I’m Li Hua,
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Yours, Li Hua
【答案】Dear Liz Payne,
I’m Li Hua, a middle school student learning in Grade 3 in China. I’m writing to tell you that our city will have a Winter Camp during this winter vacation. I hope to have a chance to visit London Canal Museum. From www.canalmuseum.org.uk, I know you will have a report “An Update on the Cotswold Canals”February 6th, which will happen during the same period of our Winter Camp. And I also hope to listen to your talk so that I can know more about the Stroudwater Canal, the Thames and Severn Canal. What’s more, I hope to learn more about London Canal Museum and even more about the UK. I’m looking forward to your reply!
Yours, Li Hua
【解析】
这篇作文要求我们以中学生李华的身份，给Liz Payne写一个留言。文章内容主要包括三个部分：首先是介绍自己的身份；然后写留言的目的，包括冬令营的时间、想要去参观London Canal Museum以及听Liz Payne的讲座；最后简单介绍一下你的预期的收获。写作时，应根据题目的这些要求，组织语言，串联成一篇短文。通过分析可知，这篇短文应使用第一人称I来叙述，时态应以一般将来时态和一般现在时为主。注意英语句子的表达和汉语习惯是不同的，不能逐词翻译，而应从句子的整体考虑，使用正确的句式结构以及适当的词汇、短语和句型，保证句子的准确性和语言的地道。另外还应注意语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯。穿插一些高级词汇和复杂句式，提升文章档次和水平，使表达更加流畅。
点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整，包含了题目要求的所有信息，没有遗漏要点。作者主要从三个方面叙述：首先介绍了自己的身份和写留言的目的；接下来详细介绍了自己参加这次冬令营的愿望；最后是一个简单的结尾。如果分段叙述效果则会更好，那样会使文章的层次更加清晰。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，文章以第一人称、一般将来时和一般现在时为主，谓语动词形式准发，语法规范，符合英语句子的表达习惯。短文以简单句结构为主，也使用了一些复合句和较高级的句型，如I’m writing to tell you that our city will have a Winter Camp during this winter vacation.中使用了宾语从句；From www.canalmuseum.org.uk, I know you will have a report “An Update on the Cotswold Canals” February 6th, which will happen during the same period of our Winter Camp.中有一个非限制性定语从句；And I also hope to listen to your talk so that I can know more about the Stroudwater Canal, the Thames and Severn Canal.中有一个结果状语从句等。整篇文章语句通顺、意思连贯、表达流畅。
6．书面表达
为感受母爱情深，弘扬知恩图报，某英语网站正在举办以\为主题的征文活动，请根据下列思维导图所提供的信息，写一篇短文，介绍你的母亲和你之间的故事。
参考词汇：give much to…，It's my turn to…，try my best to… 提示：
1）短文内容须包括所给内容，含母亲曾为你所做的事和你将为母亲所做的事各一件，并阐述原因；
2）请注意短文结构层次、时态运用和卷面整洁度； 3）词数80个左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数； 4）文中不得出现学校和个人的相关信息。 My Mother
We need love．We also need to show love．The person I love most is my mother．___． 【答案】My mother
We need love．We also need to show love．The person I love most is my mother．My mother is 41 years old．She is of medium build with long black hair．She is quiet．She is a history teacher in a middle school．She likes dancing．She can cook delicious food．
She did a lot for me when I was a child．She bought whatever I needed for my study，even though she didn't have much money．She sent me from piano lessons to dancing lessons at the weekend．She cooked delicious and healthy food for me．
When I grow up，I will do what I can to make my mother happy．I will find a good job after I graduate from college．I'll save money and buy beautiful clothes that make her look still young．I'll take her to wonderful sights around China．Most importantly，I will stay with her when I have free time．That's what she wants most，I think． 【解析】 【详解】
这是一篇给材料作文。为感受母爱情深，弘扬知恩图报，要求以\为主题写一篇短文介绍你的母亲和你之间的故事，参加某英语网站正在举办的征文活动。在写作时，注意文章文体、人称和时态；注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单
词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。 【点睛】
首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；同时注意语句要通顺，词汇书写无误，不要出现语法错误。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。
7．假如你是李华，你校正举办英语读书节活动,你在参与活动的过程中遇到一些困难。请给你的英国朋友Nick写一封email向他求助。 要求：
1.80—120 词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数; 2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考要点：
1.活动情况简介(时间、内容……);
2.遇到的困难(如：缺少相关书籍、英语阅读困难……)； 3.请求帮助的事项。 Dear Nick,
How’s everything going?
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Yours, Li Hua
【答案】Dear Nick, How’s everything going?
Our school is holding an English reading festival this June. I’m very interested in it. There are many different activation in the festival such as reading good English books. sharing good stories and so on. It’s a good chance for us to learn more about western cultures. However, I have some problems. First, I don’t have enough books. For example, I want to get some books about western history. Next, I’m not so good at English, I have trouble in reading. Would you please share some good books with me and give me some advice on reading? I expect to hear from you soon. Best wishes!
Yours, Li Hua
【解析】 【详解】
这是一篇书信作文。假如你是李华，你校正举办英语读书节活动,你在参与活动的过程中遇
到一些困难。请给你的英国朋友Nick写一封email向他求助。首先要注意书信的书写格式，文章时态主要用一般现在时，人称主要为第一人称。在写作时，要注意理顺要点，防止漏写；注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查字数是否符合要求。 参考要点：
1.活动情况简介(时间、内容……);
2.遇到的困难(如：缺少相关书籍、英语阅读困难……)； 3.请求帮助的事项。
8．假如你是李华，作为活动主持人，你打算邀请外教 Smith 先生来参加本周末学校开展的“英语戏剧展示”活动，请用英语给他写一封邀请函，告诉他本次活动的具体时间和地点，安排了哪些内容，以及需要他做哪些事情。 提示词语:wear, role, perform, judge, suggestions, photos
提示问题:When and where are you going to hold the English drama show? What are you going to do on the show? What will you ask Mr. Smith to do for the show? Dear Mr. Smith,
I'm glad to tell you there'll be an English drama show this weekend. ______________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ We’re looking forward to your reply. Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m glad to tell you there’ll be an English drama show this weekend . It will be held at 8:00 this Saturday morning. We are going to hold it in our music club. All of us are going to wear nice clothes and play different roles in groups. We will perform English dramas. Speeches will be made during the show.
I hope you can work as a judge and give scores for each group after their performances. Then at the end of the drama show, you can give us some suggestions. If possible, you can bring your camera with you and take some photos for us. I believe this English drama show will be successful with your help.
We’re looking forward to your reply. Li Hua 【解析】 【详解】
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