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写作提升练(三) 读后续写
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AsIcontinuedwalkingIbegantoreconsidermyplan.I was feeling a strange sense of guilt.Here I was going to buy a new pair of boots while my mother was home in tears.She would be trying to explain to us why there were no presents.Across the street from the bus stop was a big grocery store.I realized that 25 dollars I had worked so hard for went a long way towards lights,decorations and a turkey.After finishing shopping,I went home.
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Withgreatexcitementandtearsinmyeyes,Iknockedonthedoor.I could hardly wait to see my mother’s face! When Mum opened the door,some of the groceries fell inside onto the floor,and she just stood there,dumbfounded.Holding back the tears,I said,“Merry Christmas!” That day I got enough hugs and kisses from Mum.
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BynowwewerestandinginthelongHolidaylinetopaythebill,andIfigureditwasagoodchance.I lay down on the ground and began screaming,“I want that telephone,” over and over again.Weary Christmas shoppers looked as my mother calmly said,“Becky,you had better get up by the count of three or else.One...Two...Three.” Nothing.I was still in full tantrum.So then she lay down beside me on the floor,and began kicking and screaming,“I want a new car.I want a new house.I want some jewelry.I want...” Shocked,I stood up.
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“Mama,stop.Mama,getup,”Itearfullypleaded.She stood,and brushed herself off.At first stunned,the others waiting in line began to clap,and before I knew it they were cheering and laughing and patting my mother on her back.She blushed and took a little bow and the next thirty minutes in line was pure misery for me as various parents leaving the store,shake their heads at me and say with a smile,“Your mom got you good.I bet you’ll never try that again.” And I didn’t,because it left a lasting mental picture more effective than any physical mark.
写作提升练(四) 读后续写
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(2018·浙江宁波5月模拟)
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
Jenny was the only child in her home.She had a quarrel with her mother that afternoon and she ran out of the house angrily.She couldn’t help weeping sorrowfully when she thought of the scolding from her mother.Having wandered aimlessly in the street for hours,she felt a little hungry and wished for something to eat,but it was not even possible for her,since she had nothing with her.She stood beside a stand for a while,watching the middle-aged seller busy doing his business.However,with no money in hand,she sighed and had to leave.
The seller behind the stand noticed the young girl and asked,“Hey,girl,you want to have the noodles?”
“Oh,yes...but I don’t have money on me...” she replied.
“That’s nothing.I’ll treat you today,” said the man.“Come in.”
The seller brought her a bowl of noodles,whose smell was so attractive.As she was eating,Jenny cried silently.
“What is it?” asked the man kindly.
“Nothing,actually I was just touched by your kindness!” said Jenny as she wiped her tears.“Even a stranger on the street will give me a bowl of noodles,while my mother,drove me out of the house.She showed no care for me.She is so merciless compared to a stranger!”
Hearing the words,the seller smiled.“Girl,do you really think so?I only gave you a bowl of noodles and you thanked me a lot.But it is your mother who has raised you since you were a baby.Can you number the times she cooked for you?Have you expressed your gratitude to her?”
Jenny sat there,speechless and numb with shock;she remembered mother’s familiar face and weathered hands.“Why did I not think of that?A bowl of noodles from a stranger made me feel indebted,but I have never thanked my mum for what she has done for me.”
On the way home,Jenny made up her mind to make an apology to her mother for her rudeness as soon as she arrived home. 注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语; 3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph1:
Approachingthedoorway,Jennytookadeepbreath._______________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph2:
Agentletouchonherhaircalledhermindback.
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阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
Jack,a clerk at the local bank,was wandering alone on the street.It was a cold,silent winter night.His mind was on his wife Linda,who had been in a car accident two months ago and was now lying in a hospital bed,waiting for more money for her operation.Jack had sold everything he
had,and he had tried his best to borrow money from all the people and banks he could.But the real world is cruel.A large amount of money was still needed.To Jack,it would mean a great deal of suffering to see his wife die without any help.“I have only one option left,”Jack said to himself.Then he went to the bank,his workplace,again.For several days,he observed the bank and planned a theft.Then next day,he went to work as usual.Everything seemed normal:he joked with his workmates and helped his clients as he always did.But no one noticed that he had brought a bigger suitcase to work,instead of the small one he always carried.At 5:00 pm,the bank closed,and the clerks and the guards had all gone home.However,at that moment,Jack was in the bathroom,and the guards didn’t notice him,of course.When the noises coming from the street were replaced by silence and everything turned dark,Jack came out from the bathroom.He first cut the lines of the alarms and monitors with tools from his new suitcase.He was all too familiar with the equipment since he had been working there for 8 years and had been studying the security system for the past 30 days.Using a special key and some other tools,he then easily opened the doors of the safes.The bank’s security system wasn’t very good,which allowed Jack to take a lot of money.Several minutes later,Jack left the bank with a heavy bag filled with money.
注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语; 3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph1:
AfterJackhadbeengonefromthebankforawhile,thealarmsbegantoring.__________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph2:
Butthemostunluckymanwasthemanagerofthebank,anoldman.________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________
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