短文改错
(建议用时: 40分钟)
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除: 把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改: 在错的词下画一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意: 1. 每句不超过两个错误; 2. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
3. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
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(2013·哈尔滨模拟)
Skiing is my favorite sport, even though I had only skied for four days in my whole life! Last year my father promised that because my brother Victor did well in his exams, he would bring us for a special holiday. When Victor got straight A’s, Dad said, “I promised a special holiday. I think I should keep my words. ”Victor’s dream was to see really snow. So we flew to Seoul at Christmas vacation, and then took a bus to Muju Resort. As we climb up the mountain, we saw some snow on the trees. We began to play snow! No one in my family had ever touched snow before. We were all like the little children. We picked it up, made snowballs, and threw it at each other.
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The first time I decide to leave home was when I was upon graduation in high school. I was having trouble get along with my parents. I had about fifty dollar in my pockets, and I thought about leaving home. It took me only two weeks away from home while I started to feel homesick. Living on my own is a total different experience for three main reasons: being more responsible, more decisive and more creative. Because of I’m on my own, I get to deal with my duties without being told. I have to be more careful because my parents are not here to give me their advices. In the other hand, I can make my own future plan. I have made rules for
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me to follow.
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As we know, when senior students finish their school, most of their reference books are thrown away, which are still in good conditions. What a great waste it is!
I suggested that we should recycle all this books. On the one hand, recycling them can save a lot of natural resources, which are used to make textbooks. On the other hand, the notes on the books are helpful to whoever need them.
In fact, recycling textbooks has been increasing popular in such countries as America and Australia. We should learn from them, but make every effort to build energy-saving society. In my opinion, it is of many benefit both to our present and to our future.
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Nowadays Grade 3 students are general faced with a lot of pressure, which is rather common. The followed suggestions may help reduce it. First of all, know exactly what lead to your pressure, and then you can take measures to deal with it. Secondly, set up a goal what is not too high, in another words, don’t put too much pressure on yourself. Thirdly, finding a way to relax yourself occasionally. For example, you can listen to music, go swim or just simply go walking. Lastly, make friend with others, such as, your classmates, your teachers, your parents. They will understand you and come to your help when you are really in the trouble. In a word, never get yourself stuck in the pressure for “impossible is nothing”.
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答案解析
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答案:
Skiing is my favorite sport, even though I had only skied for four days in
have
my whole life! Last year my father promised that because my brother Victor did
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well in his exams, he would bring us for a special holiday. When Victor got straight
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A’s, Dad said, “I promised a special holiday. I think I should keep my words. ”
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Victor’s dream was to see really snow. So we flew to Seoul at Christmas vacation,
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and then took a bus to Muju Resort. As we climb up the mountain, we saw some
climbed
snow on the trees. We began to play ∧snow! No one in my family had ever touched
with
snow before. We were all like the little children. We picked it up, made snowballs, and threw it at each other.
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1. 【解析】第一句had→have。主句谓语动词是一般现在时态, 所以, 状语从句的谓语动词应该是现在完成时态, 不可能是过去完成时态。
2. 【解析】第二句because→if。在that引导的宾语从句中, 又包含一个条件状语从句。在爸爸许诺时, 考试还没进行, 所以, 应该用if引导条件状语从句。
3. 【解析】第二句bring→take。此处的take表示“带我们去”, 不能用bring。 4. 【解析】第四句words→word。keep one’s word是固定词组, 意为“遵守诺言”。 5. 【解析】第五句really→real。用形容词修饰名词。
6. 【解析】第六句at→for。for Christmas vacation意为“去度圣诞假期”。 7. 【解析】第七句climb→climbed。文章叙述的是过去的事情, 故应用一般过去时态。
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8. 【解析】第八句play后面加with。play with snow意为“玩雪”。 9. 【解析】第十句去掉the。little children表示泛指,其前面不用定冠词。
10. 【解析】第十一句第二个it→them。此处的them指的是snowballs, 而不是snow。
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答案:
The first time I decide to leave home was when I was upon graduation in high
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school. I was having trouble get along with my parents. I had about fifty dollar in my
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pockets, and I thought about leaving home. It took me only two weeks away from home while I started to feel homesick. Living on my own is a total different
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experience for three main reasons: being more responsible, more decisive and more creative. Because of I’m on my own, I get to deal with my duties without being told
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advices. In the other hand, I can make my own future plan. I have made rules advice On for me to follow. myself
1. 【解析】将第一句中的decide改为decided。全文时态以过去时为主。 2. 【解析】将第二句中的get改为getting。have trouble(in)+doing。 3. 【解析】将第三句中的dollar改为dollars。前面有fifty。 4. 【解析】将第四句中的while改为when。when就在这时, 并列连词。 5. 【解析】将第五句中的total改为totally。修饰后面的形容词用副词。 6. 【解析】将第六句中的of去掉。这里是because引导原因状语从句。
7. 【解析】在第六句中的told后面加上to。不定式省略, 但不定式符号to需保留。 8. 【解析】将第七句中的advices改为advice。advice为不可数名词。
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