读后续写专练(一)
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(2018·金丽衢十二校高三第二次联考)阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
It was an unusually quiet day in the emergency room on December 25.Quiet, that is, except for those who were standing around the nurses’ station complaining about having to work Christmas Day. I was triage nurse that day and had just been out to the waiting room to clean up. Just then five bodies showed up at my triage desk, a pale woman and four small children. “Are you all sick？” I asked suspiciously. “Yes，” she said weakly and lowered her head.
But when it came to descriptions of their present problems, things got a little vague. Two of the children had headaches, but the headaches weren’t accompanied by the normal body language of holding the head or trying to keep it still. Two children had earaches, but only one could tell me which ear was affected. The mother complained of a cough but seemed to work to produce it. Something was wrong, but I didn’t say anything. I explained to the mother that it might be a little while before a doctor saw her. She responded, “Take your time; it’s warm in here.” She turned and, with a smile, guided her children into the waiting room.
On a hunch (call it nursing judgment), I checked the chart after the admitting clerk had finished registering the family. No address — they were homeless. The waiting room was warm. I looked out at the family huddled by the Christmas tree. The smallest one was pointing at the television and exclaiming something to her mother. The oldest one was looking at her reflection in a decoration on the Christmas tree.
I went back to the nurses’ station and mentioned we had a homeless family in the waiting room.The nurses, complaining about working Christmas, turned to compassion for a family just trying to get warm on Christmas. Then our team went into action, much as we do when there’s a medical emergency.But this one was a Christmas emergency. A special Christmas party was to be held.
注意：
1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2．至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1：
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We were all offered a free meal in the hospital cafeteria on Christmas Day, ________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2：
When the party ended, as the family walked to the door to leave, ________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________
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一、试题详解 1．核心内容
短文主要内容为：圣诞节当日，作者在医院护士站加班时遇到无家可归的一家人，一位母亲带着四个孩子以看病为由留在医院候诊室取暖。得知这件事，护士站所有的护士停止了对加班的抱怨，用心地为这家人举办了一个紧急而特殊的圣诞聚会，不仅给这一家人带来了温暖，也为自己留下了难忘的记忆。
2．写作思路 (1)明确故事人物。
故事中主要人物为作者(护士)、护士站的护士们、无家可归的一家人(一位母亲和四个孩子)。 (2)理清故事主要事件。
作者(值班护士)遇到前来看病的一家人；作者发现这一家人无家可归，想以看病为由留在医院候诊室取暖；作者将此事告诉其他护士，护士们出于同情，决定帮助这一家人举行一个紧急而特殊的圣诞聚会。
(3)根据已知人物、事件及续写段落的开头语预测故事发展。
故事总体的发展可能是护士们在短时间内精心为这一家人准备圣诞聚会，这一家人度过了温暖而美好的圣诞节，并向医院的护士们表达他们的感激之情。续写第一段：护士们圣诞节这一天在医院可以领取免费餐，很可能他们用这个机会为聚会准备了食物。过圣诞节还需要准备礼物，可以写护士们如何想办法准备礼物。这一段主要描述护士们精心准备的过程。续写第二段：聚会结束，这一家人准备离开。这样的场合可以描写这一家人的感受和反应。他们内心一定是充满感激的，也一定会通过言语和行为表达这种感激之情。同时，可以考虑护士们的反应和感受，对照文章一开始的抱怨，护士们此刻的内心应该也是感动和幸福的。
(4)结合下划线词语罗列写作要点。
结合下划线词语和短文内容，展开尽可能丰富的想象，罗列出尽可能多的故事发展情节。例如，第一段可以通过提出以下问题来获取写作要点：
What did the nurses prepare for the Christmas party?
How did the nurses get what they needed for the party in such a short time? Where was the party held?
What did the family do in the party? Did they enjoy the party?
第二段可以通过提出以下问题来获取写作要点： How did the family feel after the party? What did they say to the nurses when they left? What did they do when they left?
How did the nurses feel when the family left?
Did they still complain about working on Christmas Day? 二、参考范文 Paragraph 1：
We were all offered a free meal in the hospital cafeteria on Christmas Day, so we asked for that meal and
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