As you can tell, the process is tough and I’m tired, but along the way, I have managed to do what I thought impossible. Although there is still a lot for me to improve on, I do have confidence in myself.
I hope with so much effort, I will get admitted to my dream university. I’m also expecting the coming summer holiday, for I will surely have plenty of time to enjoy myself!
What’s your plan after high school? Hope to hear from you soon.
Your,
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封电子邮件
解：第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封电子邮件：假设你是红星中学学生李华。你的美国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中询问你的高三生活情况。请你给他回复邮件，内容包括：1. 近况；2. 感受；3. 愿望。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：Nice to hear from you（收到你的来信很高兴）；the College Entrance Examination is drawing near（高考即将来临）；trying my best to prepare for it（尽我最大的努力去准备它）；get admitted to my dream university（被我梦想的大学录取）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
。Li Hua
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
点评：本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。As the College Entrance Examination is drawing near I’m trying my best to prepare for it.此处As引导时间状语从句；As you can tell, the process is tough and I’m tired, but along the way, I have managed to do what I thought impossible.句中as引导非限制性定语从句，what引导宾语从句；Although there is still a lot for me to improve on, I do have confidence in myself.句中Although引导让步状语从句，并运用强调谓语；I’m also expecting the coming summer holiday, for I will surely have plenty of time to enjoy myself!句中for是并列连词，表示原因。
第二节（20分）
52.假设你是红星中学学生李华。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，给某英文报刊投稿，记录你参加的绿化社区活动。
注意：词数不少于60。 提示词：花苗 flower seedling
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答案：One afternoon in early spring, I caught sight of a poster in my community which read “Green Community, Beautiful Home”. Having listened to the social workers introduction, I found the activity quite meaningful and decided to take part.
That Sunday, most of my neighbours gathered for the start of the activity. Since my mom was fond of flowers, we chose Chinese roses. Together with my parents, I carefully planted the flower seedlings and gently watered them.
A few days later, I was surprised to see our photos of planting flowers posted on the bulletin board in our community. My neighbours and I recalled the activity and talked a lot about how to take care of the plants.
Now looking after plants has become part of my life. This way, I can feel the simple pleasure life and harvest a sense of achievement. Seeing the seedlings growing little by little, I can’t help picturing how beautiful our neighbourhood will be when all the flowers come out. 【分析】
本文是看图作文。
解：第1步：根据四副图画提示：假设你是红星中学学生李华。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，给某英文报刊投稿，记录你参加的绿化社区活动。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：One afternoon in early spring, I caught sight of a poster in my community which read “Green Community, Beautiful Home”.句中which引导非限制性定语从句； 第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
点评：本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。One afternoon in early spring, I caught sight of a poster in my community which read “Green Community, Beautiful Home”. 句中which引导非限制性定语从句；Having listened to the social workers introduction, I found the activity quite meaningful and decided to take part.现在分词完成式作时间状语；I can’t help picturing how beautiful our neighbourhood will be when all the flowers come out.句中使用when引导的时间状语从句。
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