第五模块 短文改错 专题二十九 记叙文型短文改错
A【2015·东北三校第一次联考】
Yesterday I stepped into a restaurant for lunch.As I was waiting my order to come, I noticed the old man in a wheel chair roll himself over to a table.No one and me seemed to notice him.I got up and go over to his table and asked if that I could get him something to drink.He smiled and said, “Thank you.You are generously.I’d like any orange juice, please.” When I was getting ready to leave, I walked by the old man’s table to saying goodbye.He thanked me again and told me I had made his days, coming over and helping him out.I gave him a hug and told him he had made my day, either. 【答案】
Yesterday I stepped into a restaurant for lunch.As I was waiting∧my order to come, I noticed the old man in a
for an wheel chair roll himself over to a table.No one and me seemed to notice him.I got up and go over to his table and
but/except went asked if that I could get him something to drink.He smiled and said, “Thank you.You are generously.I’d like any generous some
orange juice, please.” When I was getting ready to leave, I walked by the old man’s table to saying goodbye.He
say thanked me again and told me I had made his days, coming over and helping him out.I gave him a hug and told
day him he had made my day, either. too
B【浙江省重点中学协作体2015届高三第二次适应性测试】
The winter holiday is coming, which made me excited.I have been looking forward at
relaxing myself.I’d like to go skating, climb mountains and see several movie.I think I can play
the basketball with my classmates.How a wonderful time I’ll have during the winter holiday!
However, my parents think different.They don’t want me go out.They are afraid I’ll be knocked
down by a truck, fallen off a tree, or fight with others.Beside, they are afraid I will lose my way.I
hate being treated like a bird keeping in a cage.To get more freedom, I will try to persuade them. 【答案】
The winter holiday is coming, which made me excited.I have been looking forward at makes to
relaxing myself.I’d like to go skating, climb mountains and see several movie.I think I can play movies
the basketball with my classmates.How a wonderful time I’ll have during the winter holiday! What
However, my parents think different.They don’t want me/\\ go out.They are afraid I’ll be knocked Differently to
down by a truck, fallen off a tree, or fight with others.Beside, they are afraid I will lose my way.I Fall Besides
hate being treated like a bird keeping in a cage.To get more freedom, I will try to persuade them. kept
C【山西省大同一中、同煤一中2015届高三联考】
This morning, I go to the store near my home to do some shopping.
I was walking down the passage while I gave a violent cough.The woman standing next to me was so shocking that she consequently dropped a jar of oil.For that very moment, a girl was walking by.She slipped on the oil, fell onto the broke glass and hit her head on the floor.After a while ,there were blood pour down her face.I felt really guilty and sent the girl to the nearest hospital without the delay.The doctor examined her wound carefully.To my relief, it was not serious.The girl had a little smile on her face before the doctor dressed wound. 【答案】
This morning, I go to the store near my home to do some shopping. went
I was walking down the passage while I gave a violent cough.The woman standing next to me when
was so shocking that she consequently dropped a jar of oil.For that very moment, a girl was shocked At
walking by.She slipped on the oil, fell onto the broke glass and hit her head on the floor.After a broken
while ,there were blood pour down her face.I felt really guilty and sent the girl to the nearest was pouring
hospital without the delay.The doctor examined her wound carefully.To my relief, it was not serious.The girl had a little smile on her face before the doctor dressed ∧wound. after the/her
D【辽宁省锦州市2015届高三上学期期末考试英语】
Mary is a high school student, who devoted herself to her lessons every day.Last Saturday,as usual, she went to several class.In the evening, she continued to study until deeply into night.She was too sleepy and tired that she couldn’t work effectively.On the Sunday morning, she wasabout to do her lessons while her father came up and advised her to take a break.Soon they came up a good idea.We decided to go cycling in the countryside.Mary enjoyed herself, competing and chatting with her father, and felt relaxing in the open air.On Monday, Mary was energetic but active in class. 【答案】
Mary is a high school student, who devoted herself to her lessons every day.Last Saturday,as devotes
usual, she went to several class.In the evening, she continued to study until deeply into night.She classes deep
was too sleepy and tired that she couldn’t work effectively.On the Sunday morning, she was about so
to do her lessons while her father came up and advised her to take a break.Soon they came up∧ a when with good idea.We decided to go cycling in the countryside.Mary enjoyed herself, competing and They
chatting with her father, and felt relaxing in the open air.On Monday, Mary was energetic but relaxed and active in class.
E【黑龙江省双鸭山市第一中学2015届高三上学期期末】
One night, I was on my home for my Christmas holiday when my car broke down.It was complete dead, and I was a few miles away from my home in that cold, wet night.I decided to walk around a little after accepting that I’d have to spend the night in the car.Maybe I can find a telephone.Actually, I didn’t have to walk far before I found the small house standing in a field with a light shone from the sitting room.I knocked the door was delighted when a pleasant old man opened the door and listened to my story carefully.He said he had no telephone and that it wasn’t any within walking distance, but the old man who offered to go to repair my car. 【答案】
One night, I was on my home for my Christmas holiday when my car broke down.It was
complete dead, and I was a few miles away from my home in that cold, wet night.I decided completely on
to walk around a little after accepting that I’d have to spend the night in the car.Maybe I can before could find a telephone.Actually, I didn’t have to walk far before I found the small house standing a
in a field with a light shone from the sitting room.I knocked∧ the door and was delighted when a shining at/on
pleasant old man opened the door but listened to my story carefully.He said he had no and
telephone and that it wasn’t any within walking distance, but the old man who offered to go there to repair my car.
专题三十 议论文型短文改错
A【四川省宜宾市2015届高三第一次诊】
Having a dream is of great importance.Your dreams are ordinary and realistic.I hope I will admitted into a top university and become a good doctor after I will graduate from university.I hoped one day I can find a cure for cancer.I hope those whom love me and those whom I love
will be healthy and live happy every day.To realize my dreams, I will take more exercises to build up my body.I will try my best to focus time and energy to my study.I must work hard at my lessons or be fully preparing for the entrance exam. 【答案】
Having a dream is of great importance.Your dreams are ordinary and realistic.I hope I will ∧ My be admitted into a top university and become a good doctor after I will graduate from university.I
hoped one day I can find a cure for cancer.I hope those whom love me and those whom I love hope who/that
will be healthy and live happy every day.To realize my dreams, I will take more exercises to build happily exercise
up my body.I will try my best to focus time and energy to my study.I must work hard at my on lessons or be fully preparing for the entrance exam. and prepared
B【2015·宁夏回族自治区银川一中高三第一次模拟】
With the development of people’s living condition, more and more people possess their own cars. Some of us think it is good to own a car. For instance, it’s convenient, fast and comfortable means of transportation. Moreover, it shows that people are becoming richer and the country is much more stronger. It also made relative businesses and industries develop faster.
However, others have different opinions, thinking that cars give up waste gases and pollute the environment around. Too much cars will have some bad effects, such as more accidents and crowdedness. Besides, lack parking lots is another big problem.
As far as I’m concerned, we ought to think careful before buying cars. As if we have cars, we may use it less. 【答案】
With the development of people’s living condition, more and more people possess their own cars. Some of us
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think it is good to own a car. For instance, it’s ∧convenient, fast and comfortable means of transportation.
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Moreover, it shows that people are becoming richer and the country is much more stronger. It also made
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relative businesses and industries develop faster.
However, others have different opinions, thinking that cars give up waste gases and pollute the environment
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around. Too much cars will have some bad effects, such as more accidents and crowdedness.
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