college life as ever. When they become appealed to each other, for example, their schoolwork begins to show a lack of continuity in its appeal and it becomes difficult to focus as much of their minds on lessons as before. Some students who do attempt to enrich their campus life by hunting for romance from time to time run a significant risk of drowning in it, whereas others who are forced to stay away from it have to give up the freedom to get on well with opposite sexes. Oddly enough, the greatest winners are those who, despite temptation around, remain true to their quest for knowledge, because their hunger for knowledge has motivated them to work even harder to reach new peaks of excellence. For many other students, however, romance seeking is the end of their college life, not the beginning. Para. 3 “It is high time to wake up to what you come here for!” is my advice to those who blindly seek romance on the campus. But alas（唉！）, those who stop to realize it often find it too late to relive the golden period from the very beginning. So instead of trying so hard to seek romance, try to be happy with what you reap from books or classes and try to do what
you can be proud of in your future life. Maybe you lose many hours of happiness now, but you will keep greater happiness in hand. Your task Topic: A Heavy Price for Seeking Thrill Online Outlines: 1. 你对寻求网上刺激的看法你对寻求网上刺激的看法你对寻求网上刺激的看法你对寻求网上刺激的看法；；；； 2. 对你的观点进行深入论述对你的观点进行深入论述对你的观点进行深入论述对你的观点进行深入论述；；；； 3. 你的建议你的建议你的建议你的建议。。。。
The shadow of Romance seeking on the campus Recent years have witnessed an increasing trend in university students' lives. This is an intensely popular trend that we cannot fail to notice. There is no doubt that the romance seeking could cultivate our tastes and relax. A host of college students, however, have enable the seeking romance as the tool of showing off themselves, even the symbol of pursueing satisfactory lives. what'worse, a multitude（群众，多数） of students who were born in the poverty or not well in family ecomic condition have wasted too much
precious time and handsome of money to afford expensive ones to showcase（n陈列窗，v展示） themselves, like beautiful and romantic roses, tasty and delicious birthday cakes, colorful candles, and splendid, surprised fireworks and so on. This kind of behavior has produced negative impacts on campus, which should be severly critisized and penalized（惩罚，处刑）. All the same, on no accout could they remind of thier parents who were suffering from the pain in hard work. Of course, as is known to all, everything has both bright and dark sides. Someones eventurally seeked their ideal partner in mind through proper romantic scene by going blinddate. Meanwhile, the romance is also a superb means of relaxing and amusing can hugely relieve our strains. This is a divisive topic. As far as I'm concerned that we should be more rational on seeking the romande as college student. Wonderful as the romance is, we are by no means addicted to it. After all, nothing is more important than to receive education, so only in this way can we contributes to our future life , rather than
seeking the romance constantly in our university .
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