4分－8分
第四档 未完成试题规定的任务。 ?写了少量相关信息；
?语法或用词方面错误较多，严重影响了对写作内容的理解。 1分－3分 0分 三、
未传达任何信息；所写内容与要求无关。 One possible version：
In recent years, great changes have taken place in my life. What impresses me most is that technology has made our study easier and more effective.
Take online study as an example. This term I take some online courses, which is more convenient and flexible than studying on campus. The large variety of online courses, ranging from the school subjects to career courses, provides me with abundant choices. I can choose the ones I like and have classes anywhere through the Internet. I also join some online study groups where I enjoy a closer relationship with my teachers and other group members. When I meet with any questions, they always give me quick replies.
The online study has benefited me a lot. I have every reason to believe that the development of technology will bring about far-reaching changes in every aspect of our life. 第二节（20分） 一、评分原则：
1．本题总分为20分，按5个档次给分。
2．评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言质量初步确定其档次，然后以该档次的要求来 衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。
3．评分时应考虑：内容要点的完整性、上下文的连贯性、词汇和句式的多样性及语言的
准确性。
4．拼写、标点符号或书写影响内容表达时，应视其影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。
5．词数少于60，从总分中减去1分。 二、内容要点： 1．报名参加活动 2．学习滑雪 3．练习滑雪 4．拍照留念
三、各档次的给分范围和要求： 第一档 完全完成了试题规定的任务。 ?覆盖了所有内容要点；
?运用了多样的句式和丰富的词汇；
?语法或用词方面有个别错误，但为尽可能表达丰富的内容所致； 体现了较强的语言运用能力；
?有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，所写内容连贯、结构紧凑。 完全达到了预期的写作目的。 18分－20分
第二档 完全完成了试题规定的任务。 ?覆盖了所有内容要点；
?运用的句式和词汇能满足任务要求；
?语法和用词基本准确，少许错误主要为尽可能表达丰富的内容
所致；
?使用了简单的语句间连接成分，所写内容连贯。 达到了预期的写作目的。 15分－17分
第三档 基本完成了试题规定的任务。 ?覆盖了内容要点；
?运用的句式和词汇基本满足任务要求； ?语法和用词方面有一些错误，但不影响理解。 基本达到了预期的写作目的。 12分－14分
第四档 未恰当完成试题规定的任务。 ?漏掉或未描述清楚主要内容； ?所用句式和词汇有限；
?语法或用词方面的错误影响了对所写内容的理解。 未能清楚地传达信息。 6分－11分
第五档 未完成试题规定的任务。 ?明显遗漏主要内容； ?句式单调、词汇贫乏；
?语法或用词方面错误较多，严重影响了对所写内容的理解。 1分－5分 0分 四、
未能传达任何信息；所写内容与要求无关。 One possible version：
With the approach of Winter Olympics, more and more people begin to try winter sports. Last weekend, my classmates and I decided to enjoy the snowy fun. Absolutely delighted, we enrolled in a training class. Arriving at the ski resort, our trainer gave us specific instruction in safe and skillful skiing. He was so careful and helpful that it didn’t take long to get ourselves on the trail. At first, we were all scared to take the first step in our skis. When we saw others having so much fun, we set out. Although we had several falls, none of us gave up. With great efforts, we were able to keep balance and ski more confidently. We played happily and felt a sense of achievement.
To record the exciting moment, we took many pictures. We hope, in 2022, we can work as volunteers in Winter Olympics.
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