写作技法点拨系列
十、揣摩内涵, 从容掌控图画作文
类型一图画故事类 一、设题要求
要求考生根据所给的图画, 写出一篇故事完整、句子通顺、语意连贯、符合图意的短文。在命题形式上除了图画的提示外, 一般还有中英文提示。着重考查考生的观察能力、分析能力和语言表达能力。作文难点是审题, 切忌遗漏要点。 二、常用句型
1. As is described in the picture, . . .
2. In order to. . . , we made up our minds to. . .
3. At first. . . then. . . five minutes later. . . finally/in the end/at last. . . 4. Some. . . ; some. . . ; others. . .
5. If such measures were not taken, the problem of. . . would be more serious. 6. It hit that. . . 类型二漫画类
一、高考漫画作文主要类型
1. 讽刺型漫画, 引发考生对不良社会现象的思考;
2. 哲理型漫画, 通过形象或抽象的图画, 讲述道理引发哲理性思考。 此类作文首先要描述图画, 然后分析图画所反映的问题或讲述的道理, 最后联系实际发表自己的观点。 二、常用句型
1. From the picture, we can see. . .
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2. The picture shows a common phenomenon. . .
3. It seems very ridiculous that. . . However, this kind of story is performed everywhere.
4. As far as I’m concerned/In my opinion/From my point of view. . . 5. It can be seen/concluded from the cartoon that. . .
(2019·北京高考改编)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们班上周组织了一次以“劳动最光荣”为主题的社会实践活动。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序, 写一篇英文周记, 记述整个过程。
注意: 词数不少于60。 提示词: 西瓜watermelon
文章体裁 中心人称 主要时态 信息要点
记叙文 第一人称 一般过去时
1. 宣传动员 2. 准备行李
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3. 体验劳动 4. 回家分享
1. 词汇
汉语 强调
一般词汇 emphasize
高级词汇
stress the importance of on doing/ the moment as quickly as possible pack up the baggage
一……就…… as soon as 快速地 收拾行李
2. 句式
quickly pack
①在班会上, 我们的老师告诉我们那个项目的主题是“劳动最光荣”。
一般表达: At the class meeting, our teacher told us about the programme, and its theme was “Working is most beautiful”.
高级表达: At the class meeting, our teacher told us about the programme whose theme was “Working is most beautiful”. ②一到家, 我就赶快收拾行李。
一般表达: As soon as I got home, I packed for the trip quickly.
高级表达: On getting/The moment I got home, I couldn’t help packing up my luggage for the trip as quickly as possible.
③在劳动时, 我意识到烈日下在田野里劳动很辛苦。
一般表达: While I was working, I realized working in the fields was hard under a hot sun.
高级表达: While working, I realized how hard it was to work in the fields under a hot sun.
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