18% 10% 9% Rivers or lakes Food stalls （摊点） School yards Swimming without adults Unhealthy snacks Injury while playing or exercising ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】A Report on Children’s Injury and Death
Recently we did a survey among 100 students. They were injured or dead. The reasons are different. Here’s the result of our survey.
Car accidents are the most dangerous. About 63 students were injured or died in the streets or on roads. And 18 students lost their lives in rivers or lakes while they were swimming without adults. 10 students were hurt because they had the unhealthy snacks at the little food stalls. 9 of them were injured in the school yard while playing or exercising.
So we must pay more attention to road safety in daily life. Many rules should be made to reduce this kind of accidents. In one word, safety is a big problem. All of us should look out. After all, life is not a small matter. 【解析】 【详解】
本文是一篇给材料作文。为了让同学们认识到安全的重要性，网上对100名学生的伤亡原因进行了一项安全问题调查。要求根据表格中的内容提示用英语写篇调查报告，就中学生应当如何做好自我保护这一问题谈谈自己的看法。本文时态主要用一般现在时和一般过去时，人称主要用第一、第三人称。首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。在写作时，要注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性；要将表格内提示信息用英语正确的表达出来，要涵盖表格中提到的所有要点，同时注意理顺要点，防止漏写。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。
20．（·天津中考模拟）假如你是阳光中学的李华，你校成功举办了“中华诗词朗诵比赛”，请用英语写一篇短文，介绍活动情况并呼吁更多的人参与这样的活动。内容要点如下： 时间地点 5月23号下午；学校礼堂。 每学期举办一次。 活动介绍 今年又大获成功。同学们的精彩表现得到了大家的高度评价。 八年级的王丽获一等奖。她极具朗诵天赋。 每位获胜者赢得一张免费书展的票。 呼吁参与的理由 ......（自拟1到2点） 注意事项：
（1）须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺、行文连贯作、适当发挥； （2）词数在80个左右，文稿的开头已给出，不计入总词数；
参考词汇：中华诗词朗诵比赛 Chinese Poetry Reciting Competition;表现 performance; 高度评价think highly of ;朗诵recite;天赋gift;免费的free
I'm Li Hua from Sunshine Middle School. Our school...
【答案】I'm Li Hua from Sunshine Middle School. Our school held a Chinese Poetry Reciting Competition on the afternoon of May 23rd. It was held in the school hall. The competition is held every tram. This year it was a big success again. All the teachers and students thought highly of the students' wonderful performances. Wang Li from Grade 8 won the first prize. She has a real gift for reciting .Each winner won a free ticket for the book show.
I hope more people will take part in this activity and enjoy the beautiful Chinese culture 【解析】 【详解】
本题是一篇给材料作文，介绍“中华诗词朗诵比赛”活动情况并呼吁更多的人参与这样的活动。短文用第一人称和第三人称，还会用到被动语态的句子。写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文，其次考生可根据表格中的要点提示去写作。文章必须包括要点中所给的信息，但不要逐句翻译，并补充两条个人的观点。在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
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