2020届新高考英语书面表达内容概要高三作文模拟写作指导与解读
一、概写原题 阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
It is quite reasonable to blame traffic jams, the cost of gas and the great speed of modern life, but manners on the road are becoming horrible. Everybody knows that the nicest men would become fierce tigers behind the wheel. It is all right to have a tiger in a cage, but to have one in the driver's seat is another matter.
Road politeness is not only good manners, but good sense. It takes the most cool-headed drivers great patience to give up the desire to beat back when forced to face rude driving. On the other hand, a little politeness goes a long way towards reducing the possibility of quarrelling and fighting. A friendly nod or a wave of thanks in answer to an act of politeness helps to create an atmosphere of good will and becomes so necessary in modern traffic conditions. But such behaviors of politeness are by no means enough. Many drivers nowadays don't even seem able to recognize politeness when they see it.
However, misplaced politeness can also be dangerous. Typical examples are the driver who waves a child crossing the street at a wrong place into the path of oncoming cars that may not be able to stop in time. The same goes for encouraging old ladies to cross the road wherever and whenever they want to.
An experienced driver, whose manners are faultless, told me it would help if drivers learnt to correctly join in traffic stream without causing total blockages that give rise to
unpleasant feelings. Unfortunately, modern drivers can't even learn to drive, let alone master the roadmanship. Years ago, experts warned us that the fast increase of the car ownership would demand more give-and-take (互让) from all road users. It is high time for all of us to take this message to heart.
二、概写步骤 第一步：通读理解全文，了解文章结构，理清各段落之间的逻辑关系，提取全文中心词，尤其是名词与动词。
第二步：细读原文，划出各段的主题句与关键词，关键词以动词与名词为主，涵盖段落全部要点。
第三步：根据所划内容，结合理解，理清句内逻辑关系，然后转述或合成句子。可用中文概括出段落大意，然后用一句话翻译出来(合理利用原词)。
第四步：通读修改。要考虑句首连接词的使用、高级词汇的替换、句式的多样、语法是否正确以及字数的多少等。
第五步：用衡水体抄到试卷上，力求清楚美观。
三、分段概括 关键词句已在原文标出，结合理解，用中文概括出一句话并译成英文。
?如今，即使是举止得体的司机在开车时也可能变成凶猛的怪物。
Nowadays, even drivers with perfect manners may turn into aggressive monsters while driving.
?尽管道路礼貌是有益处，但它不足以阻止路怒情绪，因为许多司机对这种良好行为视而
不见。
Beneficial as road politeness can be, it is far from enough to stop road rage because many drivers are blind to such good behaviors.
?然而，不当的礼貌也会对想要过马路的孩子和老太太构成威胁。
However, inappropriate politeness can also be a threat to children and old ladies who want to cross the street.
?总之，司机，包括其他道路使用者，都应该记住，妥协互让是避免冲突的最佳策略。
Anyway, drivers, including other road users should bear in mind that compromise is the best policy to avoid conflict.
四、下水范文 Nowadays, even drivers with perfect manners may turn into aggressive monsters while driving. Beneficial as road politeness can be, it is far from enough to stop road rage because many drivers are blind to such good behaviors. However, inappropriate politeness can also be a threat to children and old ladies who want to cross the street. Anyway, drivers, including other road users, should bear in mind that compromise is the best policy to avoid conflict.【75字】
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