七、书面表达（共 1 题；满分 15 分）
One possible version:
Poor eyesight is a serious problem among the youth of our country. It’s amazing that the situation is going from bad to worse. It is time that we take the problem seriously.
At present, more and more students wear glasses, over 70 % of the middle school students have poor eyesight. Both parents and teachers are worried about it.
Here are some main causes. First, some students spend too much time reading or doing their homework without a rest. Second, some students even like to watch TV or use computers for a long time. Third, some students may not have enough sleep.
In order to have good eyesight, we should do eye exercises at least twice a day. We can also try to do more sports in our spare time. We had better eat healthy food. Of course, it is important to have a good habit of using our eyes. For example, we shouldn’t read in the sun or in bed.
I think all of us should understand the importance of protecting eyes and try our best to protect them.
书面表达评分标准
一、具体要求
1. 所写内容必须包括提供的所有信息，可适当发挥。 2. 文章不少于 90 词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 3. 语意通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范。 4. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名及地名。
二、评分细则 先根据文章整体内容和语言表达确定档次，然后在该档次内评出
分数。
第五档（15–13 分） 完全符合题目要求，表达思想清楚，内容丰富。使用多种语法结构和丰富的词汇，
语言通顺，语意连贯，具有逻辑性。允许个别语言错误。
第四档（12–10 分） 符合题目要求，表达思想基本清楚，内容完整。语法结构和词汇基本满足文章需
要。语言基本通顺，语意基本连贯。有少量语言错误，但不影响整体理解。 第三档（9–7 分） 基本符合题目要求，表达思想不够清楚，内容基本完整。语法结构和词汇错误较 多，语言欠通顺。
第二档（6–4 分） 部分内容符合题目要求，表达思想不清楚，内容不完整。语法结构和词汇错误很 多，所写内容难以理解。
第一档（3–0 分） 与题目有关的内容不多，不能表达自己的思想。只是简单拼凑提示词语，所写内 容难以理解。
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