高三短文改错专项复习课教学设计

高三短文改错专项复习课教学设计

一、教学对象

泰宁一中高三(6)班学生。 二、教材内容分析

短文改错是全国高考卷的写作部分第一节试题。此题型是将错误置于100字左右的篇章中，考查考生在短文所提供的语境情景下辨析并订正错误的能力。本节课主要以2013年至2016年全国高考及部分省份高考真题为课堂使用材料，采用分解，归类等方式进行材料的利用。并且结合泰宁县的旅游特色进行信息挖掘和资源整合，以求达到知识与情感的结合。

三、教学目标

本堂课作为高三总复习阶段的专项复习课，旨在通过一系列任务的设计和完成来帮助学生：

（1）了解短文改错题型的特征和要求，提高“词法、句法和语篇逻辑”能力； （2）熟悉解题思路，深入地理解和内化课堂所学知识；

（3）发挥团队协作和学习的精神，共同完成各项课堂活动任务。 四、教学过程

Step I: Preparations

(I) T plays a “Name Guessing” game with the students, aiming to clear the obstacle between T and Ss..

[意图说明] 老师通过游戏，与学生认识，为增强了解和互动性做一个铺垫。 (II) Rules for Group Work

1. The whole class will be divided into 5 groups.

2. Many tasks need to be performed by groups. 3. Each of you is supposed to participate.

4. For each task, if you answer the questions or complete the task, you will win points for your group.

5. The group which wins the most points will get prizes.

In all the activities, group competition is employed to arouse Ss’ interest to take part. Participation Total Group1 G2 G3 G4 G5 Step II: Leading-in T shows a picture about the game “Finding differences” to lead in the topic “Proofreading”.

[意图说明] 老师通过 “找茬”游戏引出这节课的主要内容 -- “短文改错”，引导学生进行该题型的特点分析。

Finding differences in the following two paragraphs.

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Mom has a full－time job, so she has to do most of the housework. She is a great mother. Both Dad or I planned to do something on Mother's Day. We got up early in the morning. Dad cleaned the house, and then went on shopping. When he came back, I found a bunch of flowers in her hand.

Mom has a full－time job, but she has to do most of the houseworks. She is a great mother. Both Dad and I planned to do something on Mother's Day. We get up early in the morning. Dad cleaned the house, and then went shopping. When he came back, I found a bunch of flowers in his hand.

T asks Ss to point out the correct usages in the paragraph: 1. Housework; 2. Both… and…; 3. got up; 4. went shopping; 5. his hand. Step III. Introduction of Proofreading 第四部分 写作

第一节短文改错（10分）

下面短文中有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并下面加上 该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后 的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分

近三年高考短文改错考点分布表

Rules for proofreading: 试卷 考查点 冠词 1 1 1 1 1 1 名词 1 1 1 1 1 1 代词 1 3 1 2 0 1 形容词或副词 1 0 2 2 4 2 介词 1 0 1 1 1 2 连词 3 1 1 0 2 0 动词及时态 1 3 3 2 1 2 非谓语动词 1 1 0 1 0 0 主谓一致 0 0 0 0 0 1 2016年全国卷（Ⅰ） 2016年全国卷（Ⅱ） 2015年全国卷（Ⅰ） 2015年全国卷（Ⅱ） 2014年全国卷（Ⅰ） 2014年全国卷（Ⅱ） 1. 改变形式以 “实词”居多 2. 添删以 “虚词”居多 (8:1:1)

4. 改后要保持原意不变 Skills for proofreading: Step 1. Skimming

(通读全文, 掌握大意, 确定时态) Step 2. Scanning

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3. 多“改正”少“添删”

1）逐句研读，细查语法;

2）由动词入手，注意句型和搭配； 3）由易到难, 各个击破; Step 3. Checking

复核答案，规范答题；注意“三不改”： A、 标点 ;B、纲外词（汉字注释词） C、词序

Step IV: Observing rules for proofreading and making summaries.

T takes NOUNS for example to show how to do group work for observing rules and making summaries.

1. As one of the top seven most beautiful Danxia landform in China, Golden Lake of Taining attracts many visitors every year.

2. As I told you last time, I made three friend here. 3. Mum taught me some basic step of baking.

4. Your knowledges of Greece can help the whole class.

5. The popularity made for the grow in the porcelain industry. My summary

（1）单复数的使用（根据句意、主谓一致、限定词）（2）可数、不可数 （3）词性正确使用 （1）When tea got popular in Britain, there was a crying need for good _____ (cup) with handles

to suit

British habits.

From the time I was about four until I was about six, I destroyed each of my ________ (toy).

(2) My parents are glad every time I make progresses.

(3) My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. Group work:

Ss are divided into 6 groups and will be handed out different tasks before class. They are supposed to finish task one and have a discussion in class to find the rules for each part, then make a summary. Teacher’s example:

1. As one of the top seven most beautiful Danxia landform in China, Golden Lake of Taining

attracts many visitors every year.

2. As I told you last time, I made three friend here. 3. Mum taught me some basic step of baking.

4. Your knowledges of Greece can help the whole class.

5. The popularity made for the grow in the porcelain industry. My summary:

These mistakes are the ones about NOUNS (名词). In my opinion, the rules are about: （1）单复数的使用（根据句意、主谓一致、限定词）（2）可数、不可数 （3）词性正确

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使用.

Consolidation:

(1) When tea got popular in Britain, there was a crying need for good _____ (cup) with handles

to suit British habits.

From the time I was about four until I was about six, I destroyed each of my ________ (toy). (2) My parents are glad every time I make progresses. (3) My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest.

Challenge yourselves!!!

Task one

You are supposed to finish the following exercise and have a discussion with your group members. Then make a summary about the rules for this part. Verbs:

1. When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. 2. If you are me, would you talk to them about the problem? 3. My dream school look like a big garden.

4. We must found ways to protect our environment.

5. Traditionally, Tea in China drunk from cups without handles. Consolidation:

1. Today, I am going to talk about what you should do when a fire alarm go off. 2. I was only four when my grandmother passes away.

3. The early morning barking have been disturbing us as we are often up all night with the baby. 4. The CD was so popular that it was sold very well. Non-infinitive:

1. It’s been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.

2. Locating in Taining County, it was a man-made lake, which is about 60 kilometers long, and has a capacity of 8700 million cubic meters.

3. It’s difficult to understanding why she barks every minute she’s out. 4. We’ve been spending a lot of time sing in Karaoke bars.

5. Have tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner, which might not be served until 8 o’clock at night. Consolidation:

1. It is impossible give without expecting anything in return.

2. I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. 3. I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view.

4. Golden Lake of Tainting is a state-level Grade 4A tourist zone, a national forest park, and was awarding Global Geo-Park in Feb. 2005. Adjectives & Adverbs:

1. Lots of studies have shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem.

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