their→its [由The Palace Museum可知应把their改为its。]
9．(2014·陕西高考)My uncles immediately jumped up and shot their arrows at the bird.Neither of the arrows hit the target.
Neither→None [代替第一句的their arrows，应用none，因为没有说是两支箭，故不能用neither。]
10. (2016·德州市模拟)It is not only bad for smokers himself, but also a threat to the public health.
himself→themselves [由smokers可知应用themselves。] 感悟与反思 指代不一致错误主要有四种情况：①人称不一致。②单复数不一致。③性别不一致。④替代词和不定代词考查错误，特别是it和that的错用，不定代词表示两者和两者以上代词的错用等。 错误4——逻辑不一致 1．(2016·全国卷Ⅰ)Nearly five years before, and with the help of our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes(圣女果)in our back garden.
before→ago [这里讲的是过去发生的事情，着眼点是现在，故应把before改为ago。] 2．(2016·银川一中模拟)Doctors can also help people to live a better life without their professional knowledge.
without→with [句意：医生也可以用他们的专业知识帮助人们更好地生活。without应改为with。]
3．(2016·平顶山调研考试)I keep a diary in English every day because my written English is becoming better and better.
because→so/and [句意：我每天用英语写日记，因此我的英语写作越来越好。前后为因果关系或并列关系，故把Because改为so或And。]
4．(2016·沈阳二中模拟)For me, this is one of the most rewarding trips I have never made in my life.
never→ever [肯定否定错误，既然这次旅行进行过，就不能用never。]
5．(2016·南昌市十所省重点中学模拟)Before I finished it, I sent it to a
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newspaper, which published it.
Before→After [按常理应该是完成之后送给报社出版，故把Before改为After。] 6．(2016·天水一中模拟)I love playing basketball and often play with my friends on weekends.Therefore, it is difficult to rent a basketball field and impossible to find a free one.
Therefore→However [前后为转折关系，故应把Therefore改为However。] 7．(2016·山东省实验中学模拟)Overcome it, or we will be able to achieve our goals.
or→and或will→won't [句子自我矛盾，把or改为and或者把will改为won't。] 8．(2016·哈尔滨市第六中学模拟)Anxiety and pressure did discourage me at times.Besides, with the encouragement of my teachers and classmates, I think I'll make it.
Besides→However [前后为转折关系，故应把Besides改为However。]
9．(2016·遵义市模拟)How is everything going recently? I'm writing to tell you something more about my birthday.
去掉more [more意为“另外的，其他的”，应去掉。]
10．(2016·石嘴山市模拟)But, the actual entrance to the tomb has ever been found, nor has the tomb been opened.
ever→never [根据后面的nor可知前面应为否定，故ever改为never。]
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感悟与反思 逻辑不一致错误主要有两种情况：①肯定否定错用。②连接词错用：应根据先后顺序，或逻辑关系，选择适当的连词或副词。
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(2016·石家庄市调研检测)
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People used to communicate with each other through letters and public phones.So nowadays they use mobile phones and the Internet instead of.This change in communication have good effects on our works and life.Comparing with letters and public phones, mobile phones and the Internet are fast and much more convenient.If you missed your grandmother, you just take out your phone and say “hello” to him.And she will be happy to hear your voice.If you want to place order with a foreign company, you can e－mail the message.It'll be minutes after you get their reply.
【答案与解析】
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you get their reply.
⑩before
①So改为But 考查连词。根据语境可知，上下句表示逻辑上的转折关系，故用连词But。
②删除of 考查介词。instead of意为“代替”，后跟名词、代词或动名词作宾语，但是此处of后无宾语，故删除of。instead是副词，在句中作状语。
③have改为has 考查动词时态和主谓一致。由语境可知，应用一般现在时；由句子主语This change可知，谓语应用单数形式，即has。
④works改为work 考查名词。此处名词work表示“工作”，而不是作品，是不可数名词，没有复数形式。
⑤Comparing改为Compared 考查非谓语动词。compare和句子谓语are之间没有连词，故用非谓语动词，且和句子主语mobile phones and the Internet构成逻辑上的动宾关系，故用过去分词形式。
⑥fast改为faster 考查形容词比较级。由and后的“much more convenient”可知，此处表示对比的概念，故用形容词比较级faster作表语。
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