2020届中考英语作文热点素材范文06 共享单车

2020届中考英语作文热点素材范文

热点6 共享单车

共享单车无疑是今年的火爆热点之一，它为我们的生活带来了极大的便利。今天，选择的2020年中考英语写作预测话题是：共享单车。

【预测题目】

（一）

假定你是红星中学初三学生李华。你的美国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国新近出现的一种共享单车＂mobike＂很感兴趣，并请你做个简要介绍。请你给Jim回信，内容包括：

1. 这种单车的使用方法（如：APP查看车辆、扫码开锁等）； 2. 这种单车的优势；

3. 你对这种单车的看法。 注意：1. 词数不少于80；

2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 提示词：智能手机 smartphone, 二维码 the QR code

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Dear Jim,

I’m writing to tell you more about the new form of sharing bike — mobike mentioned in your latest letter. It’s very convenient to use if you have a smartphone. What you do is to find a nearest mobike through the APP, scan the QR code on the bike, and enjoy your trip.

Compared to other forms of sharing bike, the greatest advantage of mobike is that you can easily find one and never worry about where to park it. It is becoming a new trend as a means of transportation, which relieves the traffic pressure and does good to the environment as well. Hope to ride a mobike with you in China.

Yours, Li Hua

（二）

共享单车在苏州投入使用以来，给人们带来了诸 多便利，受到人们的追捧，改变了人们的出行方式，但同时也遇到了一些挑战，是国民素质的＂照妖镜＂，请你根据表格中信息的提示，给21 世纪英文报写一篇关于共享单车看法的稿件。 社会现状 诸多优势 自从出现，饱受赞誉。[来源:学。科。网Z。X。X。 1. 随处可见，出行方便 2. 有益健康，减少污染 3. 费用不高，负担得起 存在问题 1. 未及时归还 2. 占道挡路 你的观点 我认为…… 参考词汇：公共自行车public bicycles

注意事项：1. 短文须包括表格中所有提示内容，要求语句通顺，意思连贯。

2. 表格中＂你的观点＂一栏用2—3句话展开合理想象，做适当发挥。

3. 词数在90个左右，文章的开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。

Public bicycles are becoming more and more popular in our daily life. _________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】

Public bicycles are becoming more and more popular in our daily life. They have won high praise since they appeared. Public bicycles have brought us many advantages. They can be seen everywhere so that it’s easy for us to get around on public bicycles. Also, Riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What’s more, using public bicycles costs so little that we can afford it. But there are some problems too. Some people can’t return public bicycles in time. Sometimes because public bicycles take up too much of the road, they are in our way. I think we should encourage more people to use public bicycles. After all, it’s a way of living a green life.

（一）

作为共享经济的新形态，共享单车（mobikes）极大方便了人民，请你结合图示写篇关于共享单车的短文．

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】

With the development of technology, Mobikes have come into people’s lives and become increasingly popular. It is very convenient for you to use. You can find a bicycle anywhere at any time. It has some advantages. You also

can exercise by riding Mobikes. Also, there will be less pollution if people use Mobikes.

When you ride a Mobike, you should follow some rules. For example, you’d better wear a helmet to keep safe. And you should follow the traffic rules. When you are riding a Mobike, you shouldn’t make a call because it can be dangerous. If you have an accident when you ride a Mobike, you must call 120 immediately and do first aid if necessary. 【解析详解】

这篇作文要求我们对共享单车的流行进行介绍，题目中利用图表的形式，展示了文章的主要内容，审题可知，短文应包括三个方面的内容：首先介绍人们选择共享单车的原因，列举了两个；接下来介绍的是骑共享单车时应遵循的一些规则，包括三个具体内容；最后介绍一下如果发生了事故应该怎么处理。学生们可以更加这一图表的提示，列出文章的写作提纲，并充实细节内容，组织语言，用正确的英语表达出来。这篇短文应使用一般现在时或现在完成时，第二人称为主来叙述。写作时应注意：首先合理安排文章内容，注意分清层次和结构，主次要分明，应有具体的细节内容，不能写得太笼统；其次应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不能按照汉语思维逐词翻译，应从句子的整体结构出发，写完整的句子。可使用简单句结构，穿插并列句或复合句的结构，提升作文档次。同时注意文章的连贯，语句之间使用恰当的连接成分。 【点睛】

这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者介绍了共享单车的情况。短文有如下几个特点：首先文章内容完整、充实，结构清晰，层次清楚，包括了题目中所有的要点。短文主要从三个方面进行介绍：首先介绍了共享单车流行的原因；接下来介绍了骑共享单车时应遵循的规则；最后介绍的是如果发生了事故应该怎么办。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，语言准确，句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。短文以简单句为主，也使用了并列句、宾语从句、状语从句等复合句，调整了文章节奏，提升了作文水平。文章中使用了一些较好的句型和短语，如With the development of technology, Mobikes have come into people’s lives and become increasingly popular.、Also, there will be less pollution if people use Mobikes.、When you are riding a Mobike, you shouldn’t make a call because it can be dangerous. 、If you have an accident when you ride a Mobike, you must call 120 immediately and do first aid if necessary.等。

（二）