2014高考英语短文改错抓分练习(12)

2014高考英语短文改错抓分练习（12）及答案

第一节 短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文，文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(\\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

No body language can be much attractive than smiling.Not only can beautiful smile make ourselves happily, but also it makes others feel delighted.Sometimes a smile can be very powerful that it gives people great courage to face and defeat disasters.A little boy naming Lang Zheng, for example, impressed and encouraged a great many of people when the terrible earthquake happened in Wenchuan.Right after he is rescued by the soldiers from the ruins, he saluted and smiled to them.His smile was like sunshine which warmed people who were sad.It is safe to say that without smile our life would be colourless and difficulty.It is suggested that we smiled as much as possible.Try it but everything will be different!

【参考答案】

No body language can be much attractive than smiling.Not only can ∧ beautiful smile

moreamake ourselves happily,but also it makes others feel delighted.Sometimes a smile can

happybe very powerful that it gives people great courage to face and defeat disasters.A

solittle boy naming Lang Zheng, for example, impressed and encouraged a great many of namedpeople when the terrible earthquake happened in Wenchuan.Right after he is rescued

wasby the soldiers from the ruins, he saluted and smiled to them.His smile was like sunshine which warmed people who were sad.It is safe to say that without smile our life would be colourless and difficulty.It is suggested that we smiled as much as

difficultsmilepossible.Try it but everything will be different!

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短文改错

He is already a singer and a director, so what is the Taiwanese superstar Jay Chou up to now? He’s a talk show host. His program Mr.J was first broadcast on October 31. But unlike her music, the show hasn’t lived down to public expectations and has suffering a storm of criticism(批评).

Chou was reported be nervous about the first shows. At that time in fact, it is

only thanks to another celebrity(名人)guest that the program wasn’t a failure. In a late show, Chou was criticized for gossiping about Lam Chiling(林志玲), a model from Taiwan, in an attempt to decrease audience rating(收视率).

参考答案：

He is already a singer and a director, so what is the Taiwanese superstar Jay Chou up

but

to now? He’s a talk show host. His program Mr.J was first broadcast on October 31. But unlike her

his music, the show hasn’t lived down to public expectations and has suffering a up suffered storm of criticism(批评).

Chou was reported ∧be nervous about the first shows. At that time in fact, it

is only

to show was

thanks to another celebrity(名人)guest that the program wasn’t a failure. In a late show,

later

Chou was criticized for gossiping about Lam Chiling(林志玲), a model from Taiwan, in an attempt to decrease audience rating(收视率). Increase

Dear Mr. Li,

I’m very sorry to have missed the first two lesson this morning. I got up early as usually in the morning, but when I was ready to leave I find my bicycle’s front tyre（轮胎）flat. I wanted to take bus or taxi to school, and I didn’t have any money with me. I had to look for a place along the street to get my bicycle repairing. Unluckily, there were not any bicycle repair shops were open in the early morning.

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So I had to walk to school, carrying my bicycle all the way. That’s how I was late for school.

Please don’t worry with my lessons, Mr. Li. I will make up for it and turn to teachers for help if necessary.

Yours, Wang Hui

参考答案： Dear Mr. Li,

I’m very sorry to have missed the first two lesson this morning. I got up early as usually in lessons usual

the morning, but when I was ready to leave I find my bicycle’s front tyre (轮胎) flat. I wanted to found

take ∧ bus or taxi to school, and I didn’t have any money with me. I had to look for a place a but

along the street to get my bicycle repairing. Unluckily, there were not any bicycle repair shops ∧ repaired that / which were open in the early morning. So I had to walk to school, carrying my bicycle all the way.

That’s how I was late for school.

why

Please don’t worry with my lessons, Mr. Li. I will make up for it and turn to

teachers for help

about / over them

if necessary.

Yours, Wang Hui

短文改错

Traffic jam is very serious problem in big city especially during rush hours. It can cause lots of trouble. First, people must have to spend longer time getting to our destinations. It was said that much of the lateness for work is caused by traffic jam. Second, wait in the car for a long time can easy put drivers in a bad mood which may lead to more accidents. Also, traffic jam cause serious air pollution. But it is necessary to deal with this problem.

In my opinion, the government should develop public transport. It should be cheaper and more convenient and comfortable. Besides, we should use public transport

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as much as possibly. It’s better to share cars during rush hours. In a word, we should take any possible measures to reduce the use of cars.

参考答案：

Traffic jam is ∧ very serious problem in big city especially during rush hours.

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cities

It can cause lots of trouble. First, people must have to spend longer time getting their is

to our destinations. It was said that much of the lateness for work is caused by traffic waiting easily

jam. Second, wait in the car for a long time can easy put drivers in a bad mood which causes So

may lead to more accidents. Also, traffic jam cause serious air pollution. But it is necessary to deal with this problem.

第一节 短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文，文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(\\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

This morning on my way to school I was deep moved by what I saw outside a bank.An old man was counting his money in the front of the bank.Suddenly a young man came running and knocked him down.To make things bad，his money was lying in all directions.In no time the people around rush to pick the money up while the old man stood there，not know what to do.Surprisingly，everyone gave back the money they had just picked.The old man counted the money again and found that not a single bill was missed.To my great joy，there are now a lot of nice people in your life.It's true what honesty is more important than money.

参考答案

This morning on my way to school I was deep moved by what I saw outside a bank.An deeply - 4 -