86. giving; on B)文段表达 One possible version:
The Greatest Help
I have got lots of help, but my father gives me the greatest help of all.
Though my father is a very kind man, he is very strict with me. He always pushes me to study hard and tries to find mistakes in everything I do. Sometimes, I doubt if he is my father. He leads me to read plenty of books. He says, \be.\exercise. Anyway, we have left our happiness and laughter everywhere, on the playground, in the swimming pool, on the mountains and so on. When I meet any difficulties, he encourages me and helps me out. He is always there for me.
As I grow older, my thoughts change from misunderstanding to understanding. He is not only my father and a sincere friend but also my guide and helper. I will never forget the greatest help and deepest love from his strictness and expections because they make some big difference in my life. 评分标准 第一档:(15-13分)
完全符合题目要求,观点正确,要点齐全,句式多样,词汇丰富,语言准确,语意连贯,表达清楚,具有逻辑性。 第二档:(12-9分)
基本符合题目要求,观点正确,要点齐全,语法结构和词汇基本满足文章需要,语言基本通顺,语意基本连贯,表达基本清楚,虽然有少量语言错误,但不影响整体理解。 第三档:(8-5分)
部分内容符合题目要求,要点不够齐全,语法结构和词汇错误较多,语言不够通顺,表达不够清楚,影响整体理解。 第四档:(4-0分)
与题目有关内容不多,只是简单拼凑词语,所写内容难以理解。
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