新目标九年级
书面表达之谋篇布局学法导学案
学习目标：1. 明确书面表达写作要求。
2. 学会正确审题。
3. 学会在书面表达中谋篇布局
课前自学
一、连线
1.shrimp dumplings 2.beef balls 3.fish balls 4.chicken feet 5.kung fu
6.Cantonese opera 7.history lecture 8.lion dance
舞狮子 鱼丸 鸡爪 功夫 历史讲座 虾饺 牛肉丸 粤剧 课中导学
一、审题
真题训练1：2019年广东中考作文
假如你是李华,英国某中学与你所在的学校是姐妹学校。该校校长读到以上这篇短文后,对广东文化产生兴趣,准备组织学生来你的学校进行关于广东传统文化的研学交流。请你写一篇发言稿,在欢迎晚会上向他们介绍研学活动的相关安排。内容包括: 1.推荐晚会上的两种广东传统食物。
2.介绍两项广东传统文化活动的安排(包括活动的时间。地点和内容)。
参考活动: 欣赏粤剧( Cantonese opera)，体验功夫(kung fu)，参加广东历史讲座等。
人称 时态 要点
人称 时态 要点
人称 时态 要点
真题训练2：2017年广东中考作文
常言道\良言一句三冬暖, 恶语伤人六月寒\。假设你是李雷，你将要参加学校举办的英语演讲比赛，主题是\语言的力量\，请你写一篇英文演讲稿，内容包括：
你的一次受老师或同学言语激励的经历（事情的经过以及对你的影响）； 呼吁同学们要注意自身言语对他人的影响。
二、 布局
1. 按点分段
作文忌讳一段式，应按内容点分段，布局美观，让阅卷老师一目了然。 内容包括： 推荐晚会上的两种广东传统食物。 1. 介绍两项广东传统文化活动的安排2.( 包括活动的时间、地点和内容)。
2. 连词成句 Traditional Food in Guangdong 1） 头脑风暴，写出和广东传统食物相关的词。
2） 根据词汇，梳理知识。
Names of the food:_____________________
Ways to make the food:_________________________
Qualities(品质) of the food:____________________________________
3） 连词成句。
简单句： 主语+谓语+其他 Shrimp dumplings delicious Beef balls make by hand
※连词成句：1.Shrimp dumplings are delicious. 2.________________________________
3.Both_________and___________________________ 简单句：主语+谓语+地点状语+时间状语 Activity 1 Cantonese opera
When____________________ Where________________ What to do __________________
※连词成句：____________________________________________________. Activity 2 Kung fu
When____________________ Where________________ What to do __________________
※连词成句：____________________________________________________ Activity 3 a history lecture
When____________________ Where________________ What to do __________________
※连词成句：____________________________________________________
3. 有“始”有“终”
第二段 推荐两种广东传统食物
Shrimp dumpling and beef ball are famous traditional food in Guangdong. They are both made by hand and taste delicious.
Opening sentence Main sentences Ending sentence
A.请结合内容主题连线导出句和结尾句：
I hope you will like them.
Opening sentence
You’ll never forget the food.
We’ve prepared some traditional food for you.
Ending sentence
Let me introduce some traditional food for you.
B.填入导出句和结尾句
______________________________ Shrimp dumpling and beef ball are famous traditional food in
Guangdong. They are both made by hand and taste delicious._________________________________________
第三段 介绍两个活动安排 You will enjoy the beautiful Cantonese opera in City Hall on the first day. You will learn Chinese kung fu from a master in the gym on the second day .On the third day, a history lecture will be held in Zhongshan University for you so that you can learn more about the culture.
Main sentences Opening sentence Ending sentence ______________________________ ______________________________
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4. 骨肉相连
请给下面短文添加恰当的连接词。
Here we plan some activities for you._____, you will enjoy the beautiful Cantonese opera in City Hall on the first day.______, you will learn Chinese kung fu from a master in the gym on the second day.______, on the third day, a history lecture will be held in Zhongshan University for you so that you can learn more about the culture. I’m sure you’ll have a better understanding of the culture in Guangdong. 练一练：选词填空 Finally, Secondly, Firstly, For example
We are supposed to stop any school bully when we are in the trouble of it.1)__________, we should stay calm before bullying behavior happens. We should always be friendly and helpful when making friends with others. Here are some of my ideas about stopping school bullies.___________, we will learn how to have a self-protection because our personal safety is the most important.___________, we should be peaceful with others at all times and can’t have any violent behavior. ____________, obeying school rules is also a way to avoid school bullies.
三、生成 （查要点，查语言）
Good evening, everyone. I am Li Hua, chairman of the Students‘ Union. I am very pleased to welcome you to the party.
We’ve prepared some traditional food for you. Shrimp dumpling and beef ball are famous traditional food in Guangdong. They are both made by hand and taste delicious. I hope you’ll like them.
Here we plan some activities for you. First, you will enjoy the beautiful Cantonese opera in City Hall on the first day. Second, you will learn Chinese kung fu from a master in the gym on the second day. At last, on the third day, a history lecture will hold in Zhongshan University for you so that you can learn more about the culture. I’m sure you’ll have a better understanding of the culture in Guangdong. I hope you'll enjoy your stay here!
请检查作文的要点完整性和语言的准确性，在下面打勾√ ，如有错误在原文中修改。
要点 语言
课后检测
真题演练：
2018年广东中考作文
假设你是上文\共享小图\海报中的Bryan Lim, 经过三个月的运营之后, 请你写封电子邮件给 Todd Bol，谈谈你对\共享小图\的感受。内容包括： 1. 简单介绍你的身份, 并说明写信意图； 2. 这种图书馆的好处（两点）；
3. \共享小图\存在的问题及其原因，并询问建议。 作文要求：
1. 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。
2. 语句连贯, 词数80个左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数，也不必抄写在答题卡上。 Dear Todd,
I hope this email find you well.______________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I am looking forward to your reply.
Best regards,
Bryan Lim
参考答案： 课前自学
1.虾饺 2. 牛肉丸 3. 鱼丸 4. 鸡爪 5. 功夫 6. 粤剧 7. 历史讲座 8 舞狮子 课中导学
2019年广东中考作文
人称 I, We, You 时态 一般现在，一般将来 要点： 两种广东传统食物，两项活动安排 2017年广东中考作文
人称 I， My teacher/my classmate 时态：一般过去，一般现在 要点：1.受老师或同学言语激励经过、影响2.呼吁 连词成句
（答案根据自己所收集的词语修改，可参考ＰＰＴ）
A.请结合内容主题连线导出句和结尾句： Opening sentence I hope you will like them. You’ll never forget the food.
We’ve prepared some traditional food for you.
Ending sentence Let me introduce some traditional food for you.
骨肉相连
First, Second, At last
练一练： For example, Firstly, Secondly, Finally
三 生成 错误更正：a history lecture will ｂｅ ｈｅｌｄ in Zhongshan University for you
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