73. the改为a
74. watching改为
watch 75. to去掉
76. us改为me
77. 在unwilling前加上was
78. for改为with
79. are改为were
80. where
改为
when
第二节 书面表达 （满分25分） Dear editor,
I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we have recently had about whether our
parents
should
accompany us studying at school. We do have different opinions on this matter.
70% of us think our parents
should
not
accompany us studying at school. First of all, it makes us fall
into
the
habit
of
dependence, so that we won't form the good habit of studying. What's more, it is harmful for us to form the habit of controlling ourselves. At
the
same
time,
accompanying us studying at school affects our parents’ work, studies and rest.
However, about 30% of my
classmates
think
it
necessary for our parents to accompany us studying at school. Firstly, accompanying us studying at school can let
us have more time to spare for our studies. Secondly, our parents can help us set up our aim, urge us to finish our task, encourage us to overcome difficulties and get us into the good habit of studying.
As far as I am concerned, it is unnecessary for parents to keep their children company in school. On one hand, living alone is a basic skill everyone should master. On the other hand, it can create room for children's growth and ensure their overall development.
Yours truly, Li Hua
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