们的讨论。你们学校的English Newsletter正在以iPads, coming into the classrooms为题举行征文活动，请根据右侧表格提示的内容，用英语写一篇征文。

1.不需要背沉重的书包去上学 学生们认为 2.很新鲜，学习更感兴趣 3.…… 家长们认为 1.影响孩子视力 2.增加家庭负担 1.…… 2.…… 你的观点

注意：

1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；

2）所写内容必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，观点可作适当发挥； 3）词数：90词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 iPads, coming into the classrooms

Can you use an iPad in the classroom? The answer is yes! Recently, students and parents are arguing about the new teaching method.

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】iPads, coming into the classrooms

Can you use an iPad in the classroom? The answer is yes! Recently, students and parents are arguing about the new teaching method.

The students don’t think they have to carry heavy bags any more. It’s cool to have lessons over iPads. It’s very interesting to study like that. They believe that they will learn more and better. However,parents think using ipads for too long will influence children’s eyesight. And some poor families can’t afford to buy iPads.

I think in some ways iPads are good for us. We can search for information on the Internet at any time. It’s easy for us to chat with our classmates and teachers about our lessons.

【解析】根据题目要求，需要书写一篇议论文，探讨iPad进课堂这一现象，以及人们对此的不同观点和态度。文章需要使用一般现在时态，第三人称。结合观点式议论文的段落格式，首先在第一段提出问题现象，第二段表达支持这种行为做法的原因和好处，第三段描

述反对人的观点及原因，最后一段表达自己的观点。注意多使用固定短语，固定句型，使文章增色。 点睛：对立观点式 第一段：提出现象。

第二段：Some people are in favor of the idea of doing X.

They point out the fact that _______________________支持X 的第一个原

因。 They also argue that _____________________________支持X 的另一个原因。 第三段：However, other people stand on a different ground. They consider it harmful to do X.

They firmly point out that ________________________反对X 的第一个理

由。 An example can give the details of this argument: ________________一个例子。 第四段：There is some truth in both arguments. But I think the advantages of X overweigh the disadvantages.

In addition to the abovementioned negative effects it might bring about, X also may X 的有一个坏处。

2． 如今，很多城市出现了一种绿色出行方式――共享单车（bike-sharing），它因环保、便捷而备受青睐，但同时也引发了一些问题。请你根据提示以＂Bike-sharing＂为题写一篇英语短文，表达自己的看法和建议。 要点提示：

Be convenient, less pollution, reduce the traffic pressure（减缓交通压力） Take exercise… Advantages Problems Advice Throw away, damage（毁损）, be stolen… Civilized（文明的）, follow the rules, take good care of… 注意：

1. 短文应包括以上要点，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名及地名；

3. 词数：80-100（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。

Bike-sharing

Today, as a greener means of transportation, bike-sharing is becoming more and more popular in many cities.

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____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Today,as a greener means of transportation, bike-sharing is becoming more and more popular in many cities. It's known that it has many advantages. So it's enjoyed by lots of people. First of all, it's very convenient for people to go somewhere.【高分句型一】Also, it helps to reduce the traffic pressure. There will be less pollution because of bike-sharing. Besides, bike-sharing helps people take more exercise.In this way, it's helpful to people's health.（优势） However, it also brings some problems. For example, some people throw them away after using bikes. Even some people damage them, and some bikes are stolen.（难题）

In my opinion, everyone should try to be civilized and follow the rules of using bikes. As long as we take good care of bikes, it will make our life better and better,and our environment will be more beautiful.【高分句型二】（建议） 【解析】 【详解】

这篇短文内容丰富，表达了所有要点，语言表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。在短文中使用了大量的复合句、固定句式、连词及固定短语，为文章增色不少，.如: It's known that it has many advantages.，First of all, it's very convenient for people to go somewhere.，Also, Besides, In this way, However, it also brings some problems. For example, In my opinion,等。 【点睛】

本文要求以“Bike-sharing”为题，根据表格的内容提示，写一篇短文，表达自己对共享单车的看法和建议。写作时，考生要紧密贴合表格中的三个要点：首先，阐述共享单车的优点；其次，列举共享单车带来的问题；最后，根据问题给出个人建议。

3．书面表达

你即将升入高中，面临寄宿（a boarding school）和走读（a day school）两类学校的选择。请你以“A boarding school or a day school”为题。写一篇短文，内容须包括：读寄宿学校的利和弊；读走读学校的利和弊；你的选择和理由（不得与上述两点内容重复）。

注意：1. 词数;100词左右（文章开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息；

3. 文章必须包含提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥。

A hoarding school or a day school

We are going to graduate from our middle school, __________________________________ 【答案】

We are going to graduate from our middle schools, and we will make a choice to enter a boarding school or a day school. Both kinds of school have their advantages and disadvantages. If we choose a boarding school, we will save time to study. However, we may have less time to stay with our family. If we choose a day school, parents can know more about our studies. At the same time computer games and TV plays may make a bad influence on us.

As for me, I prefer a boarding school. We should pay attention to our studies to get good grades in the high school. 【解析】 【分析】

整体分析：这是一篇给材料作文。可以分三段写。第一段要写总体交代你即将升入高中，面临寄宿（a boarding school）和走读（a day school）两类学校的选择。第二段要写详细叙述读寄宿学校的利弊；读走读学校的利弊。第三段要表述作者自己的选择和理由。 【详解】

写作之前要1.审清题目，看看有哪些要求？哪些时态？人称？2.确定文章类型，记叙文？说明文？议论文？看图？还是应用文？3.确定时态，单一还是混合。4.写下关键词、短语、句型。5.列出提纲和段落，并运用适当的句型和过渡词衔接。6.根据提纲和段落结构句型及关键词句完成文章。写完后反复阅读修改推敲润色，人称、时态、单复数一致等。运用自然过渡法和自然衔接法来是文章更为地道、通顺、纯正。用的短语、句型：both kinds of、If we choose a boarding school、At the same time、As for me, I prefer a boarding school、pay attention to、来增加了文章的亮点。 【点睛】

这类作文的写作方法要注意认真审题，注意过渡性语言的使用。做到：要点要全，表达要清晰明确，使用短语，句型要准确，注意避免拼写和语法错误。

4． 亚洲文明对话大会近期在北京召开，你的印度朋友Danny收看了大会相关报道，对华夏文明产生了浓厚的兴趣，来信向你了解中国文化。假设你是李华，请根据以下内容提示用英语写一封回信给Danny。 要点 历史文化 文明行为 身边文明 内容 历史悠久，文化各异；传统节日，多彩习俗（举一例） 相互尊重，以礼相待；互学共鉴，共同成长（或自拟） 校园文明（自拟一点） 注意：1. 词数90词左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。 2. 回复必须包括所以要点，可是当发挥，是短文连贯，通顺。 3. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

参考词汇: civilized 文明的 Dear Danny,

I’m glad to receive your letter. Since you are interested in civilization（文明） of China, I would like to share something with you.

I hope you can come to China someday to experience the ancient culture of China. Look forward to hear from you soon. All the best, Li Hua

【答案】Dear Danny,

I’m glad to receive your letter. Since you are interested in civilization（文明） of China, I would like to share something with you.

Chinese civilization is one of the oldest and longest civilizations in the world. China is a country of 56 nationalities. Different nations have difficult cultures. In my country, we have many traditional festivals, such as, the Spring Festival, Mid-Autumn Festival and the Dragon Boat Festival . They are also called “three major Chinese holidays” in China. Here are the customs of eating Zongzi and racing dragon-boat on the Dragon Boat Festival.

China is a nation of etiquette （礼仪）. Chinese people can respect, trust and help each other. We all learn and grow together. Everyone in my school should protect the whole public environment. Climbing the trees, picking the flowers and throwing garbage at random are not allowed there.

I hope you can come to China someday to experience the ancient culture of China. Look forward to hearing from you soon. All the best.

Li Hua

【解析】 【分析】

本文要求给你的印度朋友Danny写一篇关于华夏文明的回信。 【详解】

文章需要介绍下中国的文化。表格中列举了三个要点，写作时注意不要漏写。平时注意多多积累句型、短语。细心检查避免疏漏。以图表展示的作文要以“读”为主，首先要认真读懂图表中的要求，对所给信息加以分析、推断、筛选、概括，去粗取精；在写作时目的要明确，要注意内容的准确性和严肃性。 【点睛】

写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系，上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。如but, so, then等。可以适当使用高分句子。本篇文章写的好的句子有：Chinese civilization is one of the oldest and longest civilizations in the world．中华文明是世界上最古老、最悠久的文明之一。