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专题五 短文改错
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A
At present，I am extreme happy because I am doing what I like.As a senior three student，I study hard every day and live it at the full.It feels like good to study hard with my determining classmates to fulfill our dreams.When I recalled the happy things happened to me，the experience of my receiving the scholarship in middle school topped it all.It was a time when my family is going through financial difficulties.So I made up my mind to win the scholarship，hoped to lighten my parents' financial burden.After making tons of painstaking effort，I succeeded.At the ceremony，my mum was the most poorly－dressed woman，and with the brightest smile on her face.
答案：
At present，I am
extreme
happy because I am doing what I
extremely
like.As a senior three student，I study hard every day and live atdeterminingit the full.It feels good to study hard with my todeterminedclassmates to fulfill our dreams.When I recalled the happy things happened to me，the experience of my receiving the scholarship itin middle school topped all.It was a time when my family themis
going through financial difficulties.So I made up my mind to was
hoped
win the scholarship， to lighten my parents' financial
hoping
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burden.After making tons of painstaking
effort
，I succeeded.At
efforts
and
the ceremony，my mum was the most poorly－dressed woman， yet/butwith the brightest smile on her face.
B
On September 29，the students in our class paid visit to China Science and Technology Museum.At 8：00，we leave for China Science and Technology Museum by school bus.At 8：30，a guide introduced them to us briefly and told us how we should pay attention to during our visit.Ten minutes later，we were divided into five groups but began our separate visit.Some students took notes carefully as if they visited.All the students were amazing at the rapid achievements in science and technology.Three hours had gone by after we knew it.At 11：30，we returned to our school.This visit not only broadened my outlook but also aroused my greatly interest in science and technology.
答案：
On September 29，the students in our class paid visit to leaveChina Science and Technology Museum.At 8：00，we for China
leftScience and Technology Museum by school bus.At 8：30，a guide themhow
introduced to us briefly and told us we should pay itwhatattention to during our visit.Ten minutes later，we were divided butvisit
into five groups began our separate .Some students andvisitstook notes carefully as they visited.All the students were
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amazing
at the rapid achievements in science and
amazed
after
technology.Three hours had gone by we knew it.At 11：30，
beforewe returned to our school.This visit not only broadened my outlook but also aroused my technology.
C
This morning，I was jogging in the park when I caught the sight of a wallet on a bench.I picked up and checked the contents.Inside it，I found some money or a card with a phone number.Believe that the owner would be worried，I immediately tried the number.A man answered it in an amazing voice.Hearing that I had his wallet，he sighs with relief and told me he would return right away.Ten minutes late，the man arrived.After confirming he was an owner，I handed the wallet back to him.With his thumb up，he expressed his gratitude to me repeated.Seeing the smile on her face，I felt happy that I was able to help.
答案：
This morning，I was jogging in the park when I caught sight of a wallet on a bench.I picked up and checked the
orcontents.Inside it，I found some money a card with a phone andnumber.
Believe
that the owner would be worried，I immediately
Believing
greatly
interest in science and great
amazing
tried the number.A man answered it in an voice.Hearing amazedsighs
that I had his wallet，he with relief and told me he would
sighed
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return right away.Ten minutes
late
，the man arrived.After later
an
confirming he was owner，I handed the wallet back to him.With
therepeated
his thumb up，he expressed his gratitude to me .Seeing
repeatedlyher
the smile on face，I felt happy that I was able to help.
his
D
When it comes to the TV，there will be different word in different people's minds.Some people think that watch TV is a good way to relax.Firstly，we can broaden our horizons or know more about the world by watching latest news and reports.Secondly，watching TV is a good way to kill our spare time.Finally，we can predict that may happen in the future and be prepared.
Therefore，every coin has its two sides.There is also disadvantages of watching TV.Not only do it do harm to our eyesight，but it also has a bad affect on our studies and everyday life.Definitely，TV plays a big role in our life.We should treat to it in a right way.
答案：
word
When it comes to the TV，there will be different in wordswatch
different people's minds.Some people think that TV is
watchingor
a good way to relax.Firstly，we can broaden our horizons know
andmore about the world by watching latest news and
reports.Secondly，watching TV is a good way to kill our spare
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