充完整，是文章内容充实。在写作时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，这样才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体。
5．书面表达
在本周班会课上，同学们对“初中生什么时候放学比较合适？”这一问题进行了热烈的讨论。大部分同学认为初中生应该在5点左右放学，下表所列里大家的发言记录。请你写一篇短文介绍大家的想法并阐述你的观点。 Time to leave school ·at 5 o’clock ·at 4:45 ·at 5 o’clock ·... Activities to do after school ·exercise to keep healthy and read books ·do what we want, such as listening to music ·take a part-time job ·... 注意：（1）短文必须包括表格中所有要点，并适当发挥； （2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名； （3）词数：80-100；
（4）短文开头仅供参考，不计入总词数。
短文开头：“What time should junior high school students leave school?” This week we have held a class meeting to talk about it. Here is the result of the discussion.
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【答案】“What time should junior high school students leave school?”This week we have held a class meeting to talk about it. Here is the result of the discussion.
Most students think that students should leave school at about 5 o 'clock. They can exercise to keep healthy and read more interesting books after school.
Some think that students should leave school at 4:45, because they can have more time to do what they want to do, such as listening to music.
A few think 5 o 'clock is the best time to finish school. After school, they can do part-time jobs, such as collecting discarded plastic bottles to sell for money.
I am in favor of leaving school at five o'clock. Besides having time to play tennis, I can also draw some pictures I like. 【解析】 【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如hold a class meeting，talk about，the result of，keep healthy，after school，have more time to do，want to do，such as，listen to music，in favor of，clean the room，play tennis等。而复杂并列结构They can
exercise to keep healthy and read more interesting books after school.和Most students think that students should leave school at about 5 o 'clock./ Some think that students should leave school at 4:45, because they can have more time to do what they want to do, such as listening to music.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化；同时Most students think…/ Some think…/ A few think…使叙述条理，层次分明，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。 【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
6．书面表达
初中的生活美好而短暂。临近中考，压力骤增，父母的唠叨，老师的殷殷期望，自己的学业与梦想……倾诉是一副良方。请给七月的你写一封信，谈谈你身边存在的问题，你打算如何解决，鼓励自己生活还有诗和远方。请根据以下提示写一封给自己的信。
要求：1．表达清楚，语法正确，语句通顺，上下文连贯； 2．必须包括思维导图中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥； 3．词数：100词左右（开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数） Dear Future Me,
It is pleasant to spare my free time to communicate with you．I am so worried that … Your sincerely
【答案】It is pleasant to spare my free time to communicate with you．I am so worried that I can’t deal with all the problems present, which are mainly caused by two aspects.First,I can’t ignore my parents’ expectation .With the price of houses rising, they always work hard. However,
they are more worried about their children’s exam as the final exam is approaching. Second, there is endless homework and tests every day. Therefore, I need change myself.
In order to adapt to the situation better, I should develop good life habits to keep healthy. Then making friends and communicating with them can make me happier. What’s more, there exist dreams and beautiful future waiting for us. I should not be pessimistic (悲观的). So never give in to the difficulties and stress easily. I believe I deserve having success. 【解析】 【详解】
本文写给未来的自己，目的在于倾诉压力，寻求方法，并重拾信心。第一段指出导致压力的两个方面First,I can’t ignore my parents’ expectation . Second, there is endless homework and tests every day.用First, Second点出。第二自然段提到释放压力的方法，应用In order to表目的。用What’s more表递进结构。并用祈使句So never give in to the difficulties and stress easily点题呼吁。整篇文章层次分明，结构紧凑。
7．假如你是李华，作为活动主持人，你打算邀请外教 Smith 先生来参加本周末学校开展的“英语戏剧展示”活动，请用英语给他写一封邀请函，告诉他本次活动的具体时间和地点，安排了哪些内容，以及需要他做哪些事情。 提示词语:wear, role, perform, judge, suggestions, photos
提示问题:When and where are you going to hold the English drama show? What are you going to do on the show? What will you ask Mr. Smith to do for the show? Dear Mr. Smith,
I'm glad to tell you there'll be an English drama show this weekend. ______________________________
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【答案】Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m glad to tell you there’ll be an English drama show this weekend . It will be held at 8:00 this Saturday morning. We are going to hold it in our music club. All of us are going to wear nice clothes and play different roles in groups. We will perform English dramas. Speeches will be made during the show.
I hope you can work as a judge and give scores for each group after their performances. Then at the end of the drama show, you can give us some suggestions. If possible, you can bring your camera with you and take some photos for us. I believe this English drama show will be successful with your help.
We’re looking forward to your reply. Li Hua 【解析】
【详解】
本文属于话题作文，邀请外教史密斯先生参加英语戏剧展示活动。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。
亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如be going to, at the end of, give sb sth, if possible, take some photos以及with one’s help。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。 【点睛】
写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：
认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。
构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。
初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。
修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
8． 人类只有一个地球。根据提示，以“Saving the Earth”为题，写一篇80词左右的短文。 提示: 1.如何保护环境已成为世界最大难题之一； 2.各种污染破坏环境，损害健康； 3.不要乱倒垃圾，乱排废水；
4.我们应该保护环境，使我们的家园更加美丽。 【答案】Saving the Earth
The earth is our home. We should take care of it. But some things we have done are bad for the earth. We have polluted the earth and made it sick. We cut down too many trees and change rich land into desert. Many factories pour waste water into rivers and lakes. Pollution has caused some serious problems. For example, much of the land is poor, some rivers and lakes are dirty. Even the temperature of the earth is rising. The earth is crying for help.
What shall we do to save it? My suggestions are that we should plant more trees, put the rubbish into dustbins and stop factories from pouring waste water directly into rivers. After all, we have only one earth. We should do everything we can to protect it, or we’ll be punished and lose our home.
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