What else should I do? Please write back soon. Yours, John Dear John,
I’m glad you will come to China. ▲ ▲ ▲ ▲ ▲
I hope you will enjoy your stay in China. Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear John,
I'm glad you will come to China. We Chinese people are kind and friendly. You don't need to worry about it.
If possible, you can prepare a small gift, like a key ring or a hat with the symbols of your country. It's not necessary to buy anything expensive. Also, you can help with some housework, such as washing the dishes, making the bed . The family members will be very grateful for that. In addition, I suggest you learn a little Chinese that means \so on, which may play a useful role during your stay. What's more, read some books about Chinese customs before coming here. Try not to make any misunderstandings. I hope you will enjoy your stay in China. Yours, Li Hua
【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，回信给约翰，建议他在中国家庭生活应注意的事项。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，二人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I'm glad……，We Chinese people are……，you can…….，It's not necessary to do sth, I suggest……，I hope……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头告诉他不必担心，接下来回答他的问题以及建议他如何做，最后希望他在中国玩得高兴。此处need to do sth, worry about, the symbol of, help with, such as, be grateful for, in addition, play a role, what’s more等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
11．（·湖南长郡中学中考模拟）书面表达
76,近年来，科技的进步正在逐步影响着人们的日常生活。年5月，来'自一带一 路”沿线的20国青年评选出了中国的“新四大发明”:高铁、支付宝、共享单车和网购。 假如你是李华，你的朋友Lisa是英国的一名初中生，她对我们的“新四大发明”很感 兴趣。请你给她写一封电子邮件，具体内容如下：1.介绍共享单车和网购的基本情况并谈谈你的看法和评价 2.
邀请她下个月参加你校科技节，将展出学生制作的各类材质的小模型。
注意:1.词数80词左右，开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数 2.可适当增加细节，使行文流畅。
参考词汇:共享单车:shared bikes Dear Lisa,
I’m glad to hear that you’re so interested in our “Four New”Inventions”______________________ Yours Li Hua
【答案】Dear Lisa,
I’m glad to hear that you’re so interested in our “Four New Inventions” Let me tell you about them.They are high-speed railways,electronic payments,shared bicycles and online shopping.We travel by high-speed railways.They are very quick.We use electronic payments when we use online shopping,When we want to go somewhere by bike,we use shared bicycles.We use our mobile phone to unlock the shared bicycle.It is convenient and cheap.There is no pollution and oil cost.We can also keep healthy when we ride it.There will be the Science Festival in our school.It will show all kinds of models that students make.I hope you will come to visit them. Yours Li Hua 【解析】 【详解】
这篇作文要求我们根据提示来介绍中国的新四大发明，题目中给出了具体的写作的内容，我们应将这些内容用正确的英语表达出来。首先应注意在短文中要包括题目中给出的所有信息，不能遗漏要点，并注意表达的层次和条理。其次要注意使用正确的时态和人称，通过分析可知，这篇短文应使用一般现在时态，谓语动词用原形，特别要注意谓语动词形式要变化，这是一个写作的难点。最后要注意英语的表达习惯，英语句式与汉语在语序和词性上的使用是不同的，要注意不能逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语。应从句子整体考虑，使用恰当的词汇和句型来表达，语法规范。还应使用一些较好的句型或者短语，增强文章的表现力。
12．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达
假设你是第一中学的一名学生，5月21日是学校开放日，学校邀请家长来校听课参观。你作为志愿者参与了开放日活动。请你以“The School Open Day”为题，写一篇90词左右的英文报道。内容提示如下：
1．家长们听了很多堂课，高度评价老师精湛的教学技能； 2．王芳老师的音乐课有趣而活跃，成功地融合了传统和现代音乐；
3．张阳老师的历史课把抗日战争栩栩如生地呈现到课堂上，讲述了八十年前中华儿女如何与日本鬼子勇敢战斗； 4．家长们都感到……并希望……
（参考词汇：抗日战争the Anti-Japanese War）
注意事项：
1．文章须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯； 2．第4个要点须用2至3句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥； 3．词数90左右．倡议书的开头已在答题卡上给出。不计入总词数； 4．文章内容必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。 The School Open Day
No. 1 Middle School had a school open day on May 21st．Many parents were invited to your school．I showed them around our beautiful school and watched the raising of the national flag together．
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____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】The School Open Day
No. 1 Middle School had a school open day on May 21st．Many parents were invited to our school．I showed them around our beautiful school and watched the raising of the national flag together．Parents listened to many lessons．They spoke very highly of teachers' excellent teaching skills．The music lesson given by Wang Fang was lively and interesting．She successfully brought traditional music and modern music together．The history lesson given by Zhang Yang brought the Anti-Japanese War alive in class．He told us how Chinese people fought against Japanese bravely 80 years ago．Parents all felt fantastic and were moved by the teachers' hard work and personal charm．They hope that they can have more chances to join in different school activities．
【解析】这篇作文以学校开放日为题，邀请家长来校听课参观，你作为志愿者参与了学校开放日活动。根据材料写一篇短文。内容包括：1. 你带领家长参观美丽的校园，并一同观看了升国旗仪式。2. 家长们听了很多堂课，高度评价老师精湛的教学技能。3. 王芳老师的音乐课有趣而活跃，成功地融合了传统和现代音乐。4. 张阳老师的历史课把抗日战争栩栩如生呈现到课堂上，讲述了七十年前中华儿女如何与日本鬼子勇敢战斗。5. 家长们都感到……并希望……最后要点的内容须用2到3句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥。写作时，我们可以根据需要将这些信息进行合理的整理与安排，使文章的意思衔接更自然。当然要尽量使用一些好的句型和连词，使文章上下文连贯自然合理。
13．（·山东中考模拟）书面表达 请务必将短文写在答题卡的相应位置！
父母为我们付出了很多，你又做过哪些事情来表达自己的感恩之情呢？请叙述你为父母做过的一件事，并谈谈你的感受。
要求: 1. 条理清楚，书写规范整洁，100个词左右。 2. 文中不得出现真实的地区、学校及姓名。
【答案】There’s no doubt that parents have given me a lot since I was born. With their care, I
grow up happily. So I think it is necessary to do something special for them to show my gratitude. Both of my parents love music. So it would be a great idea to buy a wonderful CD for them. Last Sunday, I went to a bookstore and chose one among the top 10. While we were having dinner together, I played the CD. It was beautiful. With great joy, they gave me a warm hug and a big smile. I felt very sweet.
I was really proud that I did something for my parents. Their smiles were the best encouragement for me. I made up my mind to do things like this more often.
【解析】考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。运用适当的短语表达中心思想，增加作文的可读性。完成提示词时也要符合事实。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
14．（·湖北中考模拟）书面表达
随着网络的不断发展，传统的学习模式受到冲击。“网上学习（online learning）”这一新的学习模式备受青睐。假设你是陈欣，最近某英文杂志正在讨论中学生是否应该通过网络进行在线学习。以下是你所在班级的讨论情况，请你给该报投稿，反映讨论结果并谈谈你自己的想法。 提示： 观点 赞成 1. 网上资源（resource）丰富 理由 2. 可以自由（freedom）选择学习内容和时间 反对 1. 网上信息太多，有些不真实 2. 长时间用电脑对眼睛不好 要求：1、词数不少于80词，稿件的开头已给出，不计入总词数，可适当发挥。 2、向子结构准确，要点齐全，内容合理，篇章结构连贯； 3、文中不能出现真实姓名、校名、地名。 Dear Editor,
Recently, our class had a discussion about whether students should learn on the Internet. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Editor,
Recently, our class had a discussion about whether students should learn on the Internet. Some students support it. They think online learning is much more convenient and the Internet is filled with useful resources. What’s more, learners have freedom to decide what and when to learn. However, some students don’t welcome it. Although, they think there’s a lot of information
on the Internet. Some information isn’t true. Also, spending a long time searching information online is bad for their eyes.
In my opinion, every coin has two ideas. I think it’s better to use both the traditional way of learning and online learning. Students should use the Internet properly.
【解析】试题分析：本篇书面表达以“网上学习（online learning）”为话题，结合本题所给的写作信息，阐述网上学习的两种不同的观点。根据内容提示可知本文应运用一般现在时态，注意一些常见句式的应用。写作中注意连词、固定短语的交替使用，使文意连接紧密，还要注意使用丰富的语句，注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，最后最好要表达出自己的感想和看法。
写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。文中more convenient，is filled with, what’s more, a lot of ，however, although, spend... doing...,be bad for, in my opinion等词（组）恰当使用，使上下文意连接紧密；文中还多处使用了宾语从句、让步状语从句、动名词作主语等句式，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，值得学习。
15．（·南通市通州区金北学校中考模拟）书面表达
阳光中学为了丰富学生的课余生活，每学期都会举办各种各样的活动。请根据提示，为校报写一篇有关的报道。
篮球比赛 活动 内容 航模制作 英语演讲 …… 你的 观点 强身健体, 团队精神 了解科学, 培养兴趣 练习口语, 提高能力 …… ……（请自拟至少两点内容） 注意：
1. 必须包含所给要点, 省略号部分适当发挥, 不要简单翻译； 2. 词数90左右, 开头已写好, 不计入总词数； 3. 表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
In order to make our school life more colourful, there are all kinds of activities for us to choose from every term.
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