13．We never know what will happen in the future. (三)结尾句
14．As long as we work hard，we will? ◆写作模板
It's exciting to imagine 未来生活的样子．At this time next year，I will be a senior high school student，and I will 交很多好朋友．I hope to be 对自己的期望 so that perhaps I will be 如何学习提高英语成绩．It will be 非常令人兴奋的 to do so.What's more，I will 生活上的变化和成长 and know how to take care of myself when I am alone.
◆典例剖析
Write at least 60 words about the topic“This time next year”．(以“明年此时”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文)
你是否想象过，明年此时，你的生活会发生怎样的变化？你对自己或他人有怎样的期待？你能为此做些什么？
(注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。) The following sentence patterns are for reference only.(以下句型仅供参考) I hope to/I hope that? Perhaps I will ?
It will be exciting/necessary/terrible to?
【审题指导】细读所给的文字提示，可以看出文章需要从以下三个方面来写： 1．明年生活的变化，包括生活上和学习上； 2．对自己或他人学习和生活的期望；
3．为此美好的生活所做的努力。全文是对明年生活的描述所以应用一般将来时态，词数应不少于60词，不得出现真实姓名、校名及其他相关信息。
【范文点评】
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