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这是一篇给材料作文。某英文网站正在举办以“My School Life”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿。首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。在写作时，注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。 【参考范文】
My School Life
I’m Li Hua from Sunny Hill Middle School in China. I’d like to share my school life with you.
We have many subjects at school such as Chinese, English and so on. I am focused more on Chinese, for I think it’s getting more and more widely used throughout the world. Our teachers are kind and helpful. Whenever I have problems, they are always ready to give me a hand.
School activities are rich and colorful. I often play basketball with my classmates, which brings me lots of fun. I like reading as well. So I often spend my free time reading in the school library.
My school life is wonderful and I enjoy it very much. 【名师点评】
【高分句型一】
I often play basketball with my classmates，which brings me lots of fun．
我经常和我的同学打篮球，这给我带来了很多乐趣。which引导非限定性定语从句。 【高分句型二】
So I often spend my free time reading in the school library．
所以我经常花我的空闲时间在学校图书馆阅读。spend…doing sth花费……做某事。
（十三）【2019 ?广州市】
广州某电台英文频道将设Welcome to Guang zhou栏目，目前面向全市中学生征集“微州”英文介绍。请你写一篇英语短文，向栏目投稿。短文需包括下图所有提示内容。
注意：1. 词数：80词左右(短文的开头与结尾已给出，不计入词数)； 2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Anyone
coming
to
Guangzhou
is
sure
to
have
a
good
time
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Guangzhou is waiting for you. 【写作思路】
这篇作文要求我们用英语介绍广州这座城市。题目中用图示展示了短文中应包括的内容：广州市的位置、历史、特色、气候特点以及广州的一个好去处，并阐述理由。学生们应根据这些提示进行写作，为时内容丰富、充实，应对每个话题进行拓展，详细地对广州进行介绍。短文应使用一般现在时，第一人称和第三人称为主来叙述。写作时应注意：首先短文中应包括题目中要求的所有内容，不要遗漏要点。各个内容应叙述清楚、内容具体。同时注意文章结构，要分清主次，合理安排各个写作内容。其次应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不要根据汉语思维逐词翻译，应从句子的整体结构出发，可以简单句结构为主，穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复杂句式，提升作文档次。同时注意语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯，表达流畅。 【参考范文】
Anyone coming to Guangzhou is sure to have a good time. Located in the south of China，Guangzhou, with a history of more than two thousand years, plays a significant role in both economy and culture of China.With moderate as well as comfortable climate, Guangzhou is famous as a flower city for its distinctive food.
I strongly recommend Canton Tower-a badly well-known scenic spot. First of all, Canton Tower is so grand and beautiful especially in the evening that you can't help being fascinated by it. In addition, when you arrive at the top of Canton Tower, you have such a valuable chance to look down at the full view of Guangzhou. Last but not least, you can take a large number of nice photos in a setting of Canton Tower.
As far as I am concerned, there is no doubt that Guangzhou is good choice for you to visit. I am sure that you will enjoy yourself while making a visit in Guangzhou.
Guangzhou is waiting for you. 【名师点评】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求介绍了广州这座城市。短文有以下几个优点：首先短文内容完整，包含来了题目中要求的所有信息，没有遗漏要点。作者从五个方面对广州进行了介绍：第一段中介绍了广州的位置、历史、气候和特色，简单的几句话包含了大量的信息；第二段是主体段，主要给读者推荐了一个好去处，并阐述了自己的理由；第三段和第四段是一个结尾，对自己的介绍进行总结。文章层次清晰，叙述条理。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确。句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯，简单句与复合句结合，使文章富有节奏的变化。文章中使用了一些较好的短语和句型，如Located in the south of China，Guangzhou，with a history of more than two thousand years，plays a significant role in both economy and culture of China、I strongly recommend Canton Tower-a badly well-known scenic spot.、Last but not least. you can take a large number of nice photos in a setting of Canton Tower.、As far as I am concerned, there is no doubt that Guangzhou is good choice for you to visit. I am sure that you will enjoy yourself while making a visit in Guangzhou.等。
（十四）【2019 ?广西北部湾经济区】
暑假将至，你校English Club 在社刊上发起了征文活动，题目为“My Plan for Summer Holiday”。请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。
写作要点： 1. 学习计划 2. 运动计划 3. 娱乐计划 4. 你的愿望 写作要求：
1. 内容必须包括所给要点，可适当发挥，使行文连贯； 2. 语篇完整，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
3. 文中不得出现人名、校名以及透露个人信息的地名，否则不予评分； 4. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My Plan for Summer Holiday
Summer
holiday
is
coming.
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这是一篇给材料作文。要求以“My Plan for Summer Holiday”为题，根据所给出的材料提示写一篇短文。本文时态主要为一般将来时和一般现在时，人称主要为第一人称辅以第三人称。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思要连贯，符合逻辑关系；要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化，以便使文章更有档次。 【参考范文】
My Plan for Summer Holiday
Summer holiday is coming. I will make a plan for it. First, I will finish my homework. Then I'll read more good books. And I plan to read four great books to improve myself. Second, I will keeping exercising and learn to play table tennis. It's good for my health. Third, I'll go to Nanning for two weeks. Also, I plan to climb Nanshan tea sea. I hope I can be a volunteer. I want to visit the old people, give them gifts and sing for them.
I'm looking forward to having a good summer in the vacation.
（十五）【2019 ?湖北省黄石市】
假如你是国际学校的学生李华，你的同学Tom写了一封邮件询问你暑假的安排，请给Tom回封邮件，告知你的计划，并邀请他来黄石游玩。
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