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尊老爱幼 大人们总是会对我们说:“要尊老爱幼。”可到了重阳节,我却不知道该怎么对老人表答自己的爱,这时,我就想给姥姥捏肩。为什么,我先想到姥姥呢?因为我和姥姥感情最好。我和妈妈来到姥姥家后,姥姥很高兴我给她捏肩。姥姥坐到沙发上,我坐到姥姥身后,给姥姥捏起肩来。我一边捏,一边听姥姥讲话。

姥姥说:“以前,我十四岁就上班了。”

我很惊讶,说:“不可能吧?你怎么那么早就上班了?” 姥姥不紧不慢地说:“真的,我上完小学就不再上学了。以前的人就是生男轻女,认为女孩不用读很多书。”

我点点头,想:姥姥真辛苦。她都七十岁了,应该受到别人的照顾了。可她现在却还照顾着我表哥(他是一个小儿自闭症患者)的生活,给他做饭、洗澡,非常辛苦,我一定要多帮姥姥做些事情?? 想到这,我的手就更用力了,捏了一会儿,我的手开始酸起来。这时,姥姥也说:“好了,别捏了,休息一下吧!”可我一想到姥姥那么辛苦,我就用力捏了好久。

给姥姥捏完肩后,我觉得帮助老人很容易,但我们不要只帮助自己家的老人,也应该帮助别的老人。有句话说的好:“老吾老,以及人之老;幼吾幼,以及从之幼。”

尊老爱幼 大家都知道尊老爱幼是中华民族的优良品德,作为中华儿女,我们要弘扬这种品德。

有一次,我坐在车上,因为车上人很多,我没有抢到座位。慢慢的,有一个人下车了,我急忙走过去,但转眼间给一个小男孩抢了,他对我扮了一个鬼脸,我生气的瞟了他一眼。但没想到的是,他转身就把位让给了一个老人,边小心翼翼的扶着老人,边用细声细语对老人说:“小心点,别摔了。”突然,司机来了一个急刹车,我顾不上站稳,便伸出双手扶住老人,车稳了,老人冲我露出了笑脸,说:“谢谢。”

我脸红了,小声的说:“没关系。”我望了望小男孩,他正笑眯眯的望着老人呢!“这老人一定是小男孩的爷爷。”我心里想着,点了点头。

“敦和到了,请下车的乘客在后门下车。”车的播音器

响了,小男孩好象突然想到了什么,转身向车门的方向走去,他转身看了看老人,老人笑了笑,对他挥挥手,他也笑了,下了车。我有点疑问,怎么是这样?是我判断错了?我过去问老人:“那小男孩是您

篇二:2014届高三作文话题分类(尊老爱幼)

2014届高三 作文 话题分类 话题:尊老爱幼

1. 2010年高考

假设你是红星中学高二(1)班的学生李华,利用上周末的时间帮助祖父母安排了去北戴河的旅行。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,写一篇英文周记,叙述你从准备到送行的全过程。 注意:1.周记的开头已为你写好。

2.词数不少于60。

1) 范文

标准范文

Last weekend, I helped my grandparents prepare their trip to Beidaihe. On Saturday morning, together with my grandparents, I searched the Internet for the train schedule, the weather in Beidaihe, and some hotel information. In the afternoon, I went to the train station and managed to buy two tickets for my grandparents although there was a long queue. After dinner, I packed into the suitcase the things my grandparents need, such as clothes, glasses, an umbrella, and a map. The next morning, I went to the station to see them off. Waving goodbye to them on the platform, I felt happy for them and wished them a safe journey.

学生范文

We firstly searched the Internet for some useful information on the location of the hotel and the weather condition there. With Baidu’s help, we checked the train schedule together and I offered to buy the tickets for them. some time, I managed to get two tickets. Wearing a smile and holding the tickets in hands tightly, I was satisfied that I contributed to preparing for my grandparents’ trip.

I began to help my grandma with her luggage. In the suitcase there were already some clothes and my grandma was going to pack an umbrella. It suddenly occurred to me that the map and a pair of sunglasses were also dispensable. My grandma thought it a wonderful suggestion and we quickly got them prepared.wished them a safe and pleasant trip from the bottom of my heart. I was pleased about what I had done for them in return for their care and love in my life.

(注意: On Saturday morning/afternoon, the next/following morning, the next/following day,

2) 语言素材

在网上查找信息:(information是不可数名词)the information about sth.some relevant information about sth. on the Internet to find some information about/on….

排队等候买票: for a long time/

There were many people /Three were many people

帮他们打包行李:(luggage,baggage均为不可数名词)

到车站送行, 告别: my grandparents at the train station/ them the train station / them

祝愿路途愉快

表祝愿可以用:wish sb.sth/wish sb. +adj./wish sb. to do) (注意:不说I wished that they would have a good trip. 因为wish宾语从句只表达虚拟语气。可以说I hoped that they could/would have a good trip. (hope 可以接that 从句,但不能用hope sb. to do的结构)

3) 审题注意事项

(1) 审题:人称:I, they 时态:过去时 体裁:周记

(2) 时间线索:上周末 (周末两天的活动)

(3) 要点和可添加的细节::

图1. 上网查找信息( 细节:查天气情况,预定旅馆、车票)

图2. 去火车站购票( 细节:排队,心情)

图3. 准备行装(细节:箱中的衣物、(奶奶)雨伞、 (我)地图)

图4. 去车站送行(挥手告别, 心情)

感受:为爷爷奶奶开心,希望他们过得愉快,为自己能为家人做事感到欣慰等。

(4) 注意事项:本文是以周记形式叙述利用上周末的时间帮助祖父母安排了去北戴河的旅行从准备到送行的全过程。四幅图中,前三幅图都是准备的过程,如何做的准备是需详写的,第四幅图是到车站送行,简写即可。四幅图的衔接,可以以周六、周日两天时间为线索,也可关注图之间的逻辑:1先提前先了解情况---2去购票---3临行前准备---4车站送行。本文是一篇周记,主题是自己为家人做事,可以贯穿全文的暗线一是出于对家人的关心和爱,二是自己能够独立安排了这次旅行,所加的情感细节应该着重于为爷爷奶奶开心,希望他们过得愉快,为自己能为家人做事感到欣慰。

2. 2013年高考:

假设你是红星中学高三(1)班的学生李华,请按照以下四幅图的先后顺序,用英文写一篇周记。记述爸爸出差期间,妈妈生病,你照顾她的过程。

注意: 1. 周记的开头已经为你写好。2. 词数不少于 60.

Last Monday,…

1) 范文

标准范文

Last Monday, my father said goodbye to my mother and me and went on a business trip. He would be away for three days. Just the next morning, I found my mother wasn’t feeling well. She had a cold. I immediately went to get her some medicine and then prepared some noodles for her, with my special care. My mother recovered quickly. When my father came back home, my mother told him what had happened he praised me for what I had done. I feel very happy that I have done something for my mother.

学生范文

Last Monday, my father would be on a business trip for a few days. Before he left, my mother and I waved goodbye to him and wished his a safe journey.

I thought everything would go well, but unfortunately, my mother caught a cold and had a fever the next morning. Seeing her lying in bed with a pale face, I was very worried. However, I told myself to calm down and look after my mum, as I promised to my dad. I got her some medicine and cooked some noodles for her to eat. Soon she recovered. I felt quite relieved.

When my father came back home, my mother told him what had happened when he was away. Both my father and mother praised me for what I had done. Hearing their praise and seeing bright smiles on their faces, I really felt happy that I managed to take good care of my mother by myself when she was ill.

2) 语言素材

跟某人道别:say goodbye to sb./ 挥手道别wave goodbye to sb.

出差 be (away) on business / go on a business trip

我发现妈妈身体不舒服。 I found (that) my mother wasn’t feeling well.

感冒 catch a cold/flu 发烧have/suffer from a (high) fever

看到妈妈躺在床上脸色苍白,我感到很担心。Seeing my mother lying in bed with a pale face, I felt really worried/concerned/anxious.

让自己冷静下来 tell myself to calm down

照顾我妈妈 take care of/look after/attend to/care for my mother

给她拿来药 get her some medicine 让她吃药 ask her to take some medicine

为她做面条吃 prepare/cook noodles for her to eat

妈妈很快痊愈了。My mother recovered quickly. / 很快妈妈好了起来。Soon my mother got better.

爸爸妈妈竖起大拇指为我所做的事情表扬了我。My father and mother praised me for what I had done with their thumbs up.

自己独立照顾了妈妈 manage to take good care of my mother on my own/by myself

3) 审题注意事项

(1) 审题:人称:I, my mother, my father 时态:过去时 体裁:周记

(2) 要点和可添加的细节

本文要求写爸爸出差期间照顾妈妈的过程,四幅图中,图1图4应该略,图2图3应该详写。 图1:爸爸出差,道别

图2:发现妈妈生病(病情,我的心情)

图3:照顾妈妈(拿药,做面条)

图4:爸爸回来,我受表扬 (心情)

感受:很高兴能够独立照顾了生病的妈妈,为家人做事等。

(3) 注意:细节要为要点服务,一定避免机械描图,否则就会造成添加多余细节。如没必要去描写爸爸提着旅行箱打车离开。结尾的感受应侧重于说自己能够独立照顾妈妈感到很开心,扣关心照顾家人的主题,不宜大肆渲染突出自己做了值得骄傲的事。

3. 2012石景山一模

假设你是红星中学高三(1)班的学生李华。今天是你父亲的生日,你给父亲买完生日蛋糕后,在回家途中做了几件好事。请根据图片的先后顺序,写一篇英文日记,介绍事情的全过程。

注意:1.日记的开头已为你写好。

2.词数不少于60。

March 23, Friday Sunny Today is Dad's birthday and I wanted to buy him a gift. …

1) 范文

March 23, Friday Sunny

Today is Dad’s birthday and I wanted to buy him a gift. So after school I hurried to a bakery and bought a big birthday cake. Imagining the delighted look on his face when Dad saw the cake, I couldn’t wait to go back home.

When I got on a bus, I was pleased to find a vacant seat, so I sat down with the cake on my legs. When the bus got to the next stop, an old lady got on, carrying many bags. Without hesitation, I offered my seat to her and I was standing until arriving at the destination. I got off the bus and was about to cross the road when I saw a blind man waiting by the crosswalk. I walked over quickly and led him across the road safely.

Arriving home, I gave the cake to Dad as well as my best wishes. And then, I told Mum and Dad what I had done on my way home. Hearing my story, Dad smiled and told me it was not the cake but my deeds of helping others that was the most valuable gift for him. I was very happy that I lent a hand to those people in need of help.

2) 语言素材

去面包店买生日蛋糕 go to the bakery to but a birthday cake

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